Lethal-C vs ~LIL'DREW~
 

Battle Rules:

10 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no d/r
no hate votes

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-18-04 at 09:43 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

Lethal-C has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-15-04 11:02 PM.

New To This Site But Step Back n' Please Take Advice
Cuz I Got Ya Face Frozen n' I'm Bout Ta BreaK Da Ice
Accept This Battle Vs Drew I Godda Be Damn Near Insane
You Couldn't Be "Magic" On The Mic If Ya Name Was "D.Blaine"
Obviously At 13 Ya Don't Have The Mind To Even Think
Cuz This imbelic Herb Hooked Up Wit The Fagz Of P.I.N.K
When U Wit Dem Keep Ya Distance Cuz My SkiLLz Explosive
This Rusty Faucet Won't Flo...He's Dry N'His GRILLS CORROSIVE
I'm Feelin So ferocious To Take This Fruit And PELL EM' OPEN*(an orange)
After I Spit I'll Throw My Mic At Ya Chest So U Can "Feel The Spoken"
On The Real I'm Golden..."Drug Free" N' Still The Dopest
I Seen Ya Shit N' I Detected That Ya So Lyrically Hopeless
I'll Send Heat To His Talents...So He Can Say His SKILLZ ARE Str8 SMOKIN
Call Ya Girl For Some Easy Strokin..Min's Later The Bitch Iz Chokin
Please Your A Hoax Ain't No Way You Seein Me 1/2 Way At The Most
I Think You Need Ta Step Aside N Send In Ya Pops--Tha Ghost

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~LIL'DREW~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-16-04 09:40 PM.

W'dup yall,

Lethal-C, wut the fuck, this dude just fuckin sucks/
because my rhymes enduce more pain to newb's than "Lethal-Cuts"/*
22 years old and already wanna die/
if u had any skillz to rap u wouldnt be working at Best Buy/**
he cant type str8, because he gettin banged like drums/
and its a little hard to read while slurpin' on "Lethal-Cum"/***
dont pretend the "C" stands for crypt cause u aint in no gang/
My Bad, I forgot the gay pride parade/****
so go wit yo GANG of fags, choose to die or hide/
just put some lipstick on ya so u can "MAKE UP" ya mind/
time to go, but first Ill knock u on ya skinny ass/
why dis dude so ugly, when he was born he had an incubator wit tinted glass/

*play on his name
**check his profile
***another play on his name
****marchers are kinda like a gang

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Voted For: Lethal-C

Lethal-C - good verse flow was tight and so was personals...

Best Line - Obviously At 13 Ya Don't Have The Mind To Even Think
Cuz This imbelic Herb Hooked Up Wit The Fagz Of P.I.N.K

Worst Line - Accept This Battle Vs Drew I Godda Be Damn Near Insane
You Couldn't Be "Magic" On The Mic If Ya Name Was "D.Blaine"

~LIL'DREW~ - not to bad flow.. punches were not to bad.

Best Line - Lethal-C, wut the fuck, this dude just fuckin sucks/
because my rhymes enduce more pain to newb's than "Lethal-Cuts"/*

Worst Line - dont pretend the "C" stands for crypt cause u aint in no gang/
My Bad, I forgot the gay pride parade/****

OVERALL - close battle.. but I gotta vote for C, his punches were hitten harder. Drew you need to fix up your flow abit and harden up them punches.

Vote - Lethal-C

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just checking deez polls....good, close battle....but you know it's all bout dat P.I.N.K................~1~

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Voted For: Lethal-C

this is a pretty good battle.....but lethal took this one pretty easy...........drew u had a good verse and u have a lot of potential......you used a lot more personals than lethal and u definitely beat him in that catagory....but lethal had more multis and metaphors.....his wordplay was also better......structure and flow was decent from both of u......but lethal took the punchlines catagory easily.....he came pretty hard with some of his punches and was consistent throughout his whole verse.....he also used a few inners...so thats always good.........i voted for lethal because he came harder with the punches, multis, inners, and metas........good verses from both of u.....drew keep up the good work.... you have a lot of potential and one day u will be pretty good......its all love to both of u.....return the favor with an honest vote please....i have links to a topical and a battle in my sig...thanks.....good drops from both

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Voted For: Lethal-C

You Couldn't Be "Magic" On The Mic If Ya Name Was "D.Blaine"
Obviously At 13 Ya Don't Have The Mind To Even Think
Cuz This imbelic Herb Hooked Up Wit The Fagz Of P.I.N.K
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ yo dah dopest line had awesome punch and gud flow and structure,,, man u ate this guy personally had sum phat lines tooo.

lil drew wtf is up wif u and gay man have sum fukin respect u fukin suk like shit had krap asssssssssssssssssss punches no proper lines used petetik rhyme schemz manand off al u brought sum gay shit in2 it u fag,, cmon have sum respect and u had no floits a little hard to read while slurpin' on "Lethal-Cum"/***
dont pretend the "C" stands for crypt cause u aint in no gang/
My Bad, I forgot the gay pride parade/****
so go wit yo GANG of fags, choose to die or hide/
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ wakest linezzzzzzz

yo holla bak wif sum honest votes in my battle against pugnasious hawk kkkk thnx..............

Thanks for the vote man much love and i will vote on your bsttle honestly........uppin this

Voted For: Lethal-C

New To This Site But Step Back n' Please Take Advice
Cuz I Got Ya Face Frozen n' I'm Bout Ta BreaK Da Ice
Accept This Battle Vs Drew I Godda Be Damn Near Insane
You Couldn't Be "Magic" On The Mic If Ya Name Was "D.Blaine"
Obviously At 13 Ya Don't Have The Mind To Even Think
Cuz This imbelic Herb Hooked Up Wit The Fagz Of P.I.N.K
When U Wit Dem Keep Ya Distance Cuz My SkiLLz Explosive
This Rusty Faucet Won't Flo...He's Dry N'His GRILLS CORROSIVE
^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE GOOD PUNCHES PERSONALS AND FLOW DECENT PUNCHES


I'm Feelin So ferocious To Take This Fruit And PELL EM' OPEN*(an orange)
After I Spit I'll Throw My Mic At Ya Chest So U Can "Feel The Spoken"
On The Real I'm Golden..."Drug Free" N' Still The Dopest
I Seen Ya Shit N' I Detected That Ya So Lyrically Hopeless
I'll Send Heat To His Talents...So He Can Say His SKILLZ ARE Str8 SMOKIN
Call Ya Girl For Some Easy Strokin..Min's Later The Bitch Iz Chokin
Please Your A Hoax Ain't No Way You Seein Me 1/2 Way At The Most
I Think You Need Ta Step Aside N Send In Ya Pops--Tha Ghost
^^^^^^^^^ O AIGHT DAYUM NICE CLOSA GOOD PUNCHES NICE LIL WORDPLAY U GOT THERE NICE META'Z


LETHAL C- U HAD AN GOOD VERSE......U HAD WORDPLAY META'Z FLOW...PERSONALS AND DECENT PUNCHES



Lethal-C, wut the fuck, this dude just fuckin sucks/
because my rhymes enduce more pain to newb's than "Lethal-Cuts"/*
22 years old and already wanna die/
if u had any skillz to rap u wouldnt be working at Best Buy/**
he cant type str8, because he gettin banged like drums/
and its a little hard to read while slurpin' on "Lethal-Cum"/***
^^^^^^^^^^^^ OK PUNCHES NICE FLOW GOOD PERSONALS


dont pretend the "C" stands for crypt cause u aint in no gang/
My Bad, I forgot the gay pride parade/****
so go wit yo GANG of fags, choose to die or hide/
just put some lipstick on ya so u can "MAKE UP" ya mind/
time to go, but first Ill knock u on ya skinny ass/
why dis dude so ugly, when he was born he had an incubator wit tinted glass/
^^^^^^^^^^^^ O LIKE I THA CLOSA GOOD PUNCHES NICE PERSONALS AND OK FLOW IT WAS CHOPPED UP IN SOME PARTS


OVERALL= THIS BATTLE WAS CLOSE CAUSE BOTH OF U HAD WORDPLAY.......META;'Z........FLOW.........PERSONA LS....BUT NOW I GOTS TO WITH THEM PUNCHES LETHAL C TOOK THAT CATEGORY HIS PUNCHES WAS DECENT AND NICE


NO HATE

PEACE

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Voted For: Lethal-C

Man my guy right hurr gets my vote dont get me wrong the otha cat had good punchlines but imean he came better
Structure8/10
Punchlines10/10
How stupied he made Lil Drew look 10000/10

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Voted For: Lethal-C

good word play. I like the drug free and lyrically hopeless good shit bro. flow was better. Not alot of punches.. If I had to give a score out of 100 it would be 83 for Lethal C and 79 for LIL DREW becuase he had some good punches like the whole lethal cuts bar.

Voted For: Lethal-C

Aii Lethal-C gets My Vote It was Hard To Vote But it was only Bcuz of his personals And Vocab Im Tellin you It was REALLY REALLY HArd to Decide

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Voted For: ~LIL'DREW~

good flow and stucture, very crative and was very funny as hell,my favorite line was wit da incubator and the tinted glass

Voted For: Lethal-C

Lethal took this in every category hands down
Drew you're too basic so elevate

peace

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Voted For: Lethal-C

I think that Lethal-C got this battle because i feel that Lethal-C came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt Lethal-C got it they were used effectifely and were on point LIL'DREW u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to Lethal-C good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to Lethal-C and flow and structure i'll give to Lethal-C.

V/Lethal-C There's my sig be sure to return the favour honestly