Kwell vs *Zeus*
 

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Check in by: 11-19-04 at 11:53 PM

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*Zeus* has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-19-04 09:23 PM.

Kwell has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-19-04 09:24 PM.

U far from godly, u jus another wannabe in the game foo
truly mythical? nah, more like a myth that simply aint true
Zeus claims to live in the clouds...quit lyin, that shit is dumb
that's a sorryass excuse for why u constantly gittin sunned
i'ma make my style like rough toilet paper, wit my lyrics hated
and win by applyin myself, jus to leave this asshole irritated
these punches'll hit ya chest yo, hurtin till ya breath slows
leave ya weezin & mumblin, till u hard to follow like a dress code
unlike u, i know how to speak my mind...that sucks for u son
only time u'll step up n address,
.....is when the Salvation Army aint got much to choose from
u need assistance wit this rap shit, while i fry u like dead fish
cuz u'll never polish ya shit on ya own, like a genie widda deathwish

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Voted For: *Zeus*

v/ zeus
this was definetly a close battle, both of you had nice flow and good punches..
i like how creative both of you were, definetly a big up to you both in that category...
when you break it down i think that zeus's flow was better than kwells
but the punches were probably at about the same level...
really what won this one for zeus was his flow
and kwell some of your lines i didnt like
but definetly a good battle

Voted For: *Zeus*

punches-zeus
mets-nones
multis-none
personals-zeus
stuture-zeus

zeus wins he came a little harder had better flow n stuture goood all the way tho kwell came alright but wasnt as hard stuture just went of 4lines from da end if he didnt do that he wud of got stture but zeus still came way harder so he get my vote 1 sided came harder and had better flow stuture

Voted For: Kwell

this was a weak battle

zeus u need to elevate..work on punches and personals cause u aint have nothing in ya verse..it was basically a wack verse..only thing going ur way was the flow...overall - 2/10

kwell u had a near decent verse..u had a personal in the opener which was good..u tried some punches that aint work out..but at least u attempted some punches...overall - 4/10


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Voted For: *Zeus*

idk i think it was a pretty decint battle. but in the end zeus came out on top. he had good punches that hit n the flow was pretty hot. kwell u didnt come that hard u needed a lil more punches in there to. but zeus ya verse was hot so

my vote=zeus

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Voted For: Kwell

Kwell - iight spit ive seen better flow ya.. but good wordplay and punches.

Best Line - unlike u, i know how to speak my mind...that sucks for u son
only time u'll step up n address,
.....is when the Salvation Army aint got much to choose from

Worst Line - Zeus claims to live in the clouds...quit lyin, that shit is dumb
that's a sorryass excuse for why u constantly gittin sunned

*Zeus* - good verse, you had good multis and a good flow.

Best Line - Dam This Kid Keep Yapping Somebody Please Kwell(Quell)Him,
He Dug His Hole Around Rap Verse So Deep This Dumb ass Fell In

Worst Line - You've Bin Infected By Me Like White Blood Cells,I'll Coz You Cancer........
Kid's Trying To Be Allan Iverson???......How Is That When I'm The Anwser???


OVERALL - close battle here, but my vote goes to.. Kwell. He had better wordplay and punches. Zeus you had some good multi's and a good flow. You just need to throw some hard punches.

Vote - Kwell

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Voted For: *Zeus*

This Battle Was Hott. Close Right Down To The Key Lines..

And The Reason I Voted Zues Was This..

Kid's Trying To Be Allan Iverson???......How Is That When I'm The Anwser???


Nice..

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Voted For: *Zeus*

zues takes this let me brake it down
flow zues
multi zues
punches zues
wordplay kwelli
meat4 zues
ioener and closer zues

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Voted For: *Zeus*

Both verses very good. Tough call.

open: cin: "Dam This Kid Keep Yapping Somebody Please Kwell(Quell)Him,
He Dug His Hole Around Rap Verse So Deep This Dumb ass Fell In" -Nice opening. Both opening were good, and entertaining but cin's hit harder.

close:kwell:"u need assistance wit this rap shit, while i fry u like dead fish
cuz u'll never polish ya shit on ya own, like a genie widda deathwish". I did like cin's close, pressing "SEND", was good but kwell's use of metaphor took it and the rhyming was dope.

cin's best line:"You've Bin Infected By Me Like White Blood Cells,I'll Coz You Cancer........
Kid's Trying To Be Allan Iverson???......How Is That When I'm The Anwser???" very nice. Good use of knowledge about white blood cells. Tasty line that.

Kwell's: "i'ma make my style like rough toilet paper, wit my lyrics hated
and win by applyin myself, jus to leave this asshole irritated"
-Fucking sweet! not much more to say

All in all, Kwell's verse was real goos, a good amount of meta's and good punches.
But cincantus' verse had the harder and better punches, that is mainly wat won it. His structure and flow were ill too.

Well done both of you. I hope i can get as good as either of the two of you.

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Voted For: *Zeus*

cincanatus or w/e barely won this neither verse was very hot at all. Kwell's verse was pretty basic and lacked creativity, and Cincanatus' verse seemed to b more like a ramble at the end than a good verse. it really wasn't easy to follow, but since kwell didnt come as hard with punches or personals im goin with cincanatus.
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Voted For: Kwell

shit.... both had tight rythmes, but the multis - personals - and crazy word play of kwell got me hooked... both had good drops... but definately gotta give me vote to

Kwell

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Voted For: *Zeus*

Vote: zeke

Opening: kwell
Ending: zeke
lyrics: zeke, slightly mo elevated
wordplay: tied
originality: zeke
structure: tied
personals: tied
punches: zeke
multis: zeke

zeke: 7/10
kwell: 6.2/10

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