X2daJ vs (~*~Dj KiD~*~)
 

Battle Rules:

6 - Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-17-04 at 04:46 PM

Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in.

X2daJ has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-17-04 04:17 PM.

(~*~Dj KiD~*~) has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-17-04 04:21 PM.

keying..............................
hurrry up homie

man ur wack u got no shit drop ur face in da mud pit
ryhmes r fucked up ur verse with no hit u fucking hipacrit

man u a ass with some fucked up name think u bad like game
thinking ur bad thinkin ur fame but u just a dumb ass fucking lame

dont touch me u gay ass wankin ya dad boasting glad
man u mad got no shit so u livin homeless crying like a sad-lad

uppin............................................. ....

Voted For: X2daJ

I'll call you maryjane, cuz I'm smoking you, herb
people aint feeling your shit if they replaced feces for nerves!!
^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT GOOD PUNCH NICE OPENER


You're a Damn Joke, bitch, are you [b]Kid[/n]ding?!
Did you eat a hammer, because it's "W(H)ACK" that you're spitting
^^^^^^^^^^ NICE WORDPLAY GOOD PUNCH


You're panicing, pounding pulsating penises, while I inflict harm
You play with more cock then a rooster breeding farm!!!!!
^^^^^^^^^^^^ MUWAHAHAHAHA GOOD CLOSA NICE PUNCH GOOD FLOW




X2DAJ- U HAD AN GOOD LIL SHORT VERSE GOOD PUNCHES AND U HAD WORDPLAY AND FLOW








man ur wack u got no shit drop ur face in da mud pit
ryhmes r fucked up ur verse with no hit u fucking hipacrit
^^^^^^^^^^^^ "EH" KINDA WEAK PUNCH


man u a ass with some fucked up name think u bad like game
thinking ur bad thinkin ur fame but u just a dumb ass fucking lame
^^^^^^^^^^ NOT AN GOOD PUNCH


dont touch me u gay ass wankin ya dad boasting glad
man u mad got no shit so u livin homeless crying like a sad-lad
^^^^^^^^^^^ WEAK MAYNE NOT AN GOOD PUNCH


DJ-KID- U HAD AN WACK VERSE YA PUNCHES U LACKED IT WASNT HARD HITTIN AND U NEED TO ELEVATE

OVERALL= I THINK X2 GOT DIS HANDS DOWN CAUSE OF PUNCHES AND FLOW


WHY?

X2- U HAD AN GOOD VERSE NICE LIL WORDPLAY IN THERE AND U HAD GOOD CREATIVE PUNCHES WHICH MADE ME LAUGH AND IT ENTERTAIN ME,

DJ- YA VERSE WAS TOOOOOO BASIC NEED TO ELEVATE ON PUNCHES AND USE PERSONALS

AND DONT STRETCH YA LINES TOO MUCH

DA REASON WHY I DIDNT VOTED FOR U

BECAUSE YA PUNCHES WERENT HARD HITTIN AND TOO BASIC


..............WORD



RETURN AN FAV~!

uppin............................................. .......

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This was feedback posted for X2daJ
 

I proper liked this X2, cant vote for you tho. Damn shame!

Voted For: X2daJ

X2daJ punches were a lil more complex that DJ kid's....He had good wordplay and metaphors...DJ, word ya punches a lil differently and you'll be kew...but, X2daJ pulled this one out with a more creative, well arranged verse....He was thorough and consistent throughout....so he got my vote

vote= X2daJ

This was feedback posted for X2daJ
 

checkin polls............................................

Voted For: X2daJ

aight i gotta say x2daj took this one

openin verse- x2daj
structure- x2daj
personals- x2daj
punchlines- x2daj
metas- hmm....
multis- x2daj
over all- x2daj

no hate on this vote just sayin da facts

Voted For: X2daJ

nice job fam u got this one kid u hit him up with some hard punches bro keep em comin work on vocab a bit but u got this battle won man nice structue and flow tho nice man nice
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Voted For: X2daJ

x3daj took this one very easy...harder punches, better wordplay, and better structure...and more creativitie
dj kid had a verse that i couldnt follow, too simple, and weak at tha same time to me, elevate on that i think. i think u are headed in tha wrong direction too homie, switch up yo style is what u should do if u ask me...yo punches werent hard, and most of em were uncomplete, meanin they didnt land...personals, x2daj killed u on that i feel...this was one-sided to me..but good shit...
overall-2daj took this one easy, elevate kidd...and dj kid, practice on better punches and wordplay...
drop votes on tha battle below in sig...and plz return tha favor yall...not too many people do that...if u hit that battle up in my sig, i'll get another one of yall open battles voted on by me...ya feels...