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Heroic Verse vs ~*Legend*~
Battle Rules:
12 Bars No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 11-15-04 at 08:38 PM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. |
Heroic Verse has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-15-04 08:09 PM.
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~*Legend*~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-15-04 08:11 PM.
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Alright lemme bestow to you the Legend of this counterfeit ass rapper here
I’ll fill you with apprehension and look I hurt your feelings oh there goes a tear Your epic is full of embarrassment loss and we all cant forget the word defeat Face it nigga your just a computer geek still not getting the attention you seek Rhymes is wack flow is crappy man what more can I say than your so weak Don’t brag bitch when its really true that you ain’t got shit but disrespect Alright don’t pose because on your inclusive pathetic life it shall effect Me mercing you is one thing your bitch ass never would of anticipated I know I get your ass aggravated because you know I’m right you masturbated I now know that it is dick that your gay ass thinks of and will always love Face it you just lost nigga shut the fuck up now that our business is taken care |
Yes,It's True Your Whole Crew Is Legendaries,Just Another Myth,Skill Is Old As Tha West Indies, It's A Fact I'll Crush Ya Teeth And Have You Visiting With Tha Tooth Faires,While Your Gon' I'll Be Present And Ram Through Your Whole Crew Like Im Aries Come Back I'll Throw You Off A "Leg" And Put Your Whole Life To An "End" I Thought I Told You Once I Aint Here To Make A New Friend,You Spend Most Your Time With Your Hand, While I Spen My Time Damaging You Man, Vocabulary Crush You Like A Egg Shell Laying On Tha Floor,Your Malibu's Favorite Where It's So Called "Hardcore" Ya Rhymes Was To Good To Be Yours,So I Had To kick It In As Coppers Kick In Doors, You Dont Know What It Is To Be A Legend Unless Your Talent Is SkillFull,But It's Not That Impressive Your Totally Pittifull,I Got Tha Courage To Step To You With All I Got,Have You Shot One Pop Of My Lyrics Will Defeat You Onna Spot,And I'll Walk Away With All My Pride,And You, Well You Could Atleast Say "I Tryed" Contiplating On Excepting This Battle So I'll Help You,Dont Do It Unless You Wanna Lose, Illeterate,And Not Just A Little Bit This Nigga Cant Even Follow Tha Rules,So I'm Gon' Leave Uhm With A Tuba Playing Tha Blues, He Sad He Got A Lost From This Newbie In Mind,Well Keep In Mind You Lines Was Canceld Due To Time P.S. He Pre-Wrote His Shit, |
so did you. cant type that much in 15 minutes. damn made me use an old verse i was supposed to use nevermind.
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I AInt Pre-Write I Type Fast Nigg,Pros Always Do Battles In 15 Minutes Ask Around Nigga
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hmmm alright but you are Epic. he types like you and is online wheen he is offline. i saw it.
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^^^^Lol Wrong Partner I'm Not Tha Fuck,Lmmfao///////
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Upping On Votes Niggas..................................
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This was feedback posted for ~*Legend*~
just wanted to see if you were dissing epic while in battle with another person...LOL
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Yes This Dumb Ass Was Kids These Days..................
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Voted For: ~*Legend*~
this was a VERY close one...yall both came hard, i think legend took this one because his structure was better..yall both came wit it wit punches and shit...and yall personals were nice...yall was on each others level...heroic: if u had better structure, and if yo lines werent stretched, u prolly wouldve took this... overall, like i said this was close...good battle and return tha votes...HONESTLY...both yall 1 |
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Voted For: ~*Legend*~
Legend got this....... Heroic... Ya lines were streched way too much... Legend you hit really hard with those punches and personals...... I like it...... You bath has Somehwat good flow..... but legemnd takes this with his punches... Peace~~~ Return tha fava in tha Sig~~~~ Crew vote removed |
Voted For: Heroic Verse
Heroic - Punches And Personals Was Hitting On Target,Personals Was Hitting Also,Man OverAll Flow Was Damaging Good Shit Vocab And All,Structure Wasnt To Decent But OverAll Cool8/10 - Legend - The Fuck More Like You Bin Dissing Epic,Lmao,But Vocab Was Decent Punches Wasnt To Much On Him Decent Structure Not ALot Of Personals To Him6/10 |
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Upping FOr Votes Please Lol Lets Get This Battle DOne Real Quick
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This was feedback posted for Heroic Verse
k dis was a good battle by both-but i still think heroic came out on top of dis one-it flowed and the rhymes were sick man keep it up.
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This was feedback posted for ~*Legend*~
legend.... stretched lines... just work on that..... checking polls
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Voted For: ~*Legend*~
Heroic Verse: ok man well this was a dumb verse you had you had like some mab steched lines and a really bad stucture to it with weak punchlines and also weak vocabulary and a mad savage no flow to your verse...try using some witty metaphores to your lines with funny comics to it but try not to use porn flicks or any gay shit saying the guys gay or something cuz thats wack...but you had a nice nothing to your verse...sry kid elevation is the key..No Hate Legend: not bad man well sense this is one of your first battles on rv this wasent to bad you didnt reallly use any witty punches but you had a good damn flow to it with a weird thing to your lines lol i do not know what it is but its pretty kool...a real nice stucture with soem dope witty metaphoes in there... Vote: Legend return the favour in my battle verse epic links in the sig |
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