C-Bo vs Chaos
 

Battle Rules:

12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-14-04 at 12:38 PM

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C-Bo has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-13-04 12:38 PM.

Chaos has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-13-04 01:54 PM.

Mix Ya Face Wit BLEACH PEROXIDE.....
And As Ya Face Deteriorates I’ll Spray Ya Eyes Wit LEECH INSECTICIDE.....
Bite Off The Head Of Ya Dick And Pour On Some LYSOL.....
Then Make U Slurp Up Ya Jizzo As If It Were ALCOHOL....!
Reach Up Ya Ass Cheeks And Yank Out Some Kidneys.....
Then Scrap Off Your Pimples And Use Tha ACME To Substitute PEPPERONI.......!!!
Cut Out This Niccas Knee Caps And Use It As Uh CEREAL BOWL.....
Microwave Ur Intestines N Hang Em By Uh FLAGPOLE, Jus So I Can C Flyin Bloody CHARCOAL.....
Stab Ya Girls Clit Wit Paper Clips Then Pour On BAKIN SODA... Then Thrust My Dick So Hard In Ya Sisters Throat Her Brains Will Stain Tha Nside of Ya Moms TOYODA.....
Rip Out Ya Larynx And Eat It Like Doritos.....
Then Make You Eat Ya Own Ass As If It Were Meaty Tacos.....
Razor Off Your Prepuce And Smear It Across Ya Lips.....
Then Cut Off Ya Mommy’s Toes And Rub Em on ya tongue so u taste Corn chips.....
Laugh As I Vomit Inside Ya Navel And Make It Shoot Out Ya Mouth And Nose Like Fountains At Festivals!!
Hang You By Ya Nuts From A Chandelier,.....
And Gash At Tha Back Of Ya Head Wit Steal Rod Spear....
Take Tweezers And Stab Them Through Ya Eyes,
Cut Out All Ya Organs Until I Got Em On Uh Table Alphabetized.....

owened!!!

look at this Fake Thug...Watch me Pound Yea Chest...
Playing tennis was the last time U were Down in a Set/
i'm a clown in text...U know nothing of Pussie or ILL rap...
This kid thought a G Spot....was a place where Gangster's Chill at/
U Shouldn't fuck with the net's Rodick...
Your girl got so much cottage cheese....she considered a dairy product/
so fuckin funny to see, this drunk gamblin addict fuckin wit C...
n wit that verse u must've sold out jus to put ya money on me/
flaws? ya verses gottem, rap seems to be ya worst of problems...
nowadays the only tracks u spendin time on have horses on em'/
ya soundin hopefull, thinkin u gon win u'l be down in votes too...
see u should just beat box, since the music always drown ya vocals/

This was feedback posted for Chaos
 

what the fuck with all the chemicals??????????????

This was feedback posted for Chaos
 

would vote but Chaos went over the line limit... was gonna vote for him but cant because of this... good battle tho

if it had been unlimited i would have voted for you because u OWNED him... i just couldnt vote because of the line thing.. no hate homie, good verse

Voted For: Chaos

wow...nice shit man..you really did own him lol umm the other guy did good also but i think chaos won he won in my eyes
vote=chaos

good shit

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Voted For: C-Bo

c-bo
tennis concept was coo, neve heard of it.. the g spot ive heard a lot before... the rest of ya verse was decent, it was complex enough in my eyes to top chaos' verse.

chaos
a lot of good vocab, but I didn't see a convincing rhyme structure which messed up the flow, some punches seemed too forced which took away from your verse..

Please return the favor, check my sig.

Voted For: C-Bo

close battle here,but c-bo takes this cuz he actually dissed his opponent instead of talken about what he/she is going to do to him/her na mean?...chaos came really creative with it and was on some sick phyco statis but it doesnt really diss his opponent and there was no personals.i just think c-bo came wittier
ps.plz return the favor in my sig,to the both of u

Voted For: C-Bo

Ayo c bo had dis shit. U had some ill punches in ur spit son. CHaos u was aiight. ur shit was sick...and i dont mean dat in a good way.C-bo for better punches flow, shit dat made sense. over all c bo had a better verse no hate.v c bo

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Voted For: C-Bo

Aii This was The strangest battle N The history of Battles infact this was a slaughtering Bcuz the moment Chaos Made that Gay Ass comment "Ill bite the tip off ya dick...." that was jus gay ( No Hate .........it was jus strange to hear One dude tell Another That He was gonna bite his thing off) But N E ways its very Clear to see That When Cbo Said only time you down on a set is when you playin tennis i jus knew who id vote for so My Vote is for C~Bo
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Yall plz Retyrn The favor And vote in my battles i mean i only have two goin now so it wouldnt b much to to vote in both of em so plz im Askin Genrously plz vote in my battlez (honestly)

Voted For: Chaos

dope verse chaos i was really feeling it and either way you were gonna win because c-bo bit ill find the link to where he bit it from later... anyways chaos that closer was straight dope i was feeling that.. organs alphabetized= gangsta lol

Voted For: C-Bo

multis: cbo got this one very easily.....there was maybe only 2 or 3 lines that a multi wasnt used.....chaos made some attempts at a few multis but it did not work out for him very well......overall cbo killed chaos in this catagory

structure: cbo also won this catagory.....he had pretty decent structure but chaos's structure was fucked.....it was hard to read throughout the whole thing....something you should really work on

punches: cbo also won this catagory....his lines were more creative than chaos's and not as streched.....chaos kept consistent throughout his verse with his "punches" but i just wasnt feeling them at all

i voted for cbo because i felt like he had better punches, multis, and structure.....his verse was more creative and it was an overall better verse.......no hate at all to u chaos....only love.....good drops to both of you.......please return the favor with an honest vote in my sig

uppin for more votes please

Voted For: C-Bo

dome better punches decent wordplay flow was well i liked your verse. chaos needs to battle seriously for once but i say C-bo got this with batter punches flow and wordplay.
Chaos lost because he needs to stop taking people so lightliy.