(~*~Dj KiD~*~) vs Reloaded
 

Battle Rules:

6 - Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-19-04 at 05:46 PM

Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in.

(~*~Dj KiD~*~) has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-19-04 05:18 PM.

Reloaded has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-19-04 05:22 PM.

yo checking in. prepare to get merked bitch and you better post a verse too. calling me out nothing.

yo this lil bitch calling me out and just dont know
what kind of music does he "DJ"?Old McDonald

this newb is like a cold and i got a little cough
he says he is from "in my bed" does he jack off

ill have this nigga body "ripping" more than his avatar
bitch stepping to anyone and spitting self glorification shit wont get you far

upping for some votes...............

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merked

hey yo we all know that this lil bitch got merked. upping for some votes........

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Voted For: Reloaded

Reloaded - iight verse your flow was good and you had some good punches.

Best Line - this newb is like a cold and i got a little cough
he says he is from "in my bed" does he jack off

Worst Line - yo this lil bitch calling me out and just dont know
what kind of music does he "DJ"?Old McDonald

Dj-KiD-> iight verse, your flow was on target but you didnt really have a good punch.

Best Line - picking a name like reloaded ur gonna get shot
man u weak get knocked out by the pot damn ass thinking u hot

Worst Line - reloaded u reload ya pellit gun fucked it is like ur mum
wankin yaself thinkin ur gunna cum man ur fuckin dumb


OVERALL - This battle was close, both are on the same level but I have to give the vote to someone so Reloaded gets mine. He had the better PUNCH in the battle. DJ work on some punches that aint gotta do wit being gay and fuckin your mom.

Vote - Reloaded

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Voted For: Reloaded

Okay I really wasn't feeling this battle... close one for your skill levels but still I wasn't really impressed by much.

Now first of all... Imma be blunt and tell you reloaded won this.

but heres the breakdown

Vocab - Tie... neither of you used much vocab... it was all very very simple
Punches - Reloaded, main reason you won. It wasn't good, but it was better than DJs. DJ your stuff has been played out majorly man...
Personals - No one... there was absolutely no sense of personals at all in this battle.
Structure - DJ, you had better structure. Reloaded you stretched a line there at the end, but you don't have too bad of structure.
Metas/Wordplay - tie, all simple.

Pretty much you both need to elevate. Good luck in the future.

thanks. upping for some more votes.

Voted For: Reloaded

aight pretty wack battle but here's da vote

openin verse- reloaded
structure- both had it a lil bit stretched out but dj kid took it
punchlines- reloaded
personals- reloaded
multis- didn't see alot but dj kid had it
over all - reloaded

no hating or notin on this vote
both of you guys keep elevatin

This was feedback posted for Reloaded
 

just checking polls

Voted For: Reloaded

Close battle, but Reloaded took it...both peeps need elevation...flow and structure was decent on both sides, and generally the same. Punches make battles, and Reloaded hit harder with them

Return the favor.

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Voted For: (~*~Dj KiD~*~)

yo this lil bitch calling me out and just dont know
what kind of music does he "DJ"?Old McDonald
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ WACK AND PLAYED MAYNE


this newb is like a cold and i got a little cough
he says he is from "in my bed" does he jack off
^^^^^^^^ SEXUAL PUNCHES ARE PLAYED ALSO TOO BASIC



ill have this nigga body "ripping" more than his avatar
bitch stepping to anyone and spitting self glorification shit wont get you far
^^^^^^^^^^^ NOT AN GOOD CLOSA PLUS THAT PUNCH WAS WACK


RELOADED- I CAN TELL U ALREADY LOSS THIS BECAUSE U DIDNT HAD NO PUNCHES NO FLOW DISSING HIS AVY THAT MAKES AN PERSONAL BUT U GOTS TO HAVE AN DOPE PUNCH TO GO ALONG WITH THAT "OK"





ill reload this shit n shot u down u wont be reloaded ull be dead
u like incest u like to fuck ur mum up n give her head*
^^^^^^^^^^^^ I CAN SAY THATS AN PUNCH GOOD FLOW



reloaded u reload ya pellit gun fucked it is like ur mum
wankin yaself thinkin ur gunna cum man ur fuckin dumb
^^^^^^^^^ SO RELOADED IS AN GIRL OK UM DATS AN PUNCH NOT GOOD THOUGH BUT AN PUNCH




picking a name like reloaded ur gonna get shot
man u weak get knocked out by the pot damn ass thinking u hot
^^^^^^^^^ WACK ASS CLOSA NOT AN GOOD PUNCH


DJ-KID= ALRIGHT U HAD PUNCHES AND FLOW BUT AT DA CLOSA PART U WENT OUT MAYNE NOT AN GOOD ONE........BUT THA 2 BARZ U HAD WAS GOOD "OK" PUNCH BUT ELEVATE AIIIIIGHT



OVERALL= OK MAYNE DIS AN ONE-SIDED BATTLE

RELOADED U AINT CAME WITH NUTTIN NO PUNCHES PLUS U DIDNT HAD GOOD FLOW

DJ-KID= U HAD PUNCHES WHICH MAKES U TAKE THA WIN

V-DJ KID

Voted For: (~*~Dj KiD~*~)

weak battle



Dj-KiD
u had sum nice punches that landed
good persona's
structure was okay
and tha flow on there & vocab was koo..
5.5/10

Reloaded
yo punches were okay but were weak tho
tha structure was decent
tha flow lack'd a little
4/10

*reloaded elevate more tho

Overall
Dj-KiD tok this one
had harder punches, and a decent flow

Voted For: (~*~Dj KiD~*~)

punches= tie
mettas= reloaded
wordplay=none
structure= dj kid

my vote= dj kid

Voted For: Reloaded

nice drop man u got this on lock u deff got btter vocab and structure along with flow keep droppin and uppin man

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