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B.WALLakaILLNESS vs Lethal-C
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10- Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting ready to spit ready to go. Hear this, feel this, think this Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 11-23-04 at 07:36 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
B.WALLakaILLNESS has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-20-04 07:37 PM.
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Lethal-C has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-20-04 07:48 PM.
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Poetic justice about to form in shape of B dot Wall
Lethal-C matter of fact reverse it to see lethal fall Like a Cobra i spit acid blinding let you feel agony Second move is a Bite to the neck oh so painfully I grab your tongue with authority and rip it out...tasty Sit suffering on bits,stick ur tongue in ur ass for some real shit Shoulda got some vitamin C, but i see you lack juice So i gave ya straight vitamin dick aka man juice your pops he fat ugly and ps seen ur moms hamburger pussy Lethal-C not quite Illness.get down and blow for forgiveness |
good luck, got no beef outside the battle but if ya ever want more give ya t-bone.
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I'll for ever be the illest ta spit text on tha mic so i suggest u listen up n' watch
If you reach my level i'll Connect My Legs To A Power Outlet and Kick It Up A Notch i’ll Shuffle A Deck Of Cards Through Ya Skull just to Play A Mind Trick Dehydrated Tongues Pulled Through Optic Lens the way u'll never See A Blind Spit My Reign Got Another Son In The Forecast like Multi Solar Weather Predictions Remember Just Listen N' I'll Put Ya Thoughts To Rest faster than Recovering Coma Victims..!! Tha E gotcha feelin so luscious n' voluptuous Cuz I't totally is made to make you an aphrodisiac I'm a Killa From tha bronx trained ta give ya brain some N.Eposure Now how deep iz dat Where's He at Duluth? B.W. Ain't From Da Hood n' ya skills are painfully poor like a sore bum Ya rhymes are like drillin through retards' heads they cause bore dumb(boredom) U A Lady.. So I Ain't Got No Beef..Not Gonna Throw Up My Hands N' fight I suggest you begin spittin teeth so ya Wack Ass rhymes will bite |
I'll for ever be the illest ta spit text on tha mic so i suggest u listen up n' watch
If you reach my level i'll Connect My Legs To A Power Outlet and Kick It Up A Notch i’ll Shuffle A Deck Of Cards Through Ya Skull just to Play A Mind Trick Dehydrated Tongues Pulled Through Optic Lens the way u'll never See A Blind Spit My Reign Got Another Son In The Forecast like Multi Solar Weather Predictions Remember Just Listen N' I'll Put Ya Thoughts To Rest faster than Recovering Coma Victims..!! Tha E gotcha feelin so luscious n' voluptuous Cuz I't totally is made to make you an aphrodisiac I'm a Killa From tha bronx trained ta give ya brain some N.Eposure Now how deep iz dat Where's He at Duluth? B.W. Ain't From Da Hood n' ya skills are painfully poor like a sore bum Ya rhymes are like drillin through retards' heads they cause bore dumb(boredom) U A Lady.. So I Ain't Got No Beef..Not Gonna Throw Up My Hands N' fight I suggest you begin spittin teeth so ya Wack Ass rhymes will bite |
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I'll for ever be the illest ta spit text on tha mic so i suggest u listen up n' watch If you reach my level i'll Connect My Legs To A Power Outlet and Kick It Up A Notch i’ll Shuffle A Deck Of Cards Through Ya Skull just to Play A Mind Trick Dehydrated Tongues Pulled Through Optic Lens the way u'll never See A Blind Spit My Reign Got Another Son In The Forecast like Multi Solar Weather Predictions Remember Just Listen N' I'll Put Ya Thoughts To Rest faster than Recovering Coma Victims..!! Tha E gotcha feelin so luscious n' voluptuous Cuz I't totally is made to make you an aphrodisiac I'm a Killa From tha bronx trained ta give ya brain some N.Eposure Now how deep iz dat Where's He at Duluth? B.W. Ain't From Da Hood n' ya skills are painfully poor like a sore bum Ya rhymes are like drillin through retards' heads they cause bore dumb(boredom) U A Lady.. So I Ain't Got No Beef..Not Gonna Throw Up My Hands N' fight I suggest you begin spittin teeth so ya Wack Ass rhymes will bite |
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hey whats up nice rhymes but im sitting here sitting here sitting here wait its three days i got no beef with you but could you plz reply sooner im old and gray. Made my shit in 5 min not 50 hours leave it to the people to decide who has power. :spit: :spit:
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Sorry bout that homie I was at work doing over nights n' shit tryin to make that paper for the holidays
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uppin foreva please vote on this spit peepz I know ya'll godda give us somethin'
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Voted For: B.WALLakaILLNESS
voting for B.Wall because his punches just hit hard and his rhyme scheme worked...Lethal came hard too but the disses shot out by wall i felt i think this was a great battle that went down but walls shit was hardcore |
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Voted For: B.WALLakaILLNESS
B.Walla AkAIllness: Dam Kid You Had It Punches, Vocabulary It Wass All There,Personals How You Got SHit Done,Lol Good Shit Didnt See Much WordPlay There But Other THings Made Up For That, Decentcy,But Try And Make Your Lines Evern Like The First To Lines If It's Possible Lethal-c: Aiight You Aint Come Hard Nuff But Your Verse Was Decent I Like Your Vocab Nice Boy, Structure Was Alright Decent WordPlay Catch Up On It, Also Punches Catch Up On That To And You'll Be Good Add Some Personals In It And Some Multis Werrddd... B.Wall...Return The Favor http://community.rapverse.com/showt...eferrerid=38190 Me Vs Legend I'm Up 3-0 |
Voted For: Lethal-C
A'ight...you both need to elevate...alot. But Lethal C came much better wit more heavy punches...personals are lacking on both sides, flow was better from B.Wall, but Lethal C got this...no hate, just elevate. Return the favor... Topical: hipnoticz Punchline: logic 4 dubz Battle: 9th Degree Topical: Metaskriptz Thanks. |
Voted For: Lethal-C
This was an overall good batle but im goin to have to give this one to .......... I really like the flow to both verses there was a nice touch to B.W. flow but it still could have been a little better with the wordplay, Nice sructure to both verses, LETHAL C had some GREAT line too i really liked his flow but ur metas werent visible but punchlines were sick nice battle -Please return the favor on my battle I know its a lil weak but its ok Please return the favor http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=163680 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: Lethal-C
Vote: Lethal C OPener: Lethal Closer: BWalla Punches: Lethal Wordplay: Lethal had mad wordplay - tha boredom line was ggod and so was the cards part Personals: neitha Structure: BWAlla Multis: neitha Flow: Lethal C Originality: Lethal C Lethal C - 8.5/10 B Walla - ive seen so much betta from u homie - 6.5/10 |
This was feedback posted for Lethal-C
No way man go back and think about what you are sayin your punches suck word now i cant vote but i would vote for the other dude to cuz your strucher stinks for real man, and this was really weak dont outline your work in bold either
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Return Tha Favour Lethal C On Battle Wit Realistik
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Voted For: Lethal-C
this one was hard flow lethal rhyming tie closuretie opener lethal lyrics lethal multi lethal vocab tie perosnals lethal overall lethal and hit up on my links peeps peace. |
uppin peeps dont let me go out like this....ive been wining all my battles at the begining only to lose um in the end funny...no hate just stating what has happened to me every battle
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Voted For: Lethal-C
lethal c wins cuz he attempted wordplay in basically everyline of hit verse, none of it was delivered that good and none of it hit well but its better than mom jokes and sayin you spit shit like acid |
Voted For: Lethal-C
Kinda On-Sided here Lethal-C took this one, came harder in the punches, the structure was fucked up, making the flow un-balanced though, the vocab was good, but overall Lethal-C had a good drop H.F. your drop was aight, but the punches weren't really there though, but u had the flow + structure too, but work on your punches though no hate to both |
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