Notorious Verses vs demobx
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
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Check in by: 11-12-04 at 11:54 PM

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demobx has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-12-04 11:24 PM.

Notorious Verses has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-12-04 11:33 PM.

Yo Dere Aint No Need For Hesistation, After Battlez Retirement Should B Taken Into Consideration(By u)
Leave U Contaplatin' "Verses" Fo Hoo U Facin, U 3 And 8, Dawg I Take Advantage Of Dis Situation
Dis Battle Is Frantic, Ur Verse "DESREVER" Like Actors From Da Apprentice
Ur Ass Been Here Since April, And In Comparison Da System Got A Betta Percentage (Wins)
Unlike U I'm An Emcee Dats Takes Pride In My Record, Dawg I State Da Facts
U'll Beat Me Wen My Record Proceeds To 59 And 50, Like Fitted Hats
Im A Lyricist, Cats Think Im NAS Son, Cuz From His Brain I Inherit It (Flow)
Ur Verse Is Similar To Ur Record, Cuz 3 And 8 Falls Under Negative (-)
Wen Im Battle, Niggaz Feel Fulfilled Like Watchin Playboys Hottest "Host"
U Been Here 5 Months Longer Than Me, I Already More Doubled Ur Post
I Contain Lyrikal Domains Dat U Can't Sustain And Won't B Able To Obtain
My Lyrics Make U Seek Ur Journey To Da "Chamber Of Fear" Like LeBron James
Dis Battle Was Worthless, Best Part Was Da Line Restrictions
Unlimited Lines, I Did 12 And Im Sure It Was Enuff To Create Ur Rap Benediction


DESREVER- Is reversed spelled backwards fo da slow niggaz

I ain't no J-lo I got no halo
When I come through and have my say so
Niggaz like you wind up John doe /
Ligaments tear off slow
You and your chaperones
family crying over the names written on the tombstones/
Time to summone the paramedics
instead of a battle you got yourself a death row sentence
got you fired off this rap verse like this was the apprentice now you ducking shots like this was a westin' (western)
As Im setting like a perm,
killing all the rapverse germs,
blow the ashes from the yearn
Notorious Verse What?! never heard
thats my word
I talk it I live it
Niggaz like you talk all that gun popping platinum rocking sterling silver got you row boating not yachting
but Im blue printing more like Im red dotting a dalmation damnation cause Im black spotting
My mafia got you somewhere in czechoslovacia rotting
Those were the options I had at my disposal
niggaz like you wind up a discussion in a funeral proposal


living with they momma
assasinating pro When I have my say so
Cause you talking that faggot shit gun popping yachting but you pitching

I ain't no J-lo I got no halo
When I come through and have my say so
Niggaz like you wind up John doe /
Ligaments tear off slow
You and your chaperones
family crying over the names written on the tombstones/
Time to summone the paramedics
instead of a battle you got yourself a death row sentence
got you fired off this rap verse like this was the apprentice now you ducking shots like this was a westin' (western)
As Im setting like a perm,
killing all the rapverse germs,
blow the ashes from the yearn
Notorious Verse What?! never heard
thats my word
I talk it I live it
Niggaz like you talk all that gun popping platinum rocking sterling silver got you row boating not yachting
but Im blue printing more like Im red dotting a dalmation damnation cause Im black spotting
My mafia got you somewhere in czechoslovacia rotting
Those were the options I had at my disposal
niggaz like you wind up a discussion in a funeral proposal

the last part on the first one never mind that that was my bad

wat eva nigga, uppin on dis battle, VOTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: Notorious Verses

notorious verses won this battle cause he had more punches..the other guy aint have no punches or personals..notorious came with a personal about his record and had some punches to back it up..they werent too hot though

thanks fo da vote sabotage, Come on yall, start votin

Voted For: Notorious Verses

my vote goes to-----notorious
notorious has this by a long run. He just had a better word play and vocb.! Good job.

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Voted For: demobx

open: demobx: "I ain't no J-lo I got no halo
When I come through and have my say so" -sweet

close: "Those were the options I had at my disposal
niggaz like you wind up a discussion in a funeral proposal" - artwork. Id be proud of this, big time!

multis: demobx, definately, with his first few lines. No doubt there.

win: notorious was better in the way of personals. But i personally liked demobx's verse. the flow was real good, the entertainment was ill too. Sorry notorious

no need to say sorry, uppin fo votes .........................

Lady Demo
 

thank you for the vote appreciate that I knew somebody had to see the realness Uppin for votes

Voted For: Notorious Verses

both verses were pretty much weak....

i have to give it to notorious....his punches were harder than demo but that dont mean they were that hard.....u need to work on your structure and your punches....demo....need to work on that structure boi

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Voted For: Notorious Verses

I Had To Go wit This MAyne Rii Here NV he clearly Took This battle and ran Wit It I mean Do I Have to Explain Myself Look At The Verse Those Punchez And The Vocab And The Multis I Mean Mayne its Jus Nice I have madd respect For demobx But mayne You Need to go N Jus Think of Like twenty Punchez And Jus Go Carzy So You can Get You Some Winz Ya Know I MEan ya verse Was hot But It Was Much lackin Of Punchez And Stuff So Yall Stay Up No HAte At All for Denobx i Mean He did his Thing But Theres Only one operson I Can Give my vote to and Thatz NV
Stay Up

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uppin fo my win on dis battle...........................

lady demo
 

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yo are u serious niggaz, start votin so i could close dis battle and beat dis clown

Voted For: Notorious Verses

Notorious Verses won dis
He had more complexity and a higher vocab
his sentence were longer and seemed to flow together better
they werent just random 3 to 4 word sentences...
anyway good drop to both, other guy just needs to elevate with compexity a lil
holla