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Loveliss Grandz 11-12-04 12:12 PM

testin' my flow...feedbak wanted.
 
i drop't this in V.T.'s elevation room so i figured ,shit why not get some feeds from everybody on my flow.just a freestyle to test my flow.how'd i do?

i leave ribs broken,1 pokes holes in da lung,now this kids chokin'
breathin' stops,death wit' eye lids open,gangsta' huh?guess u died
str8 locin',
i ain't loafin',smoke blunts wit' str8 coke in,coke blunts jus' way potent,
pop gats at hate spoken,leave holes in,like old tokens,slam bodies like hulk hogan,
got janes hoin' and joes foldin',fire melts moldin's,ya' soul's in',
crush spirits ya' soul's holdin',knock u down like bowlin',
flows hot n scoldin',to obtain spits golden Grandz was chosen,
unweavin' webs woven,never sleep no eyes closin',V.T. niccas rides rollin' leave broads wit the thighs swollen,hit grand slams on web cams like ryan,nolan,
gun butt ya dumb fuks leavin ya lump'd up,ur flows go in a dump truck,
whack'd somewhat is ur skillz sum'd up,numb nutts,still alive u got dumb luck,
my rhymes like dirty sex when bumbs fuk,don' get stuck cause my guns' tucked
make u see da light n not the spot that the sun struck.
__________________

intensify effect 11-12-04 02:50 PM

shit was fire...
ya flow was HOT...
creativeness was good...
i felt the whole verse ran smoth....
9.0 outta 10...

V.T mother fuckers
WHATS YA THOUGHT WAS GONNA HAPPEN???

BANG-BANG-EARLY....

fluidmoon 11-12-04 02:59 PM

Flow was good, the structure seemed off, but reading it,i picked up where you wanted pauses and breaks, nice job..8/10..1

Loveliss Grandz 11-12-04 03:11 PM

thank you for the feed peeps.the stucture i fixed how i wanted it then i posted and it went bak to that so i left it.uupppppppppppppppppnnnnnnnnnnnnn..............

¤ÐÅž¤ 11-12-04 04:34 PM

pretty good drop...the content was there to..
id say bout 8/10......

Loveliss Grandz 11-12-04 04:38 PM

thx daz.appreciate the feed.
uppn this

J.D 11-12-04 05:00 PM

whoah, really good verse that, your multis and wordplay were good. 9/10 id say

Loveliss Grandz 11-12-04 05:44 PM

damn..thx.i appreciate the feed goldeneye.
uppn for feed..................................

Loveliss Grandz 11-15-04 02:22 PM

Uppn.............................

3rd-Shift 11-15-04 02:36 PM

yo loveliss where u stay in BK...
i no a girl that live out there...
she stay on montauk ave....
o yea nice flow kidd

Lil C 11-15-04 02:40 PM

good shit overall, no need to say wat i think da otha peeps took da words outta my mouth..but luvin ur shit....ur elevating more n more each day..keep it up...9/10

Loveliss Grandz 11-15-04 04:05 PM

Thx For The Feed Ppl.lil C Wats Good Hommie.saw Ur Pics.
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Uppn..........................................

Speats 11-15-04 04:48 PM

damn right this was good!

DrasticMeasureZ 11-15-04 04:58 PM

nice wordplays and multi'z nice flow u got der


u messed up some parts but either way dis an good piece

8/10........word

Loveliss Grandz 11-15-04 05:05 PM

thx for the feed d.
uppn...................................

Loveliss Grandz 11-18-04 06:02 PM

Uppn For Feed....................

streetryda 11-18-04 06:45 PM

great flow on this fam....you def were on point and went all out to get this and it shows ur skill....keep it up man good vocab and multis too
peace~1

Loveliss Grandz 11-19-04 08:28 AM

thx for the feed street.uppn.....................................

PayDay 11-20-04 11:28 AM

good shit man...i was feelin this alot...except structure seemed off...other than that, good wordplay, vocab...8/10...keep em coming

Loveliss Grandz 11-24-04 11:32 AM

thx for the feed pay.
uppn............................

Artik Phrost 11-24-04 12:35 PM

shit mayne.....this was hot for a key, the multis was crazi...just structure them better tha next time...I was feelin wat you was throwing, good vocab and all....tha finishin line was SICK....9/10......good job fam

-VT bishes!!

Loveliss Grandz 11-24-04 01:04 PM

thx for the feed A.P.
uppn.........................................


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