..Kontroverzey.. vs Verbal Phenom
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-15-04 at 04:06 PM

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..kontroverzey.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-15-04 02:09 PM.

Verbal Phenom has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-15-04 02:11 PM.

"phenom"inall Tactics Lead To Misery, When Your Facin the Kid....
'Cause The only Time you spittin solid is when Reading my sig.....
And Dawg, I dont even care How Many Bars You spit....
'Cause One of mine equal up to 1000 of that bullshit.....
Spittin Punchelines that'll make you enheirit your wealth....
I was wonderin why he didnt want to tryout for SM,
.....'Cause he didn't want to Emberass his-self...
Hide Behind the net all you want, We all Know your bitch....
You couldn't produce enuff power to light up a room,
.......even if you turned on the switch....
DUde set this battle up without my Concent..Now im merkin any prospect...
Im handin It to you, Like Grade A Science projects...


lol

Voted For: ..kontroverzey..

konterversy wins this
flow=kon
punches=kon
meta4=-kon
multis=kon
opener=kon
closer=phenom

phenom this was a weak battle but no hate
get at mine

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This was feedback posted for Verbal Phenom
 

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Voted For: Verbal Phenom

lol. good battle....cant vote but if i could it would be for Verbal Phenom. not because u dissed SM tho. that leg of lamd punch was dope tho. heheh. good battle.

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daym....dq that vote. it was feedback.

Voted For: ..kontroverzey..

Damn!!! you really mean it with that verse??? you fucking de-elevated so low..... that wasw a kinda weak verse... compared to all ya other ones.. when you was decree wun.... if you are....

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that was supposed to be feedback....butr you reallly de-elevated....

i dont try on text i told ya'll before.............

Voted For: Verbal Phenom

Ok Battle.Both Had Some Good Punches But Im Gon Hafta Go Wit Verbal On This.He Had A Bit More Hard Hitting Puns But His Finisher Took It For Him.

Kont Had A Good Verse.Mostly Disses But He Started To Fall Off Towards The End.Some Of His Lines Didnt Make Much Sense Like He Was Tryin To Force It A Bit.

Good Battle Tho

Vote-Verbal

Voted For: ..kontroverzey..

this wasnt too great of a battle.......both tried some punches that aint connect but some of them did

kontro - u had an ok verse..u had 1 personal that didnt hit too hard..some punches like the light line..ur opener was alright..u did better with the closer..ur 2nd bar was horrible though...overall - 6/10


verbal - u had a good opener..but the next bar jus messed it up for u..it was kinda wack..the parallelogram line was really gay..ur personal about AOD was nice though..ur flow was on point..and ur closer was creative but not very good...overall - 5/10


vote - kontroverzy

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Voted For: Verbal Phenom

..Kontroverzey..

"phenom"inall Tactics Lead To Misery, When Your Facin the Kid....
'Cause The only Time you spittin solid is when Reading my sig.....
/\ 1st line aight 2nd line self-glory

And Dawg, I dont even care How Many Bars You spit....
'Cause One of mine equal up to 1000 of that bullshit.....
/\ again slight self-glory in this bar especially 2nd line again

Spittin Punchelines that'll make you enheirit your wealth....
I was wonderin why he didnt want to tryout for SM,
.....'Cause he didn't want to Emberass his-self...
/\ this was an aight punch/personal however the 3 line rhyme to me hides a stretched structure

Hide Behind the net all you want, We all Know your bitch....
You couldn't produce enuff power to light up a room,
.......even if you turned on the switch....
/\ an aight punch flowed aight but a lil stretched again

DUde set this battle up without my Concent..Now im merkin any prospect...
Im handin It to you, Like Grade A Science projects...
/\ closer coulda been better slight punch but again a lil self-glory

Cosmos aka Verbal Phenom

honest ur a joke...i only wish i'd thought twice...before i clicked accept
look at this net thug...u think u RIGHT, good coz after they'll be nothin LEFT
/\ nice opener good punch

i don't take kindly to wannab thugs, so im using you as a jock strap
i spray venom on ya "paper", look an take notice that you soft "w"rap
/\ self-gory in that bar[/]b

u smart? nah mines a superior mind,spittin straight line like a parallelogram
S.uperior M.ethods are often known to s.uck m.eat, so i'll buy u a leg of lamb
[b]/\ 1st line self-g but 2nd line was a decent punch i liked

i knew that u wern't a born leader...A.O.D fell through pretty quick
i don't normally hit gurls, but u an E-gangsta, so u'll get a full "clip"*
/\ lol at this bar nice punch/personal

i spit deep n from the soul, so i spit lines that'll cause u a heart attack
jus look at ya name, even the debres of letters are tryna escape ya wack
/\ 1st line self-glory 2nd line was a good line for the closer

Damn this was a very self-glorified battle which really in battles don't stand for much really...i think both need to avoid using them...Kontro we cool and all but i really don't think you snatched this battle Verb got ya on flow and structure ya need to lose the 3 line bars this is the 2nd battle where i expected heat and got luke warm instead...both are elevated but on this occasion...Verb Phenom u were lucky to escape wit my vote due to more successful punches and better wordplay and personals...

V/Cosmos...RTF on ma sig vs 3rd-Shift or in my song doesn't matter :thumbup:

up-up-up and away!! .... vote fuckas .... NOW!

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LMAO oh my god those verses sucked, however:


Kon:

And Dawg, I dont even care How Many Bars You spit....
'Cause One of mine equal up to 1000 of that bullshit.....

DUde set this battle up without my Concent..Now im merkin any prospect...
Im handin It to you, Like Grade A Science projects...

the only two things that sucked but weren't horrible
you need to work on: punches, flow, metaphors, personals and most of all punches. Yes I said punches twice you basically had none.
2/10


Verb:

u smart? nah mines a superior mind,spittin straight line like a parallelogram
S.uperior M.ethods are often known to s.uck m.eat, so i'll buy u a leg of lamb

actually that was a punchline so it really beat his ENTIRE verse even though it sucked.
you need to work on: punches & flow, the rest will be there you have a grasp on the battling idea. Stop talking about yourself
3/10


Vote: Verb.

..... up-up-up and away..... get votin on this... NOW!

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Voted For: Verbal Phenom

checkin polls,............................................ .

This was feedback posted for Verbal Phenom
 

Dammme dope battle by both, Just checking the polls...

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Voted For: Verbal Phenom

Ambient:
Structure Was Decent..I Like How It Just Flowed Out..Vocabulary Thumbs Up To That Good Shit Kid..Punches Was There And It Was Tight..WordPlay I Cought Some Of It In Here Liked It....

Line I Liked:
honest ur a joke...i only wish i'd thought twice...before i clicked accept
look at this net thug...u think u RIGHT, good coz after they'll be nothin LEFT

Bwoy:
Your Flow Was Hott To But You Wasnt There Yet You Aint Come Hard Nuff To Beat Him Your Structure And Vocab Was Decent Played Of Of Some Personals And WordPlay Was Neat...Flow Came Out Good Too

Line I Liked:Hide Behind the net all you want, We all Know your bitch....
You couldn't produce enuff power to light up a room,
.......even if you turned on the switch....

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Voted For: Verbal Phenom

This battle was horrible. Both sucked fat monkey ass on the real.
K-no, i dont know if you've lost your touch but damn that was whack that line about...........anything was whack and not a punch but merely a statement to me, the science project one almost made me throw up.
A- whack whakc whack, the only thing you had up on k was that you actually threw punches in your battle and had decent concepts but most of it was weak as fuck.
So since a had punches....

V-ambient