frein-ma$ter vs jmsbnd07655
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-11-04 at 05:28 PM

Must drop verse in 90 minutes after check in.

jmsbnd07655 has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-11-04 04:59 PM.

frein-ma$ter has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-11-04 05:03 PM.

yo, you aint a master, you're a disaster case,i'll smash your face,
im rippin up the mic gettin your fag shit laced, i'll trash your place,
you wont even know when to expect me!
you writin verse's not worthy of rv so you cant affect me!
you probably talk about puttin your shit on a disc,
i cant resist, to laugh when your shits too crap to go on a newb mix!
also, how you gonna afford the money?,
im performin lyrical robbery takin your cash, and your honey
that cant be funny! actually yer it is for me,
takin your shit on rv, and gettin a lesson in reality, when i spin you in 3D!

not my best! but.........
uppin..........

yo,

yo,

..Back up off me or u'll get torn-wild..persistent abuse leaves J SEEIN STARS like using NBA ALLSTAR-STYLE.
Just my presence leaves this fake-fag-shook..J's devoured like an early meal...his style I BREAK-FAST..look.
Punches land..u can't sustain-mad-hooks..quickly dispose of this cat..he's NO PROBLEM like BLANK-MATH-BOOKS.
Quickly rip-this-queer..malicious methods leave him like a KID IN A PRINCIPALS OFFICE and have him SIT-IN-FEAR,
I enter war equipped-with-gear..u'd think J was INSULTING HIS FRIENDS the way I make him DISS-A-PEER. (disappear)..

murked

Upppppppppppppppppinnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!

upppppppppppppppppppinnnnnnnnnn.................!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: jmsbnd07655

freinmaster is a biter.......ban that nigga!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

wtf are u saying herb^^^^^.............upppppinnnnnn!

"Just my presence leaves this fake-fag-shook..J's devoured like an early meal...his style I BREAK-FAST.."

"Punches land..u can't sustain-mad-hooks..quickly dispose of this cat..he's NO PROBLEM like BLANK-MATH-BOOKS."

"I enter war equipped-with-gear..u'd think J was INSULTING HIS FRIENDS the way I make him DISS-A-PEER. (disappear).."

"Quickly rip-this-queer..malicious methods leave him like a KID IN A PRINCIPALS OFFICE and have him SIT-IN-FEAR,"


he bit that from hollafront.com

and heres your proof.............................


http://www.holla-front.com/forum/showthread.php?t=7336

look at languistics verse....notice a similarity?!?!?!

mods, ban this bitch!!!!!!!!!!

and who the fuck are you calling a herb......the only reason you'll be able to beat me is by biting off those verses......bitch!!!!!!!!

u got caught nigga

hahahahahhahahahahaha bitch.......u quiet now....................

ye man, i red that verse, i gotta admit it you bit most of that verse! no hate though!

Voted For: jmsbnd07655

jmsbnd07655 took this easy he came ard i like his flow struture was a bit off but it was alright frein was alright did hhit as hard didnt have as good flow jmsbnd07655 wins he came hard had better flow i like his verse way better both was still good but he came hard by far 1 sided jmsbnd07655 had hard punches n way better flow

Voted For: jmsbnd07655

frein, yo lines were too simple to me, and ur structure was fucked up...i think u should work on that...ur punches didnt really land, and i seen no creativitie in yo verse...
jm...(dumb name)...u had some nice punches in there also, and yo structure was also poor, but won in this case,...both yall lines were stretched to me...but w/e...u had some nice mettas in there also, and thats why i gave u da win, cause u had a all around better flow to me...but most of yall stuff was simple...
weak battle kids, work on that

Voted For: frein-ma$ter

yo u was hot your rhymes really make sense keep it up. HOLLA

Voted For: frein-ma$ter

This was an overall good batle but im goin to have to give this one to ..........
I really like the flow to both verses
there was a nice touch to JMS flow but it still could have been a little better with the wordplay, Nice sructure to both verses, F-M had some GREAT line too
i really liked his flow but ur metas werent visible but punchlines were sick
nice battle


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Voted For: jmsbnd07655

Wow tHis was very One sided

PUnchez...007
Personals.007
multi's.......007
Meta's.....007
Vocab......007
Structure....007

So there You Have it folks i hope i helped in a good way ...........now RTF in my Battle against Hang-man Please
Thank you you are so kind

This was feedback posted for frein-ma$ter
 

if i could vote id vote for u came a lil more basi ur structure was better although u need to seperate ur bars into lines lol ur punches were wittier can u hit up my battle id vote but i cant because i dont have enough posts it would be most appreciated ill return the favor once i have enoough votes

Voted For: frein-ma$ter

yeah im votin for frein-master,both verses were kinda soft
like yall werent tryin,um der werent really any personals,tha punches came but master came harder
mah favorite:Just my presence leaves this fake-fag-shook..J's devoured like an early meal...his style I BREAK-FAST..look.
Punches land..u can't sustain-mad-hooks..quickly dispose of this cat..he's NO PROBLEM like BLANK-MATH-BOOKS.
the structures were off creativness lacked but it was cool

*return da fava*

Voted For: jmsbnd07655

not a very strong battle but it was good on both sides i fell jms took this one his punches hit a lil harder his structre and flow were kinda off but his metas were good
best line-yo, you aint a master, you're a disaster case,i'll smash your face,
im rippin up the mic gettin your fag shit laced, i'll trash your place,
return the favor....