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Plutonium vs Mag.Nif.I.Cent
Battle Rules:
10-16 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting This is a crew battle between C.S and M.A.B Minimum posts to vote: 500 Check in by: 11-22-04 at 01:54 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
aight battle thread spotted...will check in soon :thumbup:
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Plutonium has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-19-04 06:09 PM.
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giving me food for thought...how can flow be ill a writer
U like jumbled "A Hitler", cause U both wind up "The Liar"* your verse backfired...& like always he's in bad condition even let you feed...but he keeps forgetting new system think he could flow intelligent...G, not with his additude ghostwriters flows for him...a hr. Must been a prostitute ^^that's how he flowed & he's still wack...mention rest? his biggest success was to conquest...no-show rematch see that? and da kid didn't even make a name for himself cause he once shared his name with mag...,virtue as well! *Switch the letters "A Hitler" around and you get "The Liar" |
Mag.Nif.I.Cent has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-21-04 11:57 PM.
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just like to tell you, I dropped 10 cause i was busy
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aiight check it...
Plutoniums straight from da lab but only cuz he was born in a test tube I'll use acid to make your flesh move.. you know im the best dude A battle or a car accident its still nothing for me to break ya grill in I would say you gonna make it but no rapper ever came from new zealand You just lost, but you dont have a choice, or a say in the matter It's kinda like you don't have a voice, but still try to chit chatter Point blank you should fold i'll win... make you fall like bowling pins Plus youre around enygma so much i thought yall was the olsen twins This battle's over, im not spare-ing him, im preparing my paring knife Because if Plutonium got in the Source, you'd owe them a pair of mics |
aight good battle, uppin for some votes!
dont sleep on this one, |
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uhhhhhh... i'm at a loss for words on this battle.... but i understand... mag, i'll holla at u later....lol
U like jumbled "A Hitler", cause U both wind up "The Liar"* ... *just shakes his head*... ^^that's how he flowed & he's still wack...mention rest? his biggest success was to conquest...no-show rematch ...*wussup with that bar?!!...ouch*... ghostwriters flows for him...a hr. Must been a prostitute ... *nothin to say about that one*... |
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checkin the poll..................................
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lookin for more dough... ya need my account?...lol
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This was feedback posted for Plutonium
Checking Polls............................................
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This was feedback posted for Plutonium
checkin polls.........................both stay up
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upping for votes drop a link and i'll return the favor
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I, you suck dog, trash ya keyboard.
Ya wordplay str8 anus, the hitler line is wack. we wouldn't have had a clue @ what you was tryin to say if you hadn't explained. Ya flow is nasty in a bad way, work REALLY hard at it. Far as I'm concerned you still belong in regular Front Lines. You should check out tutorials dog, right now. Raps not ya thing at the time, build ya skillz up some more then come back to do battle. Mag ya verse was cool, I was feelin the Olsen Twin line, overall you pretty much out shined dude in every category. Whether it be wordplay,punches, metas you won. Keep up the good work, overall you was 8/10 |
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Sup checking the polls and uping for votes...
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Mag...ripped...him...
...weerd, checkin' the polls. |
Upping For Some Votes Here Drop A Link I'll RTF.......
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uppin for votes... c'mon y'all this been open for a grip now...
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upping for votes drop a link ill return the favor..
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Uping for my boi,...
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Upping for votes...they will be returned if you have a link available
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Voted For: Mag.Nif.I.Cent
Flow: I Like The Way Your Structure Lined Up..Vocabulary Was Very Decent....Punches Was Good.....Rate Them It Was Hitting...WorPlay Was Alright..Personals Was Nice...You Could Of Done Better Hommie...But Over All It Was A Good Flow I'll Give It A 9/10 Plutonium: Pretty Decent Structure Was Lined Up As Well....Vocabulary Was Some What Basic But Still There..Punches Was Kind Of Hitting Not As Hard But It Was There...WordPlay.....Good Job Hommie Nice Uses...Over All Your Flow Came Out As Well Decent As Flows But Not As Hard.....8.5/10 Vote=Flow Return The Favor http://community.rapverse.com/showt...eferrerid=38190 ^^^^^^^^^^WickedClown & Zeke [4] Vs StreetRyda & 4Blood2Hound0[1] |
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checkin feed back yup
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Voted For: Mag.Nif.I.Cent
Plutonium- your verse was aight....your punches hit well but not that good they just didnt hit as hard enough tho....Your wordplay was decent...your structure was good, and also easy to read overall you did well on your part 7/10..... Flow- Your verse was good....your punches were good also but they seemed to hit pretty good ...ive seen better from you but your punches were good and enough for you to win this battle.....also your structure was good an easy to read...so overall you got this with a better verse and better hard hittin punches... 8.3/10...... vote- Flow Intelligent...... |
upping for votes drop a link and ill return the favor
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Voted For: Mag.Nif.I.Cent
Plutoniums straight from da lab but only cuz he was born in a test tube I'll use acid to make your flesh move.. you know im the best dude flow was good but it was pretty basic- A battle or a car accident its still nothing for me to break ya grill in I would say you gonna make it but no rapper ever came from new zealand solid- no filler at all, effective bar, good personal as well You just lost, but you dont have a choice, or a say in the matter It's kinda like you don't have a voice, but still try to chit chatter I personally hate the rhyme itself, aside from that its o.k but not ur best again Point blank you should fold i'll win... make you fall like bowling pins Plus youre around enygma so much i thought yall was the olsen twins lol If its true its funny, since I dont know I take ur word for it, decent bar here This battle's over, im not spare-ing him, im preparing my paring knife Because if Plutonium got in the Source, you'd owe them a pair of mics decent closer, i felt the punch, setup was nice- a couple weak spots but all in all good verse, 1 giving me food for thought...how can flow be ill a writer U like jumbled "A Hitler", cause U both wind up "The Liar"* Nice wordplay here, but why you say U both? it just made the line seem recycled to me, but good wordplay definately your verse backfired...& like always he's in bad condition even let you feed...but he keeps forgetting new system kind of a weak punch, i expected some sick shit after that opener think he could flow intelligent...G, not with his additude ghostwriters flows for him...a hr. Must been a prostitute ^^that's how he flowed & he's still wack...mention rest? his biggest success was to conquest...no-show rematch both these bars flow badly, and writing a wack line and saying thats how ur opponent writes is not an effective attack, or at least not here see that? and da kid didn't even make a name for himself cause he once shared his name with mag...,virtue as well! If its true its funny and again since I dont know then props to u, good closer after re-reading both verses I felt that Plutonium had the nicest wordplay in the battle, but consistency and punches go to flow, I just couldn't get over those two bars in the center of plutoniums verse...1 |
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Checking this shit out... i cant vote.. but i'd say that flow won..,.
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shit my bad, but i know u active votin could u return the fav?-- http://community.rapverse.com/showb...=1#post1807015- thanks.
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Voted For: Mag.Nif.I.Cent
A'ight...this was a pretty one-sided battle...it is clear that Flow Intelligent has much more experience than Plutonium. Not saying that Plutonium had a bad verse, it was just that Flow's was better. Plutonium had some nice punches...flow was perfect, personals was there...but Flow came wit some mad metas and ill personals. No hate. Return the favor if you haven't already...thanks. Topical: hipnoticz Punchline: logic 4 dubz Battle: 9th Degree Topical: Metaskriptz |
Voted For: Mag.Nif.I.Cent
Flwo won thi sweweerd. Better flow and punches fashos, yo. weerd.. I'm outtie my niggas, pc |
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