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M-Dog vs 3rd-Shift
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16 - 20 Lines No Crew Votes (For or Against) No Recycling No Biting No Feeding No D/r Votes No Hate Votes No Unexplained Votes Minimum posts to vote: 750 Check in by: 11-20-04 at 05:57 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
M-Dog has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-17-04 09:44 AM.
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3rd-Shift has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-17-04 09:51 AM.
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Here's a prime example of RV's biggest fall off, Had mad skills but lost his back like a sawn off, U dissed outta desperation yet ya still hesistating, & ur punches are as successful as virgins penetrating, The sparks gone admit it you failed to come stronger, You lace ya battles wit sleepin pills to make them last longer, This cats slow to react thats why he wins like a snail, But ya better up a shift coz them losses hot on ya tail, It's funny because you claim that ima wack emcee, Yet you PM'd me once sayin "when you spit use my beats", Man u need to make ya mind up and not be "hypocritical", And whats wit the negativity damn "this-ho's-synical", This cats a pessemist...i think he really needs a lift, But is he dark...na thats his shadows from his 3rd night shift, Ya want ya beats to be dope but they'll always be hype-less, And ya views on the game is like ur ways...forever in blindness, You dissed me incorrectly better check ya sight, Coz the least you coulda done was spell my name right, So ya wackness helped you to suceed ya mission, Beat me?...naw i meant give you 20-20 vision, |
Hellen Keller has seemed to one-upped all of us RV vets at least that bitch is deaf to ya audio an blind to ya fuckin text :laugh: you figured you'd catch wreck wit 20 linez, thats gutter you utter ya broken vocab sounds like debri fed through a boat rutter i asphyxiate this mutts mutter, ya silence does service to a track this crap sounds more like simon cowell impersonatin Kool G Rap :nono: its the truth i peep, you being puss to the highest degree dog and feline combine to bring you bein the PUSSY of the offspring fuck yo RV allies, yo D2R "yes men" can kiss my ass thought you was the messiah to that crew but that shit aint last any resistance you put forth is futile, go back to suckin cunt lips that way gonorrhea can make ya lip'sync'd personals both hotter and sick even the deceased Ray Charles can see, the fakeness behind ya ideaology the only reason u post audio is to gass up yo audacity hidin behind that "tony blarish" accent is none other than a hip-hop fiend "fencin" wit erect dicks to see who first punctures the spleen(faggot) spittin inadequate linez causes the punishment of a capital crime pffffttttt...this shit happenin to me maybe next time |
RV Malfunctions yet again....
Hellen Keller has seemed to one-upped all of us RV vets at least that bitch is deaf to ya audio an blind to ya fuckin text :laugh: you figured you'd catch wreck wit 20 linez, thats gutter you utter ya broken vocab sounds like debri fed through a boat rutter i asphyxiate this mutts mutter, ya silence does service to a track this crap sounds more like simon cowell impersonatin Kool G Rap :nono: its the truth i peep, you being puss to the highest degree dog and feline combine to bring you bein the PUSSY of the offspring fuck yo RV allies, yo D2R "yes men" can kiss my ass thought you was the messiah to that crew but that shit aint last any resistance you put forth is futile, go back to suckin cunt lips that way gonorrhea can make ya lip'sync'd personals both hotter and sick even the deceased Ray Charles can see, the fakeness behind ya ideaology the only reason u post audio is to gass up yo audacity hidin behind that "tony blarish" accent is none other than a hip-hop fiend "fencin" wit erect dicks to see who first punctures the spleen(faggot) spittin inadequate linez causes the punishment of a capital crime pffffttttt...this shit happenin to me maybe next time |
Uppin this ma fuckin thread 4 them ma fuckin votes
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Voted For: M-Dog
I think that Mad Dog got this battle because he came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt MD got it they were used effectifely and were on point. Shift u shoulda been a bit more creative on this battle personals i felt werent that great, cos links are kinda wack. wordplay and creativity goes to Mad Dog and flow and structure i'll give to Mad Dog. V/ M-Dog |
Voted For: M-Dog
Aiight, for starters, I think the punches were about the same. Both were decently worded, and hit correctly. However, I liked the way mad dog layed his shit out straight up. And I hate it when people use too many links. Heres a tip, when I read a battle. I dont nessecarily wanna click shitloads of links. So when I see punches like this: spittin inadequate linez causes the punishment of a capital crime pffffttttt...this shit happenin to me maybe next time I think... Heh.. Like I can be bothered. Other then that, I think M dog had some tite lines and good personals. It was a very close battle though. |
Voted For: M-Dog
blah, this was an OK. battle right here 3rd shift. your shit was decent but lacked in vocab. good structure. and whats with those damn smilies.looks gay as hell.koo personals. but they didnt really hit hard. they didnt matter. M-dog's personal hit hard. Its a good thing too, cause he only has one. Your flow was koo. but Blah. m-dog: shit was koo..better structure. and dope personals. vocab was blah. ok..good vet material here. i was feelin this fo sho. better flow. this was a koo verse vote: m dog |
Uppin this ma fuckin thread 4 them ma fuckin votes
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uppin this shit right here.....lets get some real votes in this shit
peep the vocab an the links |
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I didn't imagine those 3 votes above...they seem real to me... |
REAL votes=my votes
anything less is uncivilized..... (old right guard commercial) charles barkley line get off my dicc.... |
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It was you who dissed me on open mic and refused to let that shit sleep...and it was you who called me out...so hmm mm get off my dick :gfy: |
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let what shit sleep...if i feel u garbage im lettin u no about it.... yo audio is terrible...as i have cited many times "john lennon the mc" "rappin wit a tony blair accent" "impersonatin kool g rap" its not ya accent.....its not even the beats you disgrace..its ya flow...ur audio sucks.....i honest to god hope you stick to text for the near future...intermediate future...and the distant future.....watever lays on the horizon for your rap career make sure it doesnt involve audio....so if RV is gassin u up, hypin ya pathetic attempts to diss somoebody...quit that.... :thumbup: |
Voted For: M-Dog
Shit, how one sided was this. Aiight M-Dog totally got this, had much better punches than 3rd, well structure and flow was good. Pretty much does it. 3rd Shift smilies don't really work in text, a lot of it is appearance, meanin well structured lines, which you don't have. Punches werent that great, ok but M-Dogs were better V/ M-Dog |
Voted For: 3rd-Shift
vote 3rd shift even the deceased Ray Charles can see, the fakeness behind ya ideaology the only reason u post audio is to gass up yo audacity ^ best punch in the whole battle obviuosly it aint but hey im a dumb ass that dont know what a clever punch nor creativite is so im gonna vote for the other guy cause i like him an know him better :thumbup: |
/\ wow blatant hate vote...anyway uppin for the final 1
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uppin this ma fuckin thread 4 them ma fuckin votes
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Voted For: M-Dog
M-Dog took this... 3rd shift...nice verse, structure was off in some places..lines were strechd but i couldn't tell much coz it was centred. most of ya verse was made up of metas and similies. not to many great punches here. u stuck to his nationality alot. which wasn't very creative. decent verse but could of had stronger punches. you sacraficed metas and links for hard ass punches. decent though. M-Dog...nice verse. structure was nice..couldn't see too many streched lines...not to keen on the way ya spaced the bars out but still has the same effect. had some funnya ass personals, liked the beats one and the link worked well too. you had a mix of personals punches and metas, which 3rd did not. v/ M-dog for a more consistant verse with punches and effective personals. |
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