Inception vs *Troop*
 

Battle Rules:

8 - Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biteing
No Dr

explained votes only

3-0=KO

U called me out and u get merked

Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 11-17-04 at 05:22 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Inception has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-16-04 05:24 PM.

Have Troop "In A Tough Spot" Like A "Bad-Residence"
I'll "Blast-Men-And-Dent" Ya Frame, Cuz My Punchez "Beat Ya Eyez" And Stay More "Ahead Of Ya Pupilz" Than A "Class Prezident"

Treat Him Like "Titanic Inveztorz" Till He'z "Found-Dreamz-Sunk"...Blaztz Simply "Down-This-Punk"
Cuz I'm About To "Steal This Franchizez Spotlight" Like A "Yao Ming Dunk"

Troop Punchez Are A "Family Friend", Just "Wishing They Connected " Like "Fake Cousinz"
Ya Take Nothin, I See-Thiz-Snake-Bluffin..Cuz He Only "Toying With Creativity" Like An "Eazy Bake Oven"

Like "Low Class Movie Theaterz" This Bitch "Lackz Featurez"...Eazily "Blazt Speakerz" Cuz Ya "Rapz Weaker"
And Have A.I. Frantically "Searchin For This Legend" Like "Confuzed Map Readerz"

wow nigga u that slow witted to take a day when u set up a battle

No u suck ni99a i gotta go 2 work unlike some Bumz

*Troop* has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-17-04 12:06 AM.

the 1st Battle i Neglected so u came again for Further Inspection
Verbally Assasinated your "Ghost" No Respect for this Inception
Zero Respected so No one Pays Attention when your Ranks Givin
Incept Vanishes often from Talent like Anerexics at Thanks Givin
Your Rhyme Ability Resembles your Sig...So no one even Looks
You Droppin Nice is Inconsistent like Narcaleptics Reading Books Disrespected by Every Single Crew No one gets your Goodies
Now Stop Smothering AI like "Middle Weights"in Infant Hoodies


Blahh bitch didnt even try check how long it took me 2 drop

and his old name was "GHOST 354"
and He wants in AI

ok i took 4 minutez longer then u to post nigga

an yo who the fuck said i wanted to be in that crew i havent even joined any crew since i been on this dumb shit

Voted For: Inception

yo Inception that was sik..u got mad wordplay with that class president line yo..ya punches killed him..even though not really any personals all ya punches and wordplay killed it..your structure was kinda messed up though..so it messed up the flow..overall 9.5/10(i dont give 10's)


troop dawg u came really weak..i know you coulda came harder than this..i seen u do a lot better..u tried some personals though which was good..i was feelin it a little but not as much as Inceptions...but ur strucutre and ur flow was on point and u had some good vocab...overall 7/10


vote - Inception




if u could return the favor in the sig with an honest vote.....

yea man coo 2 all dat
he went wayyy over the line limit

this aint gone be up 4 2 much longer

that was 10 linez dumb nigga

theyre stretched linez az u text headz like to call it

Limit was 8 Linez homeboy

Kidz and not respectin rulez these dayz

Welp o well

ye my fault im meant itz 8 i forget u suck to bad to read 10 of your linez i spit 8 look at it moron

Residence"
Prezident" < 1 bar
"Down-This-Punk"
Yao Ming Dunk" < 2nd bar
"Fake Cousinz"
"Eazy Bake Oven" < 3rd bar
"Rapz Weaker"
Confuzed Map Readerz" < 4th bar

if u cant read and see where a rhyme stopz honeslty u shold give up cause a shit stinkz already

it lookz longer cause of my so called "stretched linez"

bitch nigga

Voted For: *Troop*

Inception:
Word... first few bars were FIRE! ... but from there it kept goin down and down. The hot bars were self glorification and the wack ones were punches.. so like.. that fucked you up a bit..

structure was WAY OFF.. flow was on point though.. multis helped it a fair bit..

Things that annoyed me about you:
stop spelling shit with a "z" its pretty gay..

stop using speech marks when theres no wordplay...
and if youre gonna hyphen your multis, HYPHEN ALL OF EM..

also, try using a smaller font.. i think thatll help ya structure heaps..

troop:
word... nicely structured (except for the second last line... but that was an honest mistake)... The thing that put you above your opponent was your punches.. every bar punched.. you had nice similies in there, very creative. flow was on point the whole time..

incept did a few things better, but troop had the ALL ROUND better verse...

okay



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This was feedback posted for *Troop*
 

^the thanksgiving line was funny as hell... ha paa haa that's the boi, chea, reppin' A.I. good luck, fam.. holl@

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Voted For: Inception







Have Troop "In A Tough Spot" Like A "Bad-Residence"
I'll "Blast-Men-And-Dent" Ya Frame, Cuz My Punchez "Beat Ya Eyez" And Stay More "Ahead Of Ya Pupilz" Than A "Class Prezident"
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE GOOD PUNCH GOOD FLOW


Treat Him Like "Titanic Inveztorz" Till He'z "Found-Dreamz-Sunk"...Blaztz Simply "Down-This-Punk"
Cuz I'm About To "Steal This Franchizez Spotlight" Like A "Yao Ming Dunk"
^^^^^^^^^ HAHAHAHA WHOA NICE PUNCH
Troop Punchez Are A "Family Friend", Just "Wishing They Connected " Like "Fake Cousinz"
Ya Take Nothin, I See-Thiz-Snake-Bluffin..Cuz He Only "Toying With Creativity" Like An "Eazy Bake Oven"
^^^^^^^^^^^^ MULTI'Z MAYNE NICE PUNCH



Like "Low Class Movie Theaterz" This Bitch "Lackz Featurez"...Eazily "Blazt Speakerz" Cuz Ya "Rapz Weaker"
And Have A.I. Frantically "Searchin For This Legend" Like "Confuzed Map Readerz"
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE CLOSA GOOD FLOW NICE PUNCH




INCEPTION- U HAD AN GOOD VERSE YA PUNCHES MADE ME LAUGH DAT YAO MING-------------NICE GOOD CREATIVE THERE YA FLOW WAS GOOD PLUS U HAD PERSONALS NICE



the 1st Battle i Neglected so u came again for Further Inspection
Verbally Assasinated your "Ghost" No Respect for this Inception
^^^^^^^^^^^ "OK" PUNCH

Zero Respected so No one Pays Attention when your Ranks Givin
Incept Vanishes often from Talent like Anerexics at Thanks Givin
Your Rhyme Ability Resembles your Sig...So no one even Looks
You Droppin Nice is Inconsistent like Narcaleptics Reading
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIIIIIIGHT PUNCH WAS GOOD FLOW WAS AIIIIIGHT

Books Disrespected by Every Single Crew No one gets your Goodies
Now Stop Smothering AI like "Middle Weights"in Infant Hoodies
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ "EH" "OK" PUNCH


TROOP- WHAT HAPPEN MAYNE~! ANYWAY YA VERSE WAS A LIL BASIC AND YA PUNCHES WERENT LIKE U THREW~! BUT U HAD FLOW AND SOME META'Z PLUS PERSONALS


OVERALL= DIS AN ONE-SIDED BATTLE INCEPTION HAD HARDER PUNCHES AND META'Z AND PERSONALS

TROOP ON DA OTHER-HAND HAD AN LIL BASIC IN HIS VERSE HIS PUNCHES WERENT HARD HITTIN LIKE HE USED TOO, HE HAD FLOW AND META'Z BUT DA PUNCHES DIDNT COME THROUGH HERE

VOTE- INCEPTION FOR HARD PUNCHES AND FLOW AND PERSONALS AND META'Z O ALMOST FORGOT AND WORDPLAYS

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uppin..................................

Voted For: *Troop*

lol^^nice drop fam....props to both..............1

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OH Shit,my bad man...lmao......i'll get strobe to take this away.

Voted For: *Troop*

Shit one sided.

Troop owned you to be honest Inception, One of the better battle's I seen from you man. You had some nice punches, good personals, Flow was dope and jsut basically owned him.

Inception, first mistake you made, was accepting the battle, you need to imporve quite a lot, "'s are played, don't work in verses that much. Punches weren't that bad, but vocab was ass and lyrically not that good.

V/ Troop

holy shit we need to get a saddle in here for this nigga

no u jus fuckin suck


ne way uppin this sorry shit

Voted For: *Troop*

Have Troop "In A Tough Spot" Like A "Bad-Residence"
I'll "Blast-Men-And-Dent" Ya Frame, Cuz My Punchez "Beat Ya Eyez" And Stay More "Ahead Of Ya Pupilz" Than A "Class Prezident"
…5
Treat Him Like "Titanic Inveztorz" Till He'z "Found-Dreamz-Sunk"...Blaztz Simply "Down-This-Punk"
Cuz I'm About To "Steal This Franchizez Spotlight" Like A "Yao Ming Dunk"
…5
Troop Punchez Are A "Family Friend", Just "Wishing They Connected " Like "Fake Cousinz"
Ya Take Nothin, I See-Thiz-Snake-Bluffin..Cuz He Only "Toying With Creativity" Like An "Eazy Bake Oven"
…4
Like "Low Class Movie Theaterz" This Bitch "Lackz Featurez"...Eazily "Blazt Speakerz" Cuz Ya "Rapz Weaker"
And Have A.I. Frantically "Searchin For This Legend" Like "Confuzed Map Readerz"
…5

^Damn…nice verse…but u ain’t gettin my vote..
fuckin fix ur structure…shit is stretch’d like I don’t kno
what…but overall..decent verse to you…

the 1st Battle i Neglected so u came again for Further Inspection
Verbally Assasinated your "Ghost" No Respect for this Inception
…6
Zero Respected so No one Pays Attention when your Ranks Givin
Incept Vanishes often from Talent like Anerexics at Thanks Givin
…5
Your Rhyme Ability Resembles your Sig...So no one even Looks
You Droppin Nice is Inconsistent like Narcaleptics Reading Books
…5
Disrespected by Every Single Crew No one gets your Goodies
Now Stop Smothering AI like "Middle Weights"in Infant Hoodies
…6 nice closer

^Overall..u had a nice drop too…
structure I can see u messed up on it..
but that’s aight...at least it wasn’t stretched
like Inception’s…but u came on top on this 1…

uppin this shit

word uppin' this fa my boi.......................... :thumbup:

This was feedback posted for Inception
 

checkin this count................................

Voted For: Inception

WOW!!! ...this was actually a nice battle, and it had me think 4 a while bout who i should vote for...so i gotta break it down
troop-u had a nice drop, ur intro was clean, but didnt stick to tha ribs like i should..if worded diff., probbly wouldve been killer 5/10...yo 2nd bar was clean...i was lovin it, a hard punch, and very creative 6/10...3rd bar, was tha highlight for me..."narcaleptics reading books", nice vocab, and nice rhymin pattern for that, flawless bar 8.7/10...but i dont know if tha 4th bar was connected or what, that took some points away, becus u fell off w/ur structure...but "smothering AI like middle weights in infant hoodies..." nice drop, and a nice closer...8/10... for tha overall verse i would rate it 7/10...u had some nice personals in there too, if i didnt already mention

inception-at 1st i wasnt understandin yo opener, but i liked tha creativie w/ it, and u changed yo style, and good drop, and a hard punch that gave u tha win for tha opener-7/10
yo 2nd bar was clean...it was worded wrongly to me, and i think u should really type correctly,cause all that mess fucked up ur punch, but i understood it okay. tha "steal franchise spotlight like a yao ming dunk.." was clean, and creative :thumbup: ...-6/10
yo 3rd bar was yo highlight bar in this whole verse, it was clean..perfect..worded correctly, and flawless to me...i love that one...it was a real jaw dropper :shocked: ...nuthin more to say about that then good shyt...9/10
yo 4th bar was a good closer, nicely worded, but structured bad...it was by far a nice hard punch tho...good shyt..7/10
overall rating...7.5/10


OVERALL
this was clean, but inception took this one by a hair, becus he had more multies and harder punches thru-out the majority of his verse...good drop both yall...but there can only be one winner...it was a hard decision for me...sry troop, u still got mad skills


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finally the only honest vote this clown has gotten

This was feedback posted for *Troop*
 

just checkin the polls for my boy troop...........

This was feedback posted for *Troop*
 

checking out .......................

good least u admit that i won u bitch ass nigga

u get rode like a fuckin hoopty in the hood

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vote an gimme my win niggaz................................

Your not goin 2 win

U and Looch didnt deserve votes

but u kno who comes out on top in the outcome

Bitch.............