String9487 vs ..Lyrical..
 

Battle Rules:

6 bars
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 70

Check in by: 11-15-04 at 06:37 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

so 6 bars (12 Lines)
or just regular 6 lines mayn??

6 bars max ----------------------------------------------------------------------------

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..Lyrical.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-12-04 06:47 PM.

String9487 has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-12-04 06:49 PM.

BEFORE YOU READ....I did my bars like they are on purpose



check check, STRING IS IN THE BUILDING!!!

eh yo, u against me, its a pitiless effort
a forensic team couldn't find a win on ya record
yo, im breakin this man
the beam put mo dots on ya face than Dylan from making the band
ya flow should b outlawed, and
i got a "scope" for this bitch, n i aint talkin bout the mouthwash brand
i dicked down ya dame, look down in shame
u not royalty, u just crowned a lame
wit 6 rounds of pain, i'll befoul ya name
without a second thought like I CLICK POWED! ya brains
dudes heart is all jello, i bet ya quiver
and ya lyrics is so "poor" u gon "beg" to differ.. HAAAAA

uppin for votes, good battle lyrical, holla at ya boy wit honest opinions people

Voted For: String9487

I think string took this

String-Humor is your verse is always a good thing, and that punchline about Dylan made me laugh.. But I guess im the only person on this forum that understands your structure..

Lyrical-It was alright but your punchlines didn't really reflect String.. The last line was the best out of yours, but work on them punches, no hate

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Voted For: ..Lyrical..

gottta go with lyrical...his shit was more structured....flowed a lil betta...and his punches were comin harder den strings

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Voted For: String9487

String9487
Punches Was Hitting Target And Some Small Personals In There I Saw With Some Little WordPlay,Vocabulary Was Hott Both Verses Was Hott,Structure Was Aiight

Lyrical
Vocabulary,Structure, Shit Was Hott Fam Your Personals And Punches Was Both There,WordPlay Was Cool

OverAll
Punches-Both
Structure-Lyrical
Vocab-String
WordPlay-String
Vote-String

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Voted For: ..Lyrical..

eh yo, u against me, its a pitiless effort
a forensic team couldn't find a win on ya record
yo, im breakin this man
the beam put mo dots on ya face than Dylan from making the band
ya flow should b outlawed, and
i got a "scope" for this bitch, n i aint talkin bout the mouthwash brand
i dicked down ya dame, look down in shame
u not royalty, u just crowned a lame
wit 6 rounds of pain, i'll befoul ya name
without a second thought like I CLICK POWED! ya brains
dudes heart is all jello, i bet ya quiver
and ya lyrics is so "poor" u gon "beg" to differ.. HAAAAA
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ DAT WAS WEAK MAYNE NO GOOD PUNCHES WERE THROWN ON DIS PART AND U DIDNT HAD NO FLOW




Kid even knows he blows…thinks he's ill cuz he gots more posts…
Still showing herb tendencies…his drop is covered with 'quotes'…
I'll jack this kid…don't even need to…he already lacks skill…
How's country? Smack you with ya guitar…right back to Nashville…
..Man it Kills 2 see you Born…with your natural talent for losing…
Feels like I'm battling a retard…Cuz all of yo shit is confusing…
This fags style is curved…he can't cypher, battle or riddle straight…
Simply brake scales…and leave ya bitch-ass a broken middleweight…
String? I asked tha kid why he trys to battle…he didn't know…
U slow...9487's like a whale’s water hole…you just simply blow…
You spit basic…left this kid wasted…but tha breathalyzer said sober…
Not to mention this whole site went to shit…cuz of you…in October…
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIIIIIIIGHT U HAD PUNCHES AND PERSONLAS (DISS HIS POST) AND U HAD SOME META'Z, AND FLOW

OVERALL=STRING DIDNT EVEN TRIED THIS AN ONE-SIDED MATCH

STRING DIDNT HAD NO PUNCHES NO FLOW

LYRICAL ON DA OTHER HAND HAD PUNCHES AND FLOW

VOTE=LYRICAL ALL CATERGORIES BETTA VERSE THAN STRING

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WARNING
STRING IS IN THE BUILDING

This was feedback posted for String9487
 

check check.... string is in the building...... shut the fuck up

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cot damn im tired of getting hated on in every battle, but oh well i guess im used to it, fuck a mystic rogue- who the hell r u??hahhaha

cot damn im tired of getting hated on in every battle, but oh well i guess im used to it, fuck a mystic rogue- who the hell r u??hahhaha
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This was feedback posted for ..Lyrical..
 

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Voted For: ..Lyrical..

ok structure definately u string work on ur structure buckaroo
flow string by a little not ver much though
complexity definately lyrical string had i think the most basic verse ive ever seen on this site ever and thats just sad lol
punches lyrical strings were played corny lines ud at least think hed use some tight played ones lol u also had better personals good try from both but string u were short by a few miles

i wish people would stop hatin on my structure cot damn. uppin for votes

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Voted For: String9487

hahahah i liked this hsyt man i liked ur punches better shyts good man nice flow decent vocab and structure for a battle diss i like it mann keep uppin for more votes
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Voted For: ..Lyrical..

This Was an Ok Battle I MEan It was kinda Hard to Vote on bcuz Lyrical Started Strong Then Went weak Then bac to strong The string I Was like Lyrical Said his stuff is confusin i had To read it Twice to see wat He was tryin To Get Thru But N E way to Me lyrical Got This Battle
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King~~Dipset

This Was an Ok Battle I MEan It was kinda Hard to Vote on bcuz Lyrical Started Strong Then Went weak Then bac to strong The string I Was like Lyrical Said his stuff is confusin i had To read it Twice to see wat He was tryin To Get Thru But N E way to Me lyrical Got This Battle
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ur explanation made no sense at all??? learn how to type coherently son.

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