The Pooch Song
 

Can people please drop feed back on my new song and tell me if my word play and rhymes are gettin better i'd appreciate it this song was a pretty decent one I made so it's worth listening to... Click on the audio to view it below

Flow is best I've heard from you... you really need to check audio assistance and fix your quality though cuz its beyond horrible.... punches were so-so nothing spectacular but not bad... keep droppin and concentrate on ur quality cuz its the most stand out weakness you got.

alrite when u say quality do u mean my change my voice or voice emotion?

No I mean your sound quality is shit... its filled with hisses and pops and distortion.

thats because of my microphone it's fucked Im goin to get a new one for chrismas so i'll be able to make my songs more clear and no problems in the back ground and shit... Least I was pretty good on the beat on this song I listen to peeps advice about rideing the beat so im okay at that.

you dont need a new mic to improve quality... your going to need to learn to do it with a new mic or not... all mics leave small pops and light distortion automatically, not to mention the problems you get on hard exhales-- trust me... work on your quality... Look in the audio assistance forum and find threads by Opey or Alca on cool edit. You will find ways to Make yourself sound better through the various equalizers and settings and everything to learn can be applied to nice mics, shitty mics whatever.

I know mad dogs your friend so how do you feel about this diss do you feel a bit insulted? cause Im only returning the diss he once made to me so it's only fair I give it back to him aight. Anyway to the amount of people sayin i'm wack do you actually respect me a little bit more now for provin that I can rap and flow well on a microphone just wanted some advice from you cause you could turn me into a better mc you know I take this shit serious.

I respect you for tryin.... as far as mad dog goes. thats between you two... i just want competiton from someone.

well I think i actually found a way to stop the hissing shit on my software it'll cut the hissing sound out so im is that all I need to do??? I'm only at an early stage yet but thanks for sayin i've improved....

Competition?.......Why didn't you say so?

word... i thought I did... multiple times.

check bitchslapped... im waitin on battles like soldiers that cant sleep.

dude im not gonna battle you... you are way up my league

nah I was refferin to that pussy Kontroverzey and that other homo bullet who i called out about a week ago but no battle thread.

damn If we keep freepostin in here Ima have to close the thread lol... pz

ROFLLLLLLL^^^^......sinner~this wasnt bad, like seven said, the quality needs work, it really makes the track that much better...your flow is good, you improved a lot,keep it up man, and you'll be better in no time,1

thanks for the love.... but I do realise that I have to improve my sound quality and my spit to make it more used to flowing to the beat but Im just practicing and I had fun practicing on mad dog he's an easy target lol because he dissed me...

Kid, u still sound like shit.




PERIOD.

tha q only fags say shit like that and guess what you are....

U elevating a bit kid.. keep it up.

its disses like these that make me wonder why i'm still here?...better luck next time

You Improved.

You went from very shit to just shit...

OK... flow was hella choppy... like.. you stopped and started a lot.. voice had no confidence or emotion... Quality was ass.. some punches made me laugh... not laugh because they were funny, but because they were wack.. i think it was that "boob, noob, boob-tube" one, or something... hahaha.. anyway.. yeah..

keep elevating.. Use "noise reduction" and "Hiss Reduction" to improve your quality... also it might be smart to do a little dynamics processing to level out the waves..

Work on emotion.. and try to flow better.. (not choppy)

...this was... crap...flowed well i suppose, u talked way to fast.... some rappers can pull off the fast rap, but you aint no busta rhymes, twista etc. they can pull off the fast rhymes... and u blew into the mic to much.... any way..... anybody sinner bitch?

anybody sin a clown? fuck off bitch otherwise i'll drop a diss on your ass that'll wish you were never born mutha fucker the problem occured because i didn't get rid of the noice reduction im only new to cool edit so fuck off bitch go kill yaself.... fuckin clown

lol accept my call out then bitch... drop any sort of diss you want to bitch... dont bother me in the least, especialy after i heard this garbage

I wasn't really feelin this..ya flow was way off..and yea....its quality sounds worse then anything i've ever heard