Lyrically Blest vs Carnage
 

Battle Rules: :gfy:

6 - 10Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No D/R
No Hate

:shoot: !Les Go! :shoot:

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-19-04 at 04:54 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Carnage has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-16-04 04:55 PM.

Lyrically Blest has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-16-04 04:59 PM.

I Spit Hot Flames Call Em Hell Tones//
Yous A Bitch, The Only Thing You Pull From Ya Hip Is A Cell Phone//
Ya Skinny Ass Mother Fukker Lookin Like A Walkin Stick//
I'll Put Ya Mouth In Ya Ass So You Can Talk Ya Shit//
You Fukkin Snitch Nigga//
I Put A Gun To A Bitch Nigga Yous A Fuckin' Wigga//
When I Pull Shots From Mah Trigga//
U Shook, I Bust A Nine, Why You Tryna "busta Rhyme" Like Rah Digga//
Come On Carnage, Get Shot, The Glock Not For Play//
I Got Guns That'll Make You Do The Rock Away//
So Lean Back Cuz I Gotta Gun By My Scrotum Call It A Genital Mack//
My Squad Roll Deep And All Carry Identical Gats//
So Back Up Before I Run Ya Town//
Ill Push Ya Grill To The Side Havin' You Look Like Bobby Brown//

Son, You couldn’t “Sea” me if ya flowed hard like the “Ocean”
I strike without “notion”, and leave dis “Ocean “split “Open” like “Moses”

“Seriously”, how can a 13 year old, kid, hooked on phonics be blessed “lyrically”
U don’t b “feelin me” when I rip out hearts to “feel the beat”

Ur rhymes r like ur momz face, something u didn’t “Make-up”
U a pussy, during porno flix is the only time u “ Raised up”

Im here “solely” to smash deez lyrically blessed bitches “vocally” and make them “holey”
So listen before u type and I break ya fingers by “strokin the keys”

Askin for a battle? Dis dude telling me were to tear em like the edge of a “zip lock bag”
And ill leave u open the next time u get rhymes from “hip hop mags”

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Holla Back

Uppin for votes.


AY blest ur spit was nice son g'dluck.

Fa sho mayne Good Luck...

Holla Back :thumbup:

Voted For: Carnage

this was an aight battle...

Yall both had decent punches/wordplay...Carnage, ya verse was straight...but keep workin on those punches, next time use more fresh/less played concepts...good consistency tho...LB, ya verse was meh...u were mainly talkin bout how u were gon shoot Carnage, insteada usin witty punchlines n shit to insult him...plus u were talkin bout yourself half the time...

V/ Carnage, for more consistency

Voted For: Carnage

gotta go with carnage....his shit had some wordplay....decent punches....and it was structured better den lb....lb u need to work on ur punches n structure

v/carnage

return tha honest favor........http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=159731

Aiight Homie Thnx...uppin...........................

Voted For: Carnage

vote: carnage....

Son, You couldn’t “Sea” me if ya flowed hard like the “Ocean”
I strike without “notion”, and leave dis “Ocean “split “Open” like “Moses”
nice star N good shit...

ya whole verse had a good flow, creativeness was above average, punches was decent N alla round tight not a bad drop... 7.5 outta 10....


Ya Skinny Ass Mother Fukker Lookin Like A Walkin Stick//
I'll Put Ya Mouth In Ya Ass So You Can Talk Ya Shit//
^^ this is the only bar i thought was decent...

the rest was either PLAYED OR BITTEN....

PEEP...
So Lean Back Cuz I Gotta Gun By My Scrotum Call It A Genital Mack//
My Squad Roll Deep And All Carry Identical Gats//

cassidy spit that shit fucker like i wouldnt know...

P.S to everyone else who wanna try this...

DONT BITE LINES FROM MY FAVORIT RAPPERS...

eminem, cassidy, anyone from g-unit, D-BLOCK , papoose, graph, A-team, anyone from desert-storm or ROC-A-FELLA...

^^ which basicly means DONT BIT AT ALL OR I WILL CATCH U AND TRY TO GET U BANND....

can ya return the favor of a HONEST VOTE....

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=159406
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=156157

lol aiight thnx homie...i thought i heard that shit bfor too, Ill hit up ur battles (hontstly)soon. 2 more votes lets goooooooooooooooooooooo

Uppin for more votes !!!!1!!!!!!favors will b returned

wreckage
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=158022

bizzey
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=156157

drop a honest vote in those battles plez....

Voted For: Lyrically Blest

man dis was a hard decision but i had to go
wit u dawg u had betta wordplay..but i gotta
admit dat his flow was betta..but u still had
da shit goin on so yea

Voted For: Carnage

hey yo i think carnage took this one. better wordplay, metas, vocabulary and punches. no hate lyrically blest but you need to elevate some more and use a better vocabulary. and work on your punches cause i wasnt really feeling some of them. no hate just an honest vote.
return tha favor.
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...743193&posted=1

Voted For: Carnage

decent battle but carnage outmatched u....... lyrical blact had sum ok lines, but it was sum pretty commercial shit and not as creative as carnage..... carnage had the way better vocab and creative, well thought out punches go to carnage.... Blast had some lil punches but nothin too creative or well though out..... juss sum basic shit.... carnages wen i read it out loud had a decent flow to it too.... Blast had pretty uneven bars in sum parts...... the only problem i had with Carnage was like 2 of his lines didnt exactly rhyme with their previous ones, but it was all good and close enough to puul out this battle.... Carnage work on ur actual rhymin and blast u should work on ur vocab and ur elementary punches....