Premanition vs Epic
 

Battle Rules:

Crew Battle - Mind.Above.Body Vs P.I.N.K

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-14-04 at 12:40 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Premanition has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-11-04 01:05 PM.

Epic has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-11-04 03:51 PM.

Aiight Im Ready............................................. .

Askin rhetorical questions, “whos nxt?”, won’t want the answer…
Cos ya skill like ya girl’s chest, need something to enhance~ya…(*)
This kid got a bunch of multis but punches got played concepts…
I’d say im shaggin ya girlfriend, but damn that claims nonsense…
‘Epic’, ~‘Thriller’ in this thread wen I merk this ‘paedophile’…(**)
Dawg ur 18 with a girl looking spotty, immature and juvernile…
Fuck confident, u’d put ur house on me if u were a bettin~man…
Cos u know like I know, 4 all ur wins u’ve neva faced a veteran…
P.I.N.K on the straight n narrow…lol….wiv ya leaders name…(***)
Thinking u ‘jesus’…’cross’ wiv me n u bout to ‘bleed to fame’…



(*) girls pic - http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=158001
(**) – Michael Jackson
(***) – zig zag

o.k uppin this

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lol hes changed the message below his name....wen i wrote this it sed 'whos next?'...

just lettin ya know...

come on uppin this....bein mad slept on...

pz

This was feedback posted for Epic
 

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checking the score

^^^^Pre Yes I Did Fam Cuzz I Needed To Put P.I.N.K And I Also Edited Tha Pictures Of My Girl Cuz That Was Old As Fuck And That Is No Longer My Girl

Voted For: Premanition

Askin rhetorical questions, “whos nxt?”, won’t want the answer…
Cos ya skill like ya girl’s chest, need something to enhance~ya…(*)
^^nice opener , fresh concept
This kid got a bunch of multis but punches got played concepts…
I’d say im shaggin ya girlfriend, but damn that claims nonsense…
^^lmao,.....but not hard hittin..
‘Epic’, ~‘Thriller’ in this thread wen I merk this ‘paedophile’…(**)
Dawg ur 18 with a girl looking spotty, immature and juvernile…
^^ok,
Fuck confident, u’d put ur house on me if u were a bettin~man…
Cos u know like I know, 4 all ur wins u’ve neva faced a veteran…
^^meh weak...
P.I.N.K on the straight n narrow…lol….wiv ya leaders name…(***)
Thinking u ‘jesus’…’cross’ wiv me n u bout to ‘bleed to fame’…
^^not bad...
overall you had some ok punches, focus on harder hitting personals n get some wordplay in there, it'll help...

Come On Is A Premonition Really Necessary For This Occasion?
You Wanna Battle? You'll Lose I'm Like A Mathamatical Equation
^^nonsense..weak
Look Out It's An Invasion P.I.N.K Running Threw Ya Whole Crew
One By One Get Slaughtered Starting Off With Little Old You
^^man, wtf?..?
Mind Above Body? Hmm A Minority Statement According To You
Cant Spell Premonition RIght ,What A Clown ,Your A Fool
^^lmao, wheres the punch?
As A Matter Of Fact Kid,You As Worthless As Hang-Ho
"Pre"Writing Like Getting "Pre Tickets" At Fan-Dang-O
^^omg...nope..!
Your Eternal Infected With Tha Sick Rhymes Im Throwing
Forever Elivating And Like A RIver Over-Flowing
^^nope..!
Im Abusive With Explicit Lyrics Watch Where You "Stand"
For I Leave You "Paralized" Better Yet End Your Entire Life Spand
^^nononope..!, fuck are you tryin?
Stand Amongst Me Solitude And I'll Leave You WithOut A Jaw
Remove Your Tounge You Cant Spit And Drop You Back Like A Ball
^^meh...
I'm An Aggresive Mind On Tha Mic That's YOUR Premonition
Left You Eternaly Damaged It's About Time You Call Your Phisician
^^filler again..
My Mission Wasnt Hard Bring You To Tha Front Line And I Succeeded
Ya Verse Was Pointless Was Never Even Needed
^^meh ok concept but played n written badly...
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man this is the worse verse ive ever seen from you,
i cant believe you expected to win against any1 with such a poor level of punches n no personals...
you need to go read the tutorials again son...

^^Fair Vote Premanition Was Better I Honestly Say That So Big Ups To You Premanition

thanx dawg.........

lets get the votes comin..........

pz

Voted For: Premanition



Come On Is A Premonition Really Necessary For This Occasion?
You Wanna Battle? You'll Lose I'm Like A Mathamatical Equation
2/10 self glorification
Look Out It's An Invasion P.I.N.K Running Threw Ya Whole Crew
One By One Get Slaughtered Starting Off With Little Old You
2/10
Mind Above Body? Hmm A Minority Statement According To You
Cant Spell Premonition RIght ,What A Clown ,Your A Fool
2/10
As A Matter Of Fact Kid,You As Worthless As Hang-Ho
"Pre"Writing Like Getting "Pre Tickets" At Fan-Dang-O
1/10....The hell is that
Your Eternal Infected With Tha Sick Rhymes Im Throwing
Forever Elivating And Like A RIver Over-Flowing
1/10..No
Im Abusive With Explicit Lyrics Watch Where You "Stand"
For I Leave You "Paralized" Better Yet End Your Entire Life Spand
3/10
Stand Amongst Me Solitude And I'll Leave You WithOut A Jaw
Remove Your Tounge You Cant Spit And Drop You Back Like A Ball
1/10....Doesnt rhyme
I'm An Aggresive Mind On Tha Mic That's YOUR Premonition
Left You Eternaly Damaged It's About Time You Call Your Phisician
5/10
My Mission Wasnt Hard Bring You To Tha Front Line And I Succeeded
Ya Verse Was Pointless Was Never Even Needed
2/10

ya punches were simple
ya wordplay was ok
ya similies were ok
ya personals werent there
overall u had jus not a very good drop


Askin rhetorical questions, “whos nxt?”, won’t want the answer…
Cos ya skill like ya girl’s chest, need something to enhance~ya…(*)
4/10
This kid got a bunch of multis but punches got played concepts…
I’d say im shaggin ya girlfriend, but damn that claims nonsense…
4/10
‘Epic’, ~‘Thriller’ in this thread wen I merk this ‘paedophile’…(**)
Dawg ur 18 with a girl looking spotty, immature and juvernile…
3/10....Pedophile
Fuck confident, u’d put ur house on me if u were a bettin~man…
Cos u know like I know, 4 all ur wins u’ve neva faced a veteran…
4/10

ya punches were hittin
ya wordplay was real good
ya structure was ok
ya similies were good
ya personals were there

u had everthing ya comp didnt
prem winz hands down

P.I.N.K on the straight n narrow…lol….wiv ya leaders name…(***)
Thinking u ‘jesus’…’cross’ wiv me n u bout to ‘bleed to fame’…

Voted For: Premanition

Premanition

Askin rhetorical questions, “whos nxt?”, won’t want the answer…
Cos ya skill like ya girl’s chest, need something to enhance~ya…(*)

/\ i thought nice opener good punch

This kid got a bunch of multis but punches got played concepts…
I’d say im shaggin ya girlfriend, but damn that claims nonsense…

/\ ok line ok punch flowed aight

‘Epic’, ~‘Thriller’ in this thread wen I merk this ‘paedophile’…(**)
Dawg ur 18 with a girl looking spotty, immature and juvernile…

/\ lol nice Mike Jack punch in the 1st line

Fuck confident, u’d put ur house on me if u were a bettin~man…
Cos u know like I know, 4 all ur wins u’ve neva faced a veteran…

/\ an aight punch coulda been better though

P.I.N.K on the straight n narrow…lol….wiv ya leaders name…(***)
Thinking u ‘jesus’…’cross’ wiv me n u bout to ‘bleed to fame’…

/\ nice closer diss was good nice wordplay

Epic

Come On Is A Premonition Really Necessary For This Occasion?
You Wanna Battle? You'll Lose I'm Like A Mathamatical Equation

/\ opener didn't connect

Look Out It's An Invasion P.I.N.K Running Threw Ya Whole Crew
One By One Get Slaughtered Starting Off With Little Old You

/\ not a strong punch at all more filler

Mind Above Body? Hmm A Minority Statement According To You
Cant Spell Premonition RIght ,What A Clown ,Your A Fool

/\ nice punch and usin his name to good effect

As A Matter Of Fact Kid,You As Worthless As Hang-Ho
"Pre"Writing Like Getting "Pre Tickets" At Fan-Dang-O

/\ ??? blah to that bar

Your Eternal Infected With Tha Sick Rhymes Im Throwing
Forever Elivating And Like A RIver Over-Flowing

/\ filler

Im Abusive With Explicit Lyrics Watch Where You "Stand"
For I Leave You "Paralized" Better Yet End Your Entire Life Spand

Self-Glory...blah

Stand Amongst Me Solitude And I'll Leave You WithOut A Jaw
Remove Your Tounge You Cant Spit And Drop You Back Like A Ball

/\ 2nd line aight but again 1st line a self-g line...avoid them

I'm An Aggresive Mind On Tha Mic That's YOUR Premonition
Left You Eternaly Damaged It's About Time You Call Your Phisician

/\ nice rhyme but again self-g in the 1st line

My Mission Wasnt Hard Bring You To Tha Front Line And I Succeeded
Ya Verse Was Pointless Was Never Even Needed

/\ 1st line self-g 2nd line....a lot of closers are ending like that lately...starting to get played now

Ima go wit Prem because his verse was better overall...this wasn't the best i've ever seen and to be honest both probably could've come a lot harder but Prem was better on this occasion wit the punches both had decent structure and flow and the rhymes were coo...but Epic try and avoid Self-Glory lines they damage ur verse because it's wasting lines because it's a battle not a self-glory match...but better luck next time...and an ok battle but v/Premanition...RTF on the link in my sig (The Song Now Playing)

3-0 two votes to go....


uppin this y'all

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Voted For: Premanition

Premanition got this one,easy.

Came with much harder hitting punches and personals, and his opener and closer were just straight dope.

Epic, your main punch was about his name spelling, but thats how you spell it so shit dont make sense.....
The rest of punches were pretty mediocre, not too great wordplay.

But yeh, Premanition won this, That last punch is gold I'm tellin you.

Voted For: Premanition

v/premanition

just had a better overall verse to me better punchs and personals wordplay and so on epic u lacked alot of hard punchs and personals although your shit did flow pretty nicely but nothin else was in it to me punchs missed alot wordplay lacked pretty much sub par verse and prem decent came with better material this time had flow as well but thats about the only thing u lost in with this battle

return an honest vote preciate ya