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GKillaz05 vs RED BEAM
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting :thumbup: GL Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 11-12-04 at 10:41 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
RED BEAM has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-12-04 10:12 PM.
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GKillaz05 has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-12-04 10:18 PM.
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You think your unbreakable but you spit wit a flaw...
Sayin the same thing over n over again like Tim McGraw... Withdraw your account... before your records an embarrassment... Wont be underground even if you were in the basement... Could write your spit in crayon and it wouldnt melt... Leavin' you wit more holes then on a fat mans belt.... Red Beams fucked like Robin without Batmans help... Dawg lets out a yelp... like im standin on his tail... Couldnt feel your lines even if they were in braillie... You fail to realize you cant rap without a vocabulary... If you punched with a knife you would stab me rarly... Actin like Darth Vader swinging around your red beam... I just merked ya now tell us how being dead seems... |
gkillahs, im bout to rob u for my easy win
treat u like "a lotto scratcher" im bout to show u "the big spin" u aint hardcore...release them thoughts from yo brain im something like "sideshow bob" when im going insane its danger goin against me, leave yo shirt painted all RED with tha BEAM on ya head, lay u in yo dark bed(coffin) U wunna call yo self raw, but ur spam aint beef we can dig deeper in dirt, than athletes rockin cleets u think u somewhere at the top, but i spoil ya dreams steady and have u tumble down slowly like a party full of confeddy my punches'll fade you up, matter fact, give u a taper "RIP" this canada fag apart like a blank sheet of paper im nuthin to play wit, told u once, and now u headed for danger look dawg, mind ya folks, dont beef with strangers tha morale of this story...is how a coward got merked i cant "RIP" u all day, eat some breakfast first quick lil something...vote HONESTLY people |
holla back on this battle people
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iight lets get some votes on this battle!!....
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Voted For: GKillaz05
u won much better quality....better everything redbeam is wack Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
^faggot dickrider...^....upppn
but that was a wack verse i threw out, but i had him wit a better structure...^dickrider^ |
Voted For: GKillaz05
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=159406 could write your spit in caryon and it wouldnt melt... leavin u with more holes then on a fat mans belt.. that was decent... i thought u had the better punches.. flow was good creativeness was good.. not a bad drop all around 7.9 outta 10... redbeam u'r verse wasnt bad but u just aint hit hard with punches... ya flow was basic N average no hate just up ya vocab or get more creative cuz i felt u lack in that part as-well good battle thou.. vote: Gkillaz05 return a honest vote.... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=159406 |
Voted For: RED BEAM
red beam won...killaz rhymes seemed forced and some of it didnt make sense...red had better punches, vocab, and wordplay...both could have worked on their flow..my vote goes to red beam |
UPPIN.. lets get some more votes on this ish.... explained!!
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lets get some more thoroughly explained votes...uppn
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Voted For: GKillaz05
open: Red beam, This is mainly coz i dont know who Tim McGraw is. Sorry if that sounds stupid. close: "Actin like Darth Vader swinging around your red beam... I just merked ya now tell us how being dead seems..." -This close is superior! personal and a hard hit. I bet red felt this. personals: Red by a little. Not much on the personal side going on. punches: Great punches either side. GKilla's best: "Dawg lets out a yelp... like im standin on his tail... Couldnt feel your lines even if they were in braillie..." Oooh! bad boy! killer lines. Red Beam: "its danger goin against me, leave yo shirt painted all RED with tha BEAM on ya head, lay u in yo dark bed(coffin)" Im defo feeling this! win: Im giving to GKilla, mainly cos the punches were harder in my opinion. Another good verse from GKillaz05. |
UPPIN.. we still need some more votes on this battle
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thats wut happens when u battle me, shit gets closed hella late...uppn...lets put this one away
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more votes needed.. lets go peepz.. honest and explained
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uppin this battle peopel...lets get some votes on this
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UPPIN.. we need some votes!! explain em and keep em honest
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uppn, this battle...lets get this put away hoes
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votes needed.. lets keep em comin....
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VOTE!!!!... or I will kill you all! MUAHAHAHAHHAHAHAA
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Voted For: RED BEAM
You think your unbreakable but you spit wit a flaw... Sayin the same thing over n over again like Tim McGraw... who the fuck is tim mcgraw weak as fuck before your records an embarrassment... Wont be underground even if you were in the basement... this shit dont rhyme for shit and ya verse was weak as fuck from there on u aint have shit to say in this battle gkillahs, im bout to rob u for my easy win treat u like "a lotto scratcher" im bout to show u "the big spin" weak u aint hardcore...release them thoughts from yo brain im something like "sideshow bob" when im going insane pic looks preety funny punch wasnt that good here is the turning point u think u somewhere at the top, but i spoil ya dreams steady and have u tumble down slowly like a party full of confeddy my punches'll fade you up, matter fact, give u a taper "RIP" this canada fag apart like a blank sheet of paper those 2 was the reason i picked u as the winner it was decent and the rest of both verse was weak and trash im mad as hell i actully took time to vote on this |
well thanx anyway...uppn...i'll return all the votes for everybody who voted in here....HONESTLY
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Vote@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@.......................... .
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we need some votes people !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Voted For: GKillaz05
ehhh....this was an okay battle... GKillaz, i thought ya verse was okay...the structure was on point and so was the flow...i didnt see any personals...and the punches were meh...next time, u gotta think of more fresh concepts...good consistency... Red Beam, ya verse was meh...i didnt really like the structure, but there still was a good flow to it...i didnt see any personals in your verse either...and your punches were meh too...but what brought u down was the inconsistency...a lot of the lines were filler or didnt hit hard.... V/ GKillaz, by a hair.....it was a close one... i'd appreciate if both/either of u drop an honest vote here: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=157669 |
Voted For: RED BEAM
red beam got this one GK-You think your unbreakable but you spit wit a flaw... Sayin the same thing over n over again like Tim McGraw... ^^okay punch good opener Withdraw your account... before your records an embarrassment... Wont be underground even if you were in the basement... ^structure was fucked up and didnt rhyme that much wack punch attempt Could write your spit in crayon and it wouldnt melt... Leavin' you wit more holes then on a fat mans belt.... Red Beams fucked like Robin without Batmans help... ^^okay punch coulda been better Dawg lets out a yelp... like im standin on his tail... Couldnt feel your lines even if they were in braillie... ^^okay punch if it wasnt played You fail to realize you cant rap without a vocabulary... If you punched with a knife you would stab me rarly... ^^weak punch coulda been harder if worded better Actin like Darth Vader swinging around your red beam... I just merked ya now tell us how being dead seems... ^^ dont make much sence cuz merkin some1 dont make them dead...okay for a closer i guess coulda came harder and punches and peronsals lacked.you did a punch about vocab and actually u needed it too...structure was okay kinda messed up in some spots saw a few multi's flow was okay...4/10 red-gkillahs, im bout to rob u for my easy win treat u like "a lotto scratcher" im bout to show u "the big spin" ^^lol good opener but structure was off u aint hardcore...release them thoughts from yo brain im something like "sideshow bob" when im going insane ^^nice punch but a lil self glorification U wunna call yo self raw, but ur spam aint beef we can dig deeper in dirt, than athletes rockin cleets ^^lol good punch flow was nice u think u somewhere at the top, but i spoil ya dreams steady and have u tumble down slowly like a party full of confeddy ^^haha humerous punch..its spelled confetti my punches'll fade you up, matter fact, give u a taper "RIP" this canada fag apart like a blank sheet of paper ^^okay punch coulda been better im nuthin to play wit, told u once, and now u headed for danger look dawg, mind ya folks, dont beef with strangers ^^okay punch coulda been a little harder if worded better tha morale of this story...is how a coward got merked i cant "RIP" u all day, eat some breakfast first ^^good closer okay punch lacked vocab...structure was good..punches were hittin...kinda weak personal....no multi's....flowed pretty good....okay drop... 7/10 v/RED BEAM peace~1 |
Voted For: RED BEAM
well neither one of you had a multi to be found in the whole verse...............not too great of a battle.....could have been better........gkilla your opening line was weak....but u came a lot harder towards the middle of your verse......if your whole verse would have been like a few lines in the middle.....you would have won this.....your flow was decent and so was beams.....no wordplay from either really.....red beam had a few bars with better wordplay.....punches is why i voted for beam on this one.....he had more of them and his were a lot better in my opinion....after all it is a battle....and the person with the better punches has to win.....multis could have played a big factor in this battle if one of you would have used any.....there was also no vocab in this battle....that also could have played a big part in it.........no hate to either on of you.....just the way i felt......good luck to both........return the favor with an honest vote on my battle and topical in my sig...thanks |
good lookn on that vote...uppn this...lets put this away people...
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Voted For: GKillaz05
gkillaz got this but barely better punches flow and structure... u just edged it out.. i expected more from yah.. but its str8 both dropped pretty decent... keep up the good work both of yah.. no hate.. |
c'mon man...^yall need 2 learn how to explain stuff better, but its coo...uppn this battle folks...one more vote 2 put this away
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Voted For: RED BEAM
g-you had betta structre......but your flow was off.......some of ya words didnt rhyme...you had some played concepts ex. the braile line....... red-structure was aight......blahh........you had betta metas and flow also u had a little betta punches......you didnt need to the link though lol......basiaclly u got this with betta metas and flow and puinches v/red |
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