LyRi-CaLi vs sabotage
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-11-04 at 03:26 AM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

LyRi-CaLi has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-11-04 03:03 AM.

sabotage has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-11-04 03:12 AM.

good luck man.......jus a quick key..........

im leavin this 'pussy' scared like 'kittens' in tall trees
you kno im sabotagin his 'lyri-c' like 'ali'

im like an english book since im connecting with verbs
call me the farmer, notice the way that im checkin this herb

hes stuck in square 1, like we was playin checkers
called out a cat who was 3-17 jus so he could up his record

U from seaside ha ha my cities harder
I hold the web in the palm of my hand like Peter Parker

U got no hope in winning jus like ur sig tells
Similar to cappin Lamont Colemen im droppin the Big L

yo son~~~battling me is just an illusion.~~~because this is my first verse and your already losin/
~~I think theres been a bit of confusion~~~~~~cause before this battle began this kid was already brusin/ (smack)
This cat only gave me 15 minutes to spit these bars~~~~thats 15 reasons to give him scars/
by far im the illest on this mic~~~~this raps with no balls like his pants are to tight/
This is a win this is not a fight~~~leaving this cat under streets lights dead at night/

damn man no time lol.....but there ya go..............lol punk still on phone

damn.....good job......you won ................................

thanks man.............

.......u too for a quick battle............

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Voted For: sabotage

sabotage - iight verse, you had some good flow goin on and good punches.

Best Line - im leavin this 'pussy' scared like 'kittens' in tall trees
you kno im sabotagin his 'lyri-c' like 'ali'

Worst Line - U from seaside ha ha my cities harder
I hold the web in the palm of my hand like Peter Parker

Lyri-cali - iight verse, your flow was good to... and you used some multi's.

Best Line - yo son~~~battling me is just an illusion.~~~because this is my first verse and your already losin/
~~I think theres been a bit of confusion~~~~~~cause before this battle began this kid was already brusin/

Worst Line - This cat only gave me 15 minutes to spit these bars~~~~thats 15 reasons to give him scars/

OVERALL - not to bad of a battle, but I gotta give this to sab - he came harder wit the punches and he was more creative. Lyric you need to work on some personals maybe and some harder hitten punches.

Vote - sabotage

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Voted For: sabotage

sab-
had some pucnhes had some ok flow was alright ad a few good ryhmes n punches hit weak but came ok it was a good verse nuttin wrong just the end hardly rhymed but it was still mostly good i gotta give it a 7/10

l-c-
he came very weak had no stuckture at all had not many punches even when he did they came weakish didnt have no flow the rhymes at the end didnt rhyme thats was wack n weak dude give it a 2/10u cud of done better

sum up-
i gotta give my vote to sab he came kiinda weak put had it enuf to beat the other guy both cud of improved by sab won this 1 1 sided all the way l-c had no stuckture at all sab wins came harder

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Voted For: sabotage

sab-you had much betta structure.....lol u had some good metas like tha peter parker line.........u ahd some pretty good personals also .....flow was good.....closer was good also

lyric-structure was horrible....ryhme scheme was off....u had some aight multies punches really werent connecting keep elevating

v/sab

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Voted For: sabotage

vote:sa

flow was better...
punches was more creative more direct N land'ed much harder..
creativeness was decent....
all around i enjoyed hes verse more....

lyri-cali i've seen much better from u...
ya flow was ok...
ya punches was weak lack'in N un-creative preety much basic...
creativeness like i said was basic N i aint really feel none of ya bars...
sorry man u got handle here but good try...

can u drop a honest vote in my battle with exsclusive.....

This was feedback posted for sabotage
 

Not quite sure how this system works, but sabotage seemed to have better punchlines and diss factor. The structure was basic, and nothing really that makes one's eyes widen in awe, but it was enough to sieze this battle.

My vote, if I was eligible, would be for sabotage.

I'm doing this namely to see how the vote thing works.

Voted For: sabotage

sabo
nothing witty, but you had some connecting punches and disses, the peter parker was the nicest line, but it was filler so that took away from your verse.

[u]lyri[/u
a lot of your verse is filler.. and I seen played rhyme schemes like with the 'losin' thing going on, try to be more original and think of shit nobody has said.

Return the favor please.