Elemental Soul vs jay-smilez
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-17-04 at 04:03 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Jay-SmileZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-14-04 04:05 PM.

Elemental Soul has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-14-04 04:07 PM.

Im gettin really happy now,cuz im about to crack a "smile"
Staple ya mothas pussy lips together so that u cant come out
You must be stoned like a fucken madusa victim
Ya rhymes wouldn't be durable if i put batteries in'em
Rippen the J's outta dictionaries,just to expunge ya race
Ya punchlines are just sad,so whipe that smile outta ya face

Dont i get the win now....this nigga no showed AND he accepted the battle.......

watch u mean i'm still here?

i accepted already just get ya verse ready

Feels like i'm "HOLDIN REWIND" the way i keep "SLAUGHTERIN ya KIND"/
you ryme like a new CRACK HEAD the way u "CHOKIN ON LINES"// (Lines from his verse/ crack lines)

"POKING BEHIND" in tha MIC only way u can get ya "ASS in da BUSSINESS"/
ELEMENTAL claims he eats EmcEEs....he does he "SWALLOWS my CHLIDREN"// (swallow yuck)

"HOLLOW bullets SPITTING" he shitting cause he aint "RACKED up my LEVEL"/
Elemental claims his CIRCULATIN TRACKS but he just "BASHING them PEDALS"// (Bike racing)

Voted For: Elemental Soul

wasnt feeling da battle ya'll....elevate sum....~1~

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hey...i hit post feedback....but o well it'll get dq'd any way.....my bad i aint try to hit the vote button ya'll

uppin............................................. .................................................. ..............................................

Voted For: Elemental Soul

Elemental Soul get my vote came hard had harder pucnhes and better flow n strture Jay-SmileZ came weak and didnt have no flow or stuture or nuttin both came weak but ES came hard and had better flow n Struture 1 suded all the way

v/ Elemental Soul

HAHAHA WOOOOOOWWWW you said i didnt have flow????

Was this cause i called u a virgin on the mugshot forum???

Damn i knew i should have black-listed you before u voted

Voted For: Jay-SmileZ

well i think that J took this because elemental just didnt come as hard or didnt even put in any effort in this...this only takes someone like 10 seconds to type up...realitically 2 minutes...
Jay had some aiight punches, around that level of a rookie but shows potential...dont worry fam im elevating too..,
elemental go read some tutorials and learn...my only other advice would be to re read your verse before postin...

Return the favor in the sig....much appreciated...

actually i change my mind...elemental soul takes it...PM strobe to get that changed...pz...

Voted For: Elemental Soul

i going to have to go with Elemetal I thought his puches hit a
bit harder
jay yours was ight but i gotta go with ES

vote es

that should make it 3-0 elemental is up...........

what u changed ya mind after saying he needs to re-read his verse an that he should read some tutorials on ryming an that he didnt come hard...

and u just changed ya mind???????

Voted For: Jay-SmileZ

"POKING BEHIND" in tha MIC only way u can get ya "ASS in da BUSSINESS"/
ELEMENTAL claims he eats EmcEEs....he does he "SWALLOWS my CHLIDREN"// (swallow yuck)

This was funny, man. Nice wordplay on it, it took me a while to get it but hey, I'm kind of slow.

In my opinion, this was a poor battle. ES verse was kind of sloppy, the only clever line I heard was this one:

"You must be stoned like a fucken madusa victim"

No wordplays, a few metas, but an overall poor quality. Didn't try to hard, I suppose.

Jay attempted a good verse, but what can you do with only three bars? I'ma have to give this one to him, because of effort and an attempt at complexity.

uppin............................................. ........

Voted For: Jay-SmileZ

that was hott man keep uppin to get a win i like ur ryhmes and ur punches hit way harder his shyt was wack its that simple pot a vote on this
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Voted For: Elemental Soul

You must be stoned like a fucken madusa victim
Ya rhymes wouldn't be durable if i put batteries in'em

^^NICE PunChe

I THinK ElemEntal goT thIS Cuz Just A SlightLy Head With HIss PunCHeS

Voted For: Jay-SmileZ

you got this easy with punches, and multies...


Elemental soul: your verse was not hott at all, the 3 letter rhyming at the end of each line needs to change and you at least need 3 word multies.. get some hotter punches too..
check out one of my battles and youll see.


please return the favor with an honest vote.. please..
hit my sig.

Voted For: Elemental Soul

Break down:

Style: soul
Flow: more or soul but close
punches: really no one cause soul didn't have any really and jay's wack but it goes to jay
personnals: soul just cause jay only atemped punches
vocab: jay
win: hard choice but soul

Voted For: Jay-SmileZ

i think jay took this one with harder punches and more consistency...he started off tight, and ended tha same way...elemental soul feel off near the end(last bar)..this battle went down to tha last bar to me, and that when elemental soul feel off...i think u should work on that...but for tha most part, punches in this battle we decent. i think elemental's structure was bad in this one...some of ur lines were too short for tha way u started off ur battle, but no hate, u still had a killer vote, just couldnt hold on in this one...no hate

overall-this was a nice battle, and yall was at each others throat on this one, it just went down to tha last bar...
return tha honest vote on battle in sig....1