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*FaceLess* vs String9487
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7-15 LinesLines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 50 Check in by: 11-20-04 at 11:02 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. Forfeit by Faceless / Zeke |
String9487 has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-19-04 11:17 PM.
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*FaceLess* has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-19-04 11:20 PM.
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Damn!,Once And For All I'll Prove This Kid,Belongs On My Shoes, Kids Illiterate,...I Can Tell By How He Doesn't Follow RapVerse Rules Battling Me??You'll Lose,I'm To Drastic I'll Wrap You In Plastic.... And Like Magic Have You Turn Blue...Stretch Your Neck Like Elastic You Emulate My Rap Coz You Cant Rap For Yourself....Your Health Is Fucked Up Battling Me You Better Call Yourself Some Help........ I'll Rap A >String< Around Your >Neck< Till You Choke To Death Pull It Almighty Until I See Your Out Of Breath....I Aint Finished Yet You Expect Me To Respect You A Piece Of Dirty String??................ I'll Connect Your >Face< To My Knee Like A Finger To A Ring.......... You Lack The Skill Needed To Defeat Me I'm The King..................... I'll Destroy Your Confidence, And Pass You Down Like House Of Congress Coz You Cand Destroy Me Your Played Lines Are LongLess..................... This Is Bogus With My Damage,You Wouldn't Congest With Pebto Bismo Your Punches Is Played Out,Weak Lines Your Whole Style Is Pitiful |
check check....STRING IS IN THE BUILDING
--Time to Hang niggas--- yo... u can get rocked, wit some critical shakes cuz i dont see ya punches stickin, like invisible tape son u just a pitiful ape, and those times that u won battles, r mythical dates u get popped when i ride thru, block out ya eyes view n bludgeon u wit bars to knock out ya I.Q. diss nigga gay he'd b glad to swallow shit n he gon try to save "face" like a bad cosmotologist n yo ya girl gets a choke cuz i left white spots in her neck like she got strepthroat but im so wack ima catch an L from you so ima just tell ya dude, i aint hot enuff to catch hell from u |
hahah im so fuckin wack...uppin for votes
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hahah im so fuckin wack...uppin for votes
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Voted For: *FaceLess*
Damn!,Once And For All I'll Prove This Kid,Belongs On My Shoes, Kids Illiterate,...I Can Tell By How He Doesn't Follow RapVerse Rules …decent Battling Me??You'll Lose,I'm To Drastic I'll Wrap You In Plastic.... And Like Magic Have You Turn Blue...Stretch Your Neck Like Elastic …decent You Emulate My Rap Coz You Cant Rap For Yourself....Your Health Is Fucked Up Battling Me You Better Call Yourself Some Help........ …nice I'll Rap A >String< Around Your >Neck< Till You Choke To Death Pull It Almighty Until I See Your Out Of Breath....I Aint Finished Yet …death & yet & don’t rhyme…no hea You Expect Me To Respect You A Piece Of Dirty String??................ I'll Connect Your >Face< To My Knee Like A Finger To A Ring.......... You Lack The Skill Needed To Defeat Me I'm The King..................... …meh…decent here I'll Destroy Your Confidence, And Pass You Down Like House Of Congress Coz You Cand Destroy Me Your Played Lines Are LongLess..................... …okay This Is Bogus With My Damage,You Wouldn't Congest With Pebto Bismo Your Punches Is Played Out,Weak Lines Your Whole Style Is Pitiful …decent closer yo... u can get rocked, wit some critical shakes cuz i dont see ya punches stickin, like invisible tape …decent son u just a pitiful ape, and those times that u won battles, r mythical dates …no…tha flow lacks here u get popped when i ride thru, block out ya eyes view n bludgeon u wit bars to knock out ya I.Q. …um…no diss nigga gay he'd b glad to swallow shit n he gon try to save "face" like a bad cosmotologist …okay decent n yo ya girl gets a choke cuz i left white spots in her neck like she got strepthroat …again flow lacks..no but im so wack ima catch an L from you so ima just tell ya dude, i aint hot enuff to catch hell from u ……decent vote = Faceless came harder in punches… structure was good… and tha flow was good too… String ur shit sucked..don’t kno how u Got that many wins tho.. |
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This was feedback posted for *FaceLess*
hmmm.... was this battle some kinda comedy central type thing?... i really hope neither one of you were serious about this.... sheesh.... all i can do is laugh...sooooo.... lol..there.... i did it
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Voted For: String9487
OK STRINGS DOPE OPENER DOPE MULTIS AND FLOW WAS REALLY GOOD GOOD DISSES I AINT LIKE THE ENDER THOUGH STILL GOOD SHIT THE FLOW WAS DOPE AS FUCK A 7.5/10 FACELESS OPENER WAS WACK PUNCHES AND DISES WERE GOOD ENDER AINT REALLY RHYME GOOD EITHER VOCAB FLOW AND STRUCTURE WERE ALL GOOD TOO THE FINGER TO RING WAS A WACK ASS LINE YOUR PUNCHES AND FLOW WASNT AS GOOD AND NO REAL MULTIS STRINGS TOOK THIS EASILY NO HATE JUST A HONEST VOTE 5/10 |
Voted For: *FaceLess*
check check....STRING IS IN THE BUILDING ^^^^ i think you should shut the fuck up faceless...... some good flow and structure here..... bars are nice and even.... flows well.... maybe you stretched the bars a bit but owell... they still alright string just shut the fuck up with you check check shit it pisses me off..... you flow is wack.... and structure.... well there is none... your bars are everywhere punches are pretty weak so overall a pretty weak verse by you mate..... but no hate.. you can only elevate vote to faceless... you return the favour k |
yo man return the favour and drop a vote on one of the battle in the sig ok.. thx
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i really dont care what pisses u off or not hahaha i couldnt care less about ur punkass
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Voted For: String9487
V/string other guy was garbage. and no punches. string just keep gettin better please |
uppin for votes holla at ya boy in PM if u want them returned
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uppin for votes holla at ya boy in PM if u want them returned
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Voted For: *FaceLess*
Vote: Faceless DAMN STRING IVE SEEN BETTA DROPS DEN DAT PECE OF WACK YOU DROPPED MAN...BUT ANYWAY... opening: face - string yo shit didnt work endin: face - nice wordplay: face lyrics:face on anotha level Personals: face - barely neither had em really Punches: faces - jus cos came bit mo elevated away from blowjob and poppin shots lines Originality:face - pepto bismal Structure: tied Face - 6.5/10 string - 5.5/10 Returnwith honest vote. Links in sig. Peace |
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uppin for votes holla at ya boy in PM if u want them returned
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uppin for votes holla at ya boy in PM if u want them returned
__________________ When you see me in tha street, remember.... YOU DONT KNOW ME |
Voted For: String9487
String-Punches were 3 times better than his. Thats pretty much why you got my vote. I ain't gonna pay attention to structure and all that. It ain't important Faceless-Your punches weren't really hittin at all. Most of your verse was boring. Just make it enjoyable for the people to read and u would had it. no hate. just a pointer |
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