*Troop* vs E Looch
 

Battle Rules:

8-10 Lines since u can only come with 8 all the time
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no aim or pm for buddy votes << yea u dont get to do that this time

Minimum posts to vote: 800

Check in by: 11-15-04 at 07:31 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

*Troop* has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-14-04 08:25 PM.

*Pics up Mic*
*Lets Looch start talk and smacks em wit Mic*
Hault to all Cornish Ambitions Testify to your Truths Please Mr E Looch
Ya "Financial Income" comes From Vaginal Devouring it should be E Mooch
Technique never Duplicated,Cus Pussified Thread Duckers isnt in Preference
Strobe Pm'd me with Rv's Best of All time Vets And Looch wasent in Reference
Your Dna Cells Recognize your Falseness why is your BloodPressure187
Ya Perpetrateing Respected Veteran U look up 2 me like Ten Viewin Eleven
You Never Developed your Cash Collecting Tactics so your still on the Grind
Looch is never Heard Like Mimes No wonder hes a "Legend in his Own Mind"
One last Reminder stop with your Recycled Lyrics they are well Past Expirement
This Records as your 3rd Loss so Finally now you can go into Retirement


...And u call this Ni99a A Vet?
*Throws Mic at ya feet*


...He has Cash movein in his avy=Financial Income
His Aim=Bloodpressure187
He said hes a legend in his own mind
He was supposed 2 be Retired

E Looch has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-14-04 09:00 PM.

put asteriks on ya name only way u be no.1 rv
see my name an u consumed in greed an ^ look wit no period is what u be
small font fits u all ya lines aint really noticed or read
tryna shine off ya lyrics should just let ya s curl grease do it instead
reasearch another disease shit wont work this week E endin ya streak
unoriginal every hour theres 3600 of u and u calim a.i.'s elite?
just try kidnapins its gonna be the only way u ever ran-som people
could own u bilingual puta...
...but slaverys illegal an yet still nobodys around u tryna mingle*
life pass before your eyes when ya electricity blacks out
never a ridah just a hitchhika in a bus stop only time u in a glass house*



*slaves couldnt talk to other people get it?
*glass house is and old school whip
* < those are asteriks by the way

i shouldnt have to explain this shit though


if u dont get the personals or anything else dont vote

lol u are fucking garbage

Voted For: *Troop*

peeepin the isht..........................................


Vote Removed

yea hit the wrong button, Ill let strobe know.....

This was feedback posted for *Troop*
 

yo im gonna dro a vote on this later, wanted to see how it was going.

Uppin this shit on this sorry ass garbage considered a vet

Voted For: *Troop*

E Looch...:
put asteriks on ya name only way u be no.1 rv
see my name an u consumed in greed an ^ look wit no period is what u be
^^meh 4/10...not very good weak rhyming

small font fits u all ya lines aint really noticed or read
tryna shine off ya lyrics should just let ya s curl grease do it instead
^^6.3/10...not bad good vocabulary...not bad punch

reasearch another disease shit wont work this week E endin ya streak
unoriginal every hour theres 3600 of u and u calim a.i.'s elite?
5/10...not very good weak punch...not bad flow

just try kidnapins its gonna be the only way u ever ran-som people
could own u bilingual puta...
...but slaverys illegal an yet still nobodys around u tryna mingle*
3/10...bad rhyme didnt even rhyme nothing great..

life pass before your eyes when ya electricity blacks out
never a ridah just a hitchhika in a bus stop only time u in a glass house*
6/10...didnt realy rhyme but good punch..but not a rhyme..

Troop:
Hault to all Cornish Ambitions Testify to your Truths Please Mr E Looch
Ya "Financial Income" comes From Vaginal Devouring it should be E Mooch
7/10...good punch

Technique never Duplicated,Cus Pussified Thread Duckers isnt in Preference
Strobe Pm'd me with Rv's Best of All time Vets And Looch wasent in Reference
6/10...good vocabulary and not bad punch

Your Dna Cells Recognize your Falseness why is your BloodPressure187
Ya Perpetrateing Respected Veteran U look up 2 me like Ten Viewin Eleven
6/10...good multis...and vocabulary and punch
You Never Developed your Cash Collecting Tactics so your still on the Grind
Looch is never Heard Like Mimes No wonder hes a "Legend in his Own Mind"
7/10...pretty dope punch...

One last Reminder stop with your Recycled Lyrics they are well Past Expirement
This Records as your 3rd Loss so Finally now you can go into Retirement
8/10...very good vocabulary...


return favours in links...Sig

Voted For: E Looch

*Troop*: 1st bar was ummmm....a personal but honestly it was pretty whack and non-effective. 2nd bar was decent but...it that's actually true you should post links:thumbup: until that happens I'll call that a "fake personal". 3rd bar... first part of it was nice but then the 2nd part of it really made it crap because it went self-glorification on yourself. 4th bar was okay but pretty played thing. slightly effective though in my opinion. last bar was a personal and effective and that's about it. overall: 6/10

E Looch: 1st bar..well you taught me something I didn't know what asteriks were until you explained it LMFAO. well I understood it. nice opener and best bar dope shit. 2nd bar was okay 1st part was a nice personal but 2nd line was whack shit honestly. 3rd bar= 1st line was self-glorification not liking that at all but 2nd line had a nice personal to it but that's about it. 4th bar was pretty good I liked the set-up of it. final bar was not good...to be honestly it was whack:)
overall: 7/10

vote: E Looch BLAH!

This was feedback posted for *Troop*
 

troop you came played man...no offense but i reckon you lost...fuck a vote...have fun with this..
oh n looch it was aighht but nothin that was...wow.

^ glad some body noticed thosed atari lines

no kinda punchs either shit was like an 8 yr old wrote it weak ass shit

and im garbage troop? only that bitch xclusive would vote for u on that lame shit

u need to up ya game son your shit is boring to read

i win

Voted For: E Looch

Hault to all Cornish Ambitions Testify to your Truths Please Mr E Looch
Ya "Financial Income" comes From Vaginal Devouring it should be E Mooch
wtf.... naw i wasnt feeling that one.. coulda been rewroded
Technique never Duplicated,Cus Pussified Thread Duckers isnt in Preference
Strobe Pm'd me with Rv's Best of All time Vets And Looch wasent in Reference
lol this was a good punch
Your Dna Cells Recognize your Falseness why is your BloodPressure187
Ya Perpetrateing Respected Veteran U look up 2 me like Ten Viewin Eleven
nope.. not a good one... ti was iigh though
You Never Developed your Cash Collecting Tactics so your still on the Grind
Looch is never Heard Like Mimes No wonder hes a "Legend in his Own Mind"
lol... good punch..
One last Reminder stop with your Recycled Lyrics they are well Past Expirement
This Records as your 3rd Loss so Finally now you can go into Retirement
ok loser.. coulda ben reworded to amek a stronger pucnh


put asteriks on ya name only way u be no.1 rv
see my name an u consumed in greed an ^ look wit no period is what u be
weak opener didnt like this
small font fits u all ya lines aint really noticed or read
tryna shine off ya lyrics should just let ya s curl grease do it instead
nice pucnh kinda weak though
reasearch another disease shit wont work this week E endin ya streak
unoriginal every hour theres 3600 of u and u calim a.i.'s elite?
this wasnt that good.. wasnt feelign it
just try kidnapins its gonna be the only way u ever ran-som people
could own u bilingual puta...
...but slaverys illegal an yet still nobodys around u tryna mingle*
ddint like the end the swetup was goood...
life pass before your eyes when ya electricity blacks out
never a ridah just a hitchhika in a bus stop only time u in a glass house*
strong closer....

loooch came weak as fuck in this battle troop came weak too...but loooch managed to eadge this one out by a few...
Vote looch...

yea uppin 4 some non dickrides on this fake ass vet

This was feedback posted for *Troop*
 

dope drop fam......without a doubt troop.............1

^^^ this kid lol talkin about d/r

u shouldnt recieve 1 vote on that gay verse everything was played out

my name dont rhyme with mooch first off and u said sommethin about mimes?LMAO

your weak go back to frontlines with that verse

uppin for more honest explained votes

This was feedback posted for *Troop*
 

just uppin this shit, too close so I didnt vote :)

uppin

^wasnt close

me=clever lines
troop=played and boring

Voted For: E Looch

This was a very hot battle...the punches and flow were tied, and it was one of the most hottest battles I have seen on this site. Punches were hot on both sides...personals was dope...but E Looch takes it for a slightly harder verse. No hate.

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Voted For: E Looch

*Troop*

Hault to all Cornish Ambitions Testify to your Truths Please Mr E Looch
Ya "Financial Income" comes From Vaginal Devouring it should be E Mooch
nice opener
Technique never Duplicated,Cus Pussified Thread Duckers isnt in Preference
Strobe Pm'd me with Rv's Best of All time Vets And Looch wasent in Reference
lol...decent punch i guess 7.5/10
Your Dna Cells Recognize your Falseness why is your BloodPressure187
Ya Perpetrateing Respected Veteran U look up 2 me like Ten Viewin Eleven
decent meta...nice 7.5/10
You Never Developed your Cash Collecting Tactics so your still on the Grind
Looch is never Heard Like Mimes No wonder hes a "Legend in his Own Mind"
best bar...nice personal..8.5/10
One last Reminder stop with your Recycled Lyrics they are well Past Expirement
This Records as your 3rd Loss so Finally now you can go into Retirement
nah..wasn't a good closer...6.5/10

u had some decent punches...nothing great. but decent. maybe u should of swapped some bars coz the opener was weak. no great punches. had some nice metas. actually most of the verse was meta? overall an average verse.

E Looch

put asteriks on ya name only way u be no.1 rv
see my name an u consumed in greed an ^ look wit no period is what u be
could of bin better worded but this was a creative punch.8.5/10
small font fits u all ya lines aint really noticed or read
tryna shine off ya lyrics should just let ya s curl grease do it instead
not feelin it...6.5/10
reasearch another disease shit wont work this week E endin ya streak
unoriginal every hour theres 3600 of u and u calim a.i.'s elite?
lol...nice, i got it. 9/10
just try kidnapins its gonna be the only way u ever ran-som people
could own u bilingual puta...
...but slaverys illegal an yet still nobodys around u tryna mingle*
structure is blah but woah...that was witty. 9/10
life pass before your eyes when ya electricity blacks out
never a ridah just a hitchhika in a bus stop only time u in a glass house*
real nice setup...but i excpected more from the punch..hmm 7.5/10

locch had a real nice consistant verse with a few nice personal....and dope metas. Troop had decent punches but most of it was similies...

v/ E Looch

[SIZE=4]i feel my man e looch but i rip all yall try me i'm good

didnt kno u could drop weak and still get votes but fuck it
Im still an allaround better lyricist than him

Voted For: *Troop*

Alright look. Neither were.. Amazingly dope.. Troop you had nice structure, a little stretched but it worked fine. A decent text type of flow. Nice vocab, Need to work on the punches, Ive seen you drop better then these in the past.

As for E looch.. Dude, before you talk, I understood the punches. They just... Were weird.. I hope you were just having an off day or something dude cuz I seen average people drop that sort of battle verse before. Little to no structure... weird punches that didnt really hit hard at all. It really wasnt that dope.. At all..

And you can say all you like brutha, I dont really care. Im just being honest.

V- Troop

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Voted For: *Troop*

*Troop*

Hault to all Cornish Ambitions Testify to your Truths Please Mr E Looch
Ya "Financial Income" comes From Vaginal Devouring it should be E Mooch
/\ an ok opener but could be better

Technique never Duplicated,Cus Pussified Thread Duckers isnt in Preference
Strobe Pm'd me with Rv's Best of All time Vets And Looch wasent in Reference
/\ no real punch there more a personal there

Your Dna Cells Recognize your Falseness why is your BloodPressure187
Ya Perpetrateing Respected Veteran U look up 2 me like Ten Viewin Eleven
/\ lol nice punch there

You Never Developed your Cash Collecting Tactics so your still on the Grind
Looch is never Heard Like Mimes No wonder hes a "Legend in his Own Mind"
/\ mime lines are played but after that good punch

One last Reminder stop with your Recycled Lyrics they are well Past Expirement
This Records as your 3rd Loss so Finally now you can go into Retirement
/\ aight closer but could be better

E-Looch

put asteriks on ya name only way u be no.1 rv
see my name an u consumed in greed an ^ look wit no period is what u be
/\ opener could be better

small font fits u all ya lines aint really noticed or read
tryna shine off ya lyrics should just let ya s curl grease do it instead
/\ average punch nothing special

reasearch another disease shit wont work this week E endin ya streak
unoriginal every hour theres 3600 of u and u calim a.i.'s elite?
/\ 1st line self-glory 2nd line ok punch/personal

just try kidnapins its gonna be the only way u ever ran-som people
could own u bilingual puta...
...but slaverys illegal an yet still nobodys around u tryna mingle*
/\ good punch but ya style is all over the place as structure goes

life pass before your eyes when ya electricity blacks out
never a ridah just a hitchhika in a bus stop only time u in a glass house*
/\ closer again coulda been better

Overall to be honest i wasn't impressed wit this battle...both are respected members up here this shoulda been a battle worth talkin about for ages...but instead it was at best average...*Troop* got the flow and structure because E-Looches was all over the place and the 3 line bar although my style was like that once...it's jus hiding a stretched bar...the punches and personals weren't anything killer...but *Troops* 10 viewing 11 punch was prolly the best one there...other than that this was an average battle by 2 vets who are expected to deliver much more...this was my honest opinion...so my vote is for *Troop* RTF in ma sig either the battle or the song i don't mind :thumbup:

This was feedback posted for E Looch
 

viewing the votes.................................

This was feedback posted for E Looch
 

Dame this was a fuckin hott battle, just droping feedback
as I can't vote but E come sick in this shit.

Stay up both Troop come hott aswell.

1~

upppin.......................

LMAO@ THIS

structure =pointless

wierd punchs = creative and not played as u seen when u read his verse

and 10 viewin 11 the best punch ?LMAOOOOOOOOOO

holy shit i aint never battlin here after these votes :thumbup:

i won regardless and if u think not lets go to a mature site i will def rip the fuck outta u any where else

Voted For: *Troop*

wack wack wack this battle was wack..

e looch what was that shit.. only thing you had were a couple good multies and some wordplay your punches were blah and your structure was bad.. troop your verse was shit to but your 3rd and 4th bars were the only decent punches in this whole battle... i dont know what happened but both of you should have put more effort into this battle it was real wack...


drop an honest vote on this someone

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Look at this pussy shakein in his boots

u still gone lose u fake ni99a

This was feedback posted for E Looch
 

dropppin feedback.. besides vocab..... i think elooch pretty much murdered this man....

And your a vet???

upppin and dont vote 4 this clown cuz hes a so called vet
wit his verse that no body gets

Voted For: *Troop*

E Looch –
put asteriks on ya name only way u be no.1 rv
see my name an u consumed in greed an ^ look wit no period is what u be
^erm?...weak rhyme here

small font fits u all ya lines aint really noticed or read
tryna shine off ya lyrics should just let ya s curl grease do it instead
^decent punch here..

reasearch another disease shit wont work this week E endin ya streak
unoriginal every hour theres 3600 of u and u calim a.i.'s elite?
^decent flow…weak punch

just try kidnapins its gonna be the only way u ever ran-som people
could own u bilingual puta...
...but slaverys illegal an yet still nobodys around u tryna mingle*
^bad rhyme here…weak

life pass before your eyes when ya electricity blacks out
never a ridah just a hitchhika in a bus stop only time u in a glass house*
^..tf..didn’t even rhyme here…

Troop -
Hault to all Cornish Ambitions Testify to your Truths Please Mr E Looch
Ya "Financial Income" comes From Vaginal Devouring it should be E Mooch
^pretty nice punch here

Technique never Duplicated,Cus Pussified Thread Duckers isnt in Preference
Strobe Pm'd me with Rv's Best of All time Vets And Looch wasent in Reference
^nice punch hea…

Your Dna Cells Recognize your Falseness why is your BloodPressure187
Ya Perpetrateing Respected Veteran U look up 2 me like Ten Viewin Eleven
^Nice multi’s…pretty decent punch

You Never Developed your Cash Collecting Tactics so your still on the Grind
Looch is never Heard Like Mimes No wonder hes a "Legend in his Own Mind"
^haha..nice punch

One last Reminder stop with your Recycled Lyrics they are well Past Expirement
This Records as your 3rd Loss so Finally now you can go into Retirement
^eh…decent punch…nice vocab.

This was feedback posted for *Troop*
 

wanna see the votez on this cause troop should be down like in my battle but some reason he aint

cuz im purely better than u and Looch
and the people know it

Voted For: *Troop*



put asteriks on ya name only way u be no.1 rv
see my name an u consumed in greed an ^ look wit no period is what u be
^ THIS WAS A very weak punch
small font fits u all ya lines aint really noticed or read
tryna shine off ya lyrics should just let ya s curl grease do it instead
^ decent but nothing major[b]
reasearch another disease shit wont work this week E endin ya streak
unoriginal every hour theres 3600 of u and u calim a.i.'s elite?
[b]Aight i thought this was good
just try kidnapins its gonna be the only way u ever ran-som people
could own u bilingual puta...
...but slaverys illegal an yet still nobodys around u tryna mingle*
Way to stretched and this punch never connected
life pass before your eyes when ya electricity blacks out
never a ridah just a hitchhika in a bus stop only time u in a glass house*
Nope I Dint understand the 2nd line & If your punches dont make sense to the majority of people, Dont use it

I dint think this verse was all that, infact the weakest i've seen you drop.

Hault to all Cornish Ambitions Testify to your Truths Please Mr E Looch
Ya "Financial Income" comes From Vaginal Devouring it should be E Mooch
This was corny no no no
Technique never Duplicated,Cus Pussified Thread Duckers isnt in Preference
Strobe Pm'd me with Rv's Best of All time Vets And Looch wasent in Reference
THIS is another wack & bad flow line plus it was stretched
Your Dna Cells Recognize your Falseness why is your BloodPressure187
Ya Perpetrateing Respected Veteran U look up 2 me like Ten Viewin Eleven
I liked this punch but it was played to the max and not alot of creativitie
You Never Developed your Cash Collecting Tactics so your still on the Grind
Looch is never Heard Like Mimes No wonder hes a "Legend in his Own Mind"
I liked this good punch
One last Reminder stop with your Recycled Lyrics they are well Past Expirement
This Records as your 3rd Loss so Finally now you can go into Retirement
[b]Nope weak closer[/b[

This was a weak battle but i'm going for troop because he had the only 1 good punch... but his flow as terrible... and structure need's work & stop minimizing your font so you can hide your wack strucutre in the future.