*Zeus* vs .::FaTaL LyRiCiSt::.
 

Battle Rules:

3-15 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 11-20-04 at 04:31 AM

Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in.

*Zeus* has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-19-04 04:59 PM.

Ya Lyrics Aint Fatal....Run From Trouble Like A Baby Under The Table,
I'll Put Your Ass On That Flat Line....................See If You Stay Stable,
Your Unable To Defeat Me "Kid".......... Stay In Your "Baby Cradle"
I See It So Clear Now.............Like Threw A Glass Of Water......
Your Here To Elevate But You Cant Get Hotter And Hotter.....
Only Way Is If You Morph To A Torch,...That Would Be The Day,
I Got A Razor Blade And My Fist...............Wan' Play???
How You Gone Talk Heavy And You In A Crew Called Pink???
JESUS CHRIST Yall Are Worst Then The Group Nsync.......
I'll Throw Punches Dead At Your Rectum,.................
Your Crew Bin Acting Up I Have To Inspect Uhm........
Accepting This Battle...........Your In A lot Of Danger,
But Aye Come Put Another Win To My Record Yo Dont Be A Stranger

.::FaTaL LyRiCiSt::. has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-19-04 07:13 PM.

Listen i glisten n cristen n pop da crist......
Most of tha rappaz from cali dead u bout to hop da list....

Lil nigga u wack get ya weight up nigga grow up......
Ill plant a bomb on ma chest n fuckin hug u till it blow up....

NIgga pleez wack emcees alwayz get beat.......
If i take ma shoes off den maybe u'll smell defeat(da feet).....

wuteva five minute keystyle ummm yea good luck doggz 1

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v/ *zues*

The one with the huggin and bomb shit was really wack no offense ..

Zeus came with a harder punch pretty one sided ..

But the flow how to go to u :thumbup:

Voted For: *Zeus*

Zeus won this battle barely becuz neither verse was very hot. but Zeus came harder with better bars so he wins this battle based on stronger punches.
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Voted For: *Zeus*

Listen i glisten n cristen n pop da crist......
Most of tha rappaz from cali dead u bout to hop da list....
decent
Lil nigga u wack get ya weight up nigga grow up......
Ill plant a bomb on ma chest n fuckin hug u till it blow up....
no
NIgga pleez wack emcees alwayz get beat.......
If i take ma shoes off den maybe u'll smell defeat(da feet).....
decent closer

Ya Lyrics Aint Fatal....Run From Trouble Like A Baby Under The Table,
I'll Put Your Ass On That Flat Line....................See If You Stay Stable,
Your Unable To Defeat Me "Kid".......... Stay In Your "Baby Cradle"
an okay opner
I See It So Clear Now.............Like Threw A Glass Of Water......
Your Here To Elevate But You Cant Get Hotter And Hotter.....
decent
Only Way Is If You Morph To A Torch,...That Would Be The Day,
I Got A Razor Blade And My Fist...............Wan' Play???
decent
How You Gone Talk Heavy And You In A Crew Called Pink???
JESUS CHRIST Yall Are Worst Then The Group Nsync.......
decent again
I'll Throw Punches Dead At Your Rectum,.................
Your Crew Bin Acting Up I Have To Inspect Uhm........
no
Accepting This Battle...........Your In A lot Of Danger,
But Aye Come Put Another Win To My Record Yo Dont Be A Stranger
Decent

Overall
Zeus took this one tho
Punches were harder…
Tha structure was aight
Tha flow was pretty decent..
And the vocab was okay too…

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uppin dis bitch na mean nuff said 1

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Well Im In His Crew So I Can't Vote, But Zeus You Took This Hands Down. Word

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Voted For: *Zeus*

v/*zeus*

breakdown
fatal-aight man you came real weak in this battle....you had no personals flowed well but no real punches were in there.....your structure was tha only thing u had over zeus....
you shoulda thought it out man.....no vocab and you just idk i wasnt feeling ya verse

zeus-aight u had horrble structure if you take out all the periods in it..dont try to compensate by doint that...unless its a pause then its aight some were pauses but some just didnt work as a pause....you had okay punches better than fatal...dont self glorify soo much tho....okay vocab put some multi's in there itll help ya flow some....

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fatal-NIgga pleez wack emcees alwayz get beat.......
If i take ma shoes off den maybe u'll smell defeat(da feet).....

zeus-Ya Lyrics Aint Fatal....Run From Trouble Like A Baby Under The Table,
I'll Put Your Ass On That Flat Line....................See If You Stay Stable,
Your Unable To Defeat Me "Kid".......... Stay In Your "Baby Cradle"

v/*zeus*

return the favor links in the sig....honest explained
peace~1

Voted For: *Zeus*

Fatal Lyricist that was the worse piece of shit i have ever seen.. especially the defeat line thats only been used 90748642865309867120 times.. pitiful...

zeus ya verse was decent i wasnt feeling all the periods tho either make your lines longer and leave out the periods or make it shorter and leave out the periods..:thumbup:

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Voted For: *Zeus*

I think that Cincanatus got this battle because i feel that Cincanatus came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt Cincanatus got it they were used effectifely and were on point FaTaL LyRiCiSt u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to Cincanatus good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to Cincanatus and flow and structure i'll give to Cincanatus.

V/Cincanatus There's my sig be sure to return the favour honestly