"Rough Times"(unfinished)
 

This was a poetic scriptures collab i did with valor, this is only my verse, i'm still waiting for him to finish this......I thought i'd post it, to get some feedback, i think my flow improved, a bit, but the quality needs some work still............holla!!! lol :thumbup:

1st one on top.......
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/fluidmoon.htm

The top link works........1...EDIT~now they both work..lol :thumbup:

word flow was pretty good... especially for ur second time droppin an audio rhyme, comin up in the game, beat was nice you kinda had an old school flavor to your isht... keep droppin.

loved it... i always love a girlt hat can rap.. especially when you can stay on beat shit was deep keep it up fam nice drop fluid

Thanks guys, i appreciate all the love, this track wil be finished tomorrow, hook and all..lol

Fam gets upped cuz thats what I do.

this shit really sounded really tight I liked the beat and you seem to have really nice flow and I like your voice 2.... 9/10

Thanks peeps....i'ma keep it up....word

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yup tight track good flow liked the beat rhymes were good keep dopin ur thing look out for our collab comin to a sc page near u soon lmao

yeah i liked it and if it was only your 2nd time droppin' audio major props, i'd like to hear the complete version when thats done so post it when it is....keep droppin'

original shit... you came ya own flow and it worked well, i wanna here the finished song
u got funk gurl

Yeh, I liked this track, you flow is dopeness, ride the beat well.
GOt an original style like Kingz said, you should try get a couple more verse and a hook on there :thumbup: lol,yeh, dope track for what you got done, I'll definetly give some props to the finished version.

Oh yeh, and you killed IdaughterHoez.

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Just listened to it 3 times.
Voice clear, flow is steady...and its ur own style so I like it. U rode the beat well...
Great job Fluid!
I notice U ended the flow at :47 ......seem like u let it drift, but maybe u did it like that purposely.
I think you could have snuck one more bar in there to finish your verse which would have ended at :52. The beat seems as if it was fit to end the verse at :52, and then the hook comes in.
Nevertheless u did ur thang! Im looking forward to hearing more of u. I like listening to u in fact!
Keep it up!
One!

shit gurl you have some talents...and yeah you did killed I daughter....this song is on repeat

*LIstening*

Ok.....I hate to ruin all these nice things people have heen saying about you, but I wasn't feeling it. I didn't think you flowed that well. Plus you stopped way too early. Quality was ass......only thing positive I can say about this is that your voice is pretty unique and with a little practice and learning, you might actually do some things......another thing, learn how to fade something out so I don't have to listen to the beat for another minute before I realize the song is over :thumbup: