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Rar One ::vs:: biggdz40cal
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10-15 bars no feeding no crew,hating,BITCHING,ect... Voters need 175 post to drop a vote Have your verse up by 5 pm Pacific Time Zone No un-explained Votes Voters need at least One quote from each verse.. and no editing your verse, other wise you'll be DQ'd Think you can Handle all of that??? Ill Key up somthing later.. Once you peep this thread.. OnE |
Ok i got work in ish so make the deadline by midnight PTZ
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midnight tonight????!!
it' 1:35 PM WHERE i'M AT ...,.... AND i JUST WOKE UP..... i'LL LET YOU POST 1ST.....SINCE YOU THE VET! WE DONT NEED A DEADLINE,,,JUST POST BEFORE MONDAY!!!!!! I AGREE WITH ALL YOUR OTHER RULES TOO.. EXCEPT WHAT IS "no feeding"?????? HOLLAR.................. |
u still gon post 1st or wut?
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YO BIG40 YOU HAVE ANY VERSE ON HERE I WOULD LIKE TO PEEP YOUR MATERIAL
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check biggdz vs. spittin flames....
theres a few others also a page bacc or so...... |
Ok, its been long Enuff..
you should have written ya verse up by now, so im posting... Have yours up by Midnight...
You cant have Good Audio ~ when you can Barley spit Decent on Text// See this cats picture? ~ looks like a Cypris Hill reject// Afraid to think ~ He know's He's next to have His mind perplexd// Minds vexed ~ ta why you tryd to Sex Elton John by saying you can Flex// I understand you Fuck Bitches ~ but come on thats ya Man// You dont D/R rich men ~just love White Emcees more than Stan// He's Frontin with two loses ~ claimen his styles flawless// Gaind two black eyes ~ Like Pamela Anderson runnin Bra-less// Now listen closely, before i blow you away quickly, you mouth could be ill but wouldnt spit sickly// Couldnt use curse words right ~ if you learn'd from a witch// Your moms a white whore ~ ina better word a bitch// Fuck..your just a frontin fag whos to fat to fit in a ford// Rappin hot? ~ only if you lit fire next to ya vocal cord// Come on now...take your wack ass back to being a bag boy// Only time you fuckin cats up ~ when usen an animal sex toy// |
THAT SHIT WAS WHACK
1ST OF ALL DOGG.YOU NEED TO LEARN HOW TA SPELL,BEFORE
YOU DROP SOME SHIT.AND DOES IT LOOK LIKE HIS MOMMA COULD BE WHITE.CHECK YO GAME CAUSE THAT SHIT WAS LAME.YOU COULDNT DROP SOME PUNCHES IF YOU WAS LENNOX LEWIS.MY VOTE= BIGGDZ40CAL.AND HE HASNT EVEN STARTED.IM OUT DOGG....................PEACE AND KEEP PRACTICING,SOMEDAY YOU MIGHT BE A RAPPER. |
rollindubbs is gay...
faggish, herbish.. anything bad that comes to mind is wut you are....queer... i bet this otha kid wont even post... he looked at ya verse then drove away in his weak ride of his lol.... |
I'm CONTAMINATING YOUR HEALTH like HAZZARDOUS WASTE MATERIALS!....
cause when I SPILL FROM MY LID I INFECT YOU like your MOMS VENEREALS!!!....haha so bring the YELLOW TAPE for the CRIMESCENE it's a LYRICAL RAPE..... and from what I seen your GIVIN' UP ASS in every verse that you STATE.... HOW MANY MISTAKES CAN YOU MAKE??!!WHAT DOES IT TAKE TO BE FAKE??!!! I wouldn't know and if you show me CUZ I STILL COULDN'T RELATE!!! I GOT BEEF so I serve it and make you SCRAPE YOUR PLATE.... then CUT RAR-ONES with a GINSU til HEs BLEEDING STAKE.... this means your body seen the BUTCHER and your HEADS IN A LAKE... let the CATFISH EAT THAT CRAP cause A MIND'S A TERRIBLE THING TO WASTE..... when I SPRAY YOU GET WET MORE than BOTTLES OF MO(moet)... I'll POP YOUR TOP and watch you DROP like THONGS OF MODELIN' HOES... I'm a SOLDIER on this FIELD, a 4 STAR GENERAL when BATTLIN'..... your 92 TECMO BOWL I'm 2003 JOHN MADDEN...... and you,,..you couldn't SPIT FLAMES if you were a FIRE BREATHIN' DRAGGON.... the ONLY FLAMIN' your doin is being a FLAMIN' ASS FAGGOT!!!! didn't think I'd post huh? you were supposed to drop 1st.... WHY YOU ACTIN ALL SUPRSIED!!!!! |
uppin for votes
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I did NOT KNOW KARELESS WAS A HATER!!!!
DAMN THAT SUCKS!!!!!!!! I thought u wz cool!!! BIIOOCTH SEE MY AUDIO FREESTYLE!!!PUNK AS SOON AS I MAKE IT..... LOL> |
Damn this shit was onesided, yo rar one you had a few hot lines but most of ya punches was comin smooth but that strong, bigg ripped it, his shit was smooth and his hits landed harder
vote=biggdz40cal |
1-0 for the BIGG DOGG UPPIN............
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Thinkin
Yo are y'a'll down, check this out
Lil Dallas - Biggdz40cal vs. KARELESS - rar one y'a'll down? |
uppin for votes
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fucc.............votes ALREADY!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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uppin
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VOTE=BIGG DZ.
IT SEEMED LIKE RAR WAS JUST RUSHIN HIS VERSE. PUNCHES WEREN'T ALL THAT. VOCAB WAS SO SO. BIGG DZ HAD BETTER PUNCHES AND RHYME SCHEME. |
2-0 biggdz uppin..........
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uppin 4 votes
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Bout the only line i was feelin from Big... rar one took this, easily..Big your rhyme scheme was kinda bad.. Flow was simple.. You had absolutly NO personal punchs uppin for yall 1-0(in the rules it said voters need to quote, im tha only on doin it so far) holla holla |
DAMN I CANT BELEIVE SOMEONE READ THE RULES!!!
nobody has stuck to the rules on this WHOLE WACK ASS SITE....so FUCC THAT!!!! but whatever .............. thats what freinds are for............................................... ............... "Afraid to think ~ He know's He's next to have His mind perplexd// Minds vexed ~ ta why you tryd to Sex Elton John by saying you can Flex" come on make sense........... |
ayo Biggz..
i wasnt hatin, juss sayin wut i thought at the Moment... n-e wayz.. ima vote on dis one...nice and clearly too... 1rst off BIGGZ you tryna sway votes sayin "MAKE SENSE TA RAR ONE"... Vexed means confused, learn ya Vocab kid lol.. figure out the rest:D rar had betta flow and wordplay Easily.. biggz had the Multies by juss a lil... battles for text is bout punches and creativity wit wordplay really... plus his verse made me laugh...Biggz, ya verse wasnt bad but it didnt have enuff... Biggz I'm a SOLDIER on this FIELD, a 4 STAR GENERAL when BATTLIN'..... your 92 TECMO BOWL I'm 2003 JOHN MADDEN...... and you,,..you couldn't SPIT FLAMES if you were a FIRE BREATHIN' DRAGGON.... the ONLY FLAMIN' your doin is being a FLAMIN' ASS FAGGOT!!!! the 92 tecmo was Funny, i used to play that... you ended weak tho wit the last bar, the dragon thing was too predictable half way threw... Rar one You cant have Good Audio ~ when you can Barley spit Decent on Text// See this cats picture? ~ looks like a Cypris Hill reject// this bar was Funny too, plus it wuzza Personal punch towards Biggz Pic n' sig...lol vote=rar one nice battle to the both.. -$- |
Vote: rar one, i was just feelin his punches better, and it flowed much better
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Iight, thanks for all tha voters n ish but...
We need quotes, one from each verse so ya vote to count...
so as of now its 2-0 me... Uppin, for more votes.. one |
now who's bitchin...................
IF YOU WANNA GO BY RULES!!!!
YOU DIDN"T EVEN POST IN TIME!!! YOURDQ'd.......................................... .................................................. ..............CLOSE THREAD!!! |
LoL
your a fucking moron ou know that.. One how is that ^^ bitching? SHit, i even said i wouldnt count that vote becuase it didnt HAVE A QUOTE...
everytime you open your fucking mouth you just make stupid comments... You didnt seem to care i was late, n still let me battle, thats a cheap way to get a win, but fuck it, you dont get a win.. LoL nigga thinks he's the tupac of the net.. fuckin internet thug... Fuck it tho, Net beef is for pussys... Uppin for votes.. 2-0 me uppin for the KO O, n from now lets get some vet voters on this shit, no pussy one or two line droppers.. one |
breakdown
Rar one:::
You cant have Good Audio ~ when you can Barley spit Decent on Text// See this cats picture? ~ looks like a Cypris Hill reject// opening pretty dope personal, i looked at his pic, and laughed a little..thought maybe if you reworded it a little different it could of been better..but its straight. Afraid to think ~ He know's He's next to have His mind perplexd// Minds vexed ~ ta why you tryd to Sex Elton John by saying you can Flex// right here is just all filler,useless shit, the setup would of been alot better if your second line was a punch but was just babble.. I understand you Fuck Bitches ~ but come on thats ya Man// You dont D/R rich men ~just love White Emcees more than Stan// ok,not bad but sorta played concept He's Frontin with two loses ~ claimen his styles flawless// Gaind two black eyes ~ Like Pamela Anderson runnin Bra-less// cool, made me laugh Now listen closely, before i blow you away quickly, you mouth could be ill but wouldnt spit sickly// Couldnt use curse words right ~ if you learn'd from a witch// again useless material, felt the setup was good,but now with the second shit just becomes all useless shit,could of came better now its not effective Now listen closely, before i blow you away quickly, you mouth could be ill but wouldnt spit sickly// Couldnt use curse words right ~ if you learn'd from a witch// again not feeling this. Rappin hot? ~ only if you lit fire next to ya vocal cord// Come on now...take your wack ass back to being a bag boy// Only time you fuckin cats up ~ when usen an animal sex toy// ok rhyme scheme off man, umm ending kinda weak,should of came hard here,animal sex toy not bad punch but if worded better would of been hot biggdz40cal:: I'm CONTAMINATING YOUR HEALTH like HAZZARDOUS WASTE MATERIALS!.... cause when I SPILL FROM MY LID I INFECT YOU like your MOMS VENEREALS!!!.... ok opener,setup was cool, i thought you were going to come harder with the punch line for the second couplet,but man that was really weak.. so bring the YELLOW TAPE for the CRIMESCENE it's a LYRICAL RAPE..... and from what I seen your GIVIN' UP ASS in every verse that you STATE.... not feeling this at all, filler too me HOW MANY MISTAKES CAN YOU MAKE??!!WHAT DOES IT TAKE TO BE FAKE??!!! I wouldn't know and if you show me CUZ I STILL COULDN'T RELATE!!! no good punch man,this was blahhhh I GOT BEEF so I serve it and make you SCRAPE YOUR PLATE.... then CUT RAR-ONES with a GINSU til HEs BLEEDING STAKE.... weak shit this means your body seen the BUTCHER and your HEADS IN A LAKE... let the CATFISH EAT THAT CRAP cause A MIND'S A TERRIBLE THING TO WASTE..... umm ok but all useless shit man..all filler when I SPRAY YOU GET WET MORE than BOTTLES OF MO(moet)... I'll POP YOUR TOP and watch you DROP like THONGS OF MODELIN' HOES... booo I'm a SOLDIER on this FIELD, a 4 STAR GENERAL when BATTLIN'..... your 92 TECMO BOWL I'm 2003 JOHN MADDEN...... i know where your going with this, but man its all played shit,not hard hitting at all and you,,..you couldn't SPIT FLAMES if you were a FIRE BREATHIN' DRAGGON.... the ONLY FLAMIN' your doin is being a FLAMIN' ASS FAGGOT!!!! umm terrible ending shit, not feeling it at all i have to give this to rar one, i thought came better than biggs verse,with more punches,bigg came with little shit..all elementary shit...wasnt feeling it..and whole verse pretty much filler.. |
iight, finaly, lol
thats a KO son.. By explaind voters, but a good battle tho, yo hit me up on AIM biggz, i need chat at you ::AIM:: tha rar one one |
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