Sub-0 vs X2daJ
 

Battle Rules:

6-8 linez
no crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no dr


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-19-04 at 05:14 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

X2daJ has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-16-04 05:14 PM.

Alright. I'll assume this is the spot where I say I'm checking in. 4320 Minutes... woah.
Methinks I could beat that one.

Dammit... I put a squigle instead of an exclamation point on the 3rd bar.
Anyways, you're up.

Sub-0 has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-16-04 05:36 PM.

Is this guy alive anymore?...



Whenever the due date is, you don't come, you are a weenie...

And that's all there is to it!

Dis dude spittin dat shitty shit, heres a pen, you should go to the desk/
Im bout to go to dis kids chest, and deliver some fast cold shit like da Polar Express/

Ill eat your bars like snickers and discard the rapper/
I have dis dude losin more weight runnin from me than using Stacker(fat burner)/

My bars got flows but you can't drink without paying/
Dis dude must take lesson from skunks cause he stinks before spraying/

Son,my spits are nastier off the top like head lice/
After im done dis time dont ask for a rematch, y u wanna be dead twice/

uppin 4 votz!! return da favor!!!!!

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Voted For: Sub-0

nice verse sub-0. X2daJ verse was gay all around. both of yall need to elevate though. sub had a better flow and harder punches. he also had a better vocabulary. X2daJ needs to make friends with a dictionary and learn everything about it. no hate just an honest vote. return tha favor.
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...743193&posted=1

Voted For: X2daJ

well i think that you took this because it was easy to read and the flow was aiight...you should work on harder punches and a few better metas and maybe some multis....but thats of course your choice....

sub i think that you lost this because of your structure and how it flowed...its not about what it soiunds to you but to the voters reading it and you have failed in that catagory there fore you lose.work on those 2 things man and youll get better....


return the votes with an honest vote in the siggy...

^Would, but don't have enough posts.:( Sorry man.

Anyways, bumping thread for voters!
You know you want to!

God dammit.
I will vote in TWO of your battles if you vote!!!

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Voted For: Sub-0

V/SUB-O.......He came With it he had nice punchs good structure an flow.....x2daj u had sum good punchs but way to basic no creativity....
V/sub-0
*RETURN THE FAVOR*

Voted For: X2daJ

nice man i voted for u cuz ur closer was better than his ur had doper rhymes and beter metas he was lackin metas and u had em ur punches came alot harder too and they were creative and original from what ive seen and also urs flowed better it was an easier read and i understood it all so i gave this one to u man

vote in one of my battles
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162997

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162918

Voted For: Sub-0

hey yo sub-0 got ma vote on this one. better flow and wordplay. he also had a better punches and a higher vocabulary. X2daj had an ok verse but i think sub-0 had a better verse though. no hate just an hnest vote. return tha favor.
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...772887&posted=1

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Voted For: Sub-0

Aii This Was Very Close But Sub-0 had x atleast To Me Bcuz The Punches neva Stop LOL But X it Seems Like you Shouldve kept the Punches Goin Bcuz Sub-0 Is the Masta N this Battle Although Ya Ending Was nice Mayne Heep it up
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Voted For: Sub-0

close but sub won not casue of flow or style but because the words were tight and the shit was funny