Newbies are pointless... (funny shit..)
 

www.soundclick.com/razzledazzleOMB

Word... drop some feedback

lyrics were good........i thought ur flow fell off at times........delivery wasnt tha best.....pretty much u got lyrics down now just fix ya flow and delivery

^word... same as always -_-

^tru pretty much. but not bad, man. keep doin' it and elevating. pc

lol I decided to give you more feedback, cuz I think it was tight how when you said "nobody cares who you are" and shit about pics, I was actually lookin' at some newbie who posted up their pic. that made me wanna give more feed. nah layins? weerd...

First thing beat: nice shit. Is it mainstream or what? jus curious

Hook: emotion could have been better but lyrics were nice. And flow was aiight.

Verses: lyrics I liked. They were real nice. nice multi's shit. Flow was aiight, but fell off on that. You need a lil more emotion too. But this was a nice track. I enjoyed viewing it. lol

Pretty much sayin' why newbies ARE pointless like sinner and so on. lol

but yea, tight shit. keep elevating and droppin'. BTW, you english or something? jus curious. pc nah layins? weerd...

oh, I also liked that "you wanna be better go to a wacker website" lmfao tru shit. weerd.. pc

lmao... word..

its just some beat i found on soundclick..

and nah im from san diego... But ive been in australia for a few months and my accent is a little fucked now ... im here for like 6 more months still...

yea, I could tell it was either English, or maybe australian, cus I peeped Nostra's audio earlier today on AIM, and you had like same accent. weerd, keep elevating. pc....

oh, and By any chance you kno who made that beat? cuz they got tight shit. weerd.. pc

I liked this... ur flows not perfect but lyrically on point... just keep droppin, LOLROFLMAO.. damn this shit gets funny too- You should concentrate on audio, You can already slaughter most of the homos on this site with cool edit and your ego isn't irritating--- "If you wanna be better, go to a wacker site"... word.

nah i got it a while back... it was like... DKN something...

lol aiight. I have my real player on repeat, so I listened about 5 times so far. lol But lol "EXCLUSIVE EMPIRE" <<lol tight shit there. lol keep it comin', and I'll stop cloggin' yo thread. :thumbup: pc.....

i like this shit alot funny i like the part where you talkin bout them bitches votes thats shit funny.. but yeah its hott flow could be little better and on beat but emotion was real good ins ome points

word thanks for the feed..

I cant believe people didnt notice my wordplay.. must have made it too subtle..

"D/R .. i wont say much just that its an ...Xclusive... - Empire"


btw if you want the favor returned, for those that left feedback, drop a link...

not bad...ill give it 7/10...diss me as much as you want it wont get you any where..

I know... you never listen ... :thumbup:

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hahahah LMFAO.............. that shit was great man...... ur overall delivery and flow was ehhhh, but the lyrics make up for it by far

xclusize empie was sick....... so was go to a wacker website...... and ur whole part on noob votes and ur part on xclusive talkin about himself was too funny...... MAN that shit had me rollin

BUT u NEeda get the emotion up...... it aint that hard...... juss sound like u believe in wat ur sayin i guess..... but this was (funny shit) and major props on this..... but i didnt like the bizarre line cuz, wtf?!?! Bizarre aint important!

lmao @ bizarre not bein important...

very true.. but it rhymed --__--

LOL.

took one outta my book.
I love shit like this. We can all relate to it. It's so true.

One thing....
When you talk as if ur them...
U should change ur voice an emotion to sound like them.

Check my Kontroversy....and How many wanna tracks...
An u'll see what I mean.

But yeh....also...double up ya chorus. ;)-1

aight cool.... thanks

ahahahahahahahahahaha, thanks for the laugh, your lyrics were awesome, you have a nice voice, and good mic presence, you should drop more often!!! anyway, dope track, had me crackin up...1

ya but the thing is razzle dazzle actually no one knows what i sound like but you will soon..

you keep saying

"you will soon"

just post ya shit

I agree........ just record and post a track...

uppin... before I go to bed....

yea this was nice but you gotta remember.....you were a newbie too.....lol but yea it was nice....i like it...keep it up

Damn this was probably one of the funniest songs i've ever heard lol...the beat was real good with the style of song u had it had that comical approach and this song was definitely funny...the flow was good and the way u whored newbs was memorable lol...but remember...we all were newbs at one time...:thumbup:

uppin.........................

ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha nuff said!!