kwell vs hang-man
 

Battle Rules:

12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

NO WACK VERSE ALLOWED KWELL :laugh:


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-21-04 at 01:41 PM

Must drop verse in 22 minutes after check in.

Kwell has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-21-04 01:13 PM.

hang-man has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-21-04 01:23 PM.

This kid is beyond basic, but he still thinks he's dope
fuckin fruit, he's mad cuz he's unwanted, he cant-elope
i dont play wit kids, this child cant even stay out past dark
grow the fuck up, n quit bein a fuckin newb widd'em hash marks///
i'll leave u stuck widda huge fine, when i spray lines your way
my punch'll hit ya teeth, unleash, n let ya canines astray
so u doubt me, u dont think i'll leave u slaughtered, clown?
heh, u git ya shit mixed up then, what u spit is watered down
dont knock my style, when yours is the one that needs fixin
i see u prewritin, so i know u gon lose based on pre diction
i can come weak n still kill ya, these days things is changin
do i need a closer? maybe or maybe not, i'ma leave ya hangin...

fuckin hoe

i told u that im known to SON HERBS like ya-self so get READY

Kwell,
u dont wanna test, fam...cuz even if the tech jams
i'll let my knives cut-in, like they wanted the next dance/
if i clapped u, i'd earn a grip...but i dont need a burner, since
my apperance would make ya body shake, like recieve some turbulence/
been in drag the longest, rockin dresses wit tha earrings
so ur the real king of queens, fuck the television series/
wanna meet superstars? i'll grab heaters n use the tool
so tell me if ya angels look as good as Cam Diaz n Lucy Liu/
i carry the heat, when my missions to torch a brotha
u keep a strap-on, but urs come in different inches n assorted colors/
and Ya dont get females either,with ya clowned features
and If u ever "tied the knot" u got instructions from ya "Scouts Leader"/ ONE-A-WHAT????

FUCK'IN HERB

Voted For: Kwell

Vote Kwell ! .. his punches were waaaay better and it wasn't wack

wow yo...if that shit aint prewritten, i dunno what the fuck is...

lmao, how can u call me a herb when u cant even drop a verse off the top of ya head?? the fuck outta here faggot

^^^ that vote wont count lets explain ya vote better people

This was feedback posted for Kwell
 

Someone got hang, Kwell was ruthless uping this
for my boi.

1~

Voted For: Kwell


This kid is beyond basic, but he still thinks he's dope
fuckin fruit, he's mad cuz he's unwanted, he cant-elope
i dont play wit kids, this child cant even stay out past dark
grow the fuck up, n quit bein a fuckin newb widd'em hash marks///
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIIIIIGHT GOOD OPENER NICE PUNCHES AND GOOD FLOW HIT HARDER THOUGH BE CREATIVE




i'll leave u stuck widda huge fine, when i spray lines your way
my punch'll hit ya teeth, unleash, n let ya canines astray
so u doubt me, u dont think i'll leave u slaughtered, clown?
heh, u git ya shit mixed up then, what u spit is watered down
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ "EH" IT DIDNT KINDA MAKE ANY SENSE BUT IT DID FLOW EXPLAIN CHA PUNCHES AIIIIIGHT


dont knock my style, when yours is the one that needs fixin
i see u prewritin, so i know u gon lose based on pre diction
i can come weak n still kill ya, these days things is changin
do i need a closer? maybe or maybe not, i'ma leave ya hangin...
^^^^^^^^^^^ AIIIIIGHT GOOD FLOW 'OK" PUNCH NICE CLOSA


KWELL- U NEED TO HIT HARDER WITH YOUR PUNCHES, IT CAME A LIL BASIC, AND MAKE SURE CHA PUNCHES MAKES SENSE



u dont wanna test, fam...cuz even if the tech jams
i'll let my knives cut-in, like they wanted the next dance/
if i clapped u, i'd earn a grip...but i dont need a burner, since
my apperance would make ya body shake, like recieve some turbulence/
^^^^^^^^^^^ THAT WAS NOT AN GOOD PART CHA PUNCHES WERE BASIC WAY BASIC~! AND DONT RUN-OFF CHA SENTENCES LIKE U SAID "SINCE" IT MAKES THA READA DONT WANT TO READ CHA SHIT AT ALL




been in drag the longest, rockin dresses wit tha earrings
so ur the real king of queens, fuck the television series/
wanna meet superstars? i'll grab heaters n use the tool
so tell me if ya angels look as good as Cam Diaz n Lucy Liu/
^^^^^^^^^^^^ SHIT DONT EVEN MAKE SENSE TO ME CHA PUNCHES ARE TOO BASIC NEEDS CREATIVITY U GOT FLOW BUT DA PUNCHES IS WAT U LACKING AT



i carry the heat, when my missions to torch a brotha
u keep a strap-on, but urs come in different inches n assorted colors/
and Ya dont get females either,with ya clowned features
and If u ever "tied the knot" u got instructions from ya "Scouts Leader"/
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NOT AN GOOD CLOSA NOT AN GOOD PUNCH EITHER


HANG-MAN= U WAS TOO BASIC IN YOUR VERSE U DIDNT HAD NO CREATIVITY NO DECENT PUNCHES AND NO PERSONALS EITHER


OVERALL= AIIIIIGHT BOTH OF U NEEDS TO ELEVATE CAUSE BOTH OF U KWELL AND HANG-MAN DROPPED BAD BASIC PUNCHES YALL HAD FLOW BUT DA PUNCHES I WASNT FEELING IT FROM BOTH OF U GUYS

KWELL- U HAD FLOW PUNCHES BUT THEY WERENT DECENT U HAD BASIC PUNCHES BUT IT EDGE IT A LIL. BE CREATIVE WITH CHA PUNCHES


HANG-MAN= U CAME TOO BASIC ELEVATE HOMIE ON DEM PUNCHES U DIDNT HAD NO CREATIVITY IN CHA PUNCHES NOR NO DECENT ONES ALL TOO BASIC


MY VOTE GOES TO KWELL JUST FOR HAVING PUNCHES THAT HIT HARDER THAN HIS

HANG-MAN CHA VERSE DIDNT MADE SENSE NOR CHA PUNCHES DIDNT HIT HARD U CAME TOO BASIC BE MORE CREATIVE LEARN SOME VOCABS AND DO SOME PERSONALS

*NUFF SAID*

RETURN AN FAV

Voted For: hang-man

hangman got this one
flow hang
opener hang
closer kwell
meta4 hang
punches hang
personals kweel

get at my battles yall

uppin this shit.....

Voted For: hang-man

This Battle Goes To Hang Man, With Better Punches And Flow..

Kwell You Had Good Personals But Your Closer Was Really Poor Witch Made Me Not Give You The Vote. You need To Have A Strong Closer In Your Battles..

But Hang Man, Def Had This..

My Favorite Line :: u dont wanna test fam... cuz even if the tech jams; ill let my knives cut-in, like they wanted the next dance //

That was hott..

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...uppin this shit for some honest votes...

Voted For: Kwell

hang-man
nice punches...pretty decent
structure lacked...
flow was okay
didn't see no persona's...
overall u had an okay drop
3/10

Kwell
punches were hard & connected.
flow was good & same wit tha structure
vocab was nice...persona's were aight...
but overall u had a nice drop...
6/10

Overall
Kwell took this one..punches were
more creative & hard-hittin...flow
was aight..and tha structure was
decent...


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^*RTF* Please...

^favor returned............uppin for more votes...............i'll return the favor with an HONEST vote...............

Voted For: Kwell

This kid is beyond basic, but he still thinks he's dope
fuckin fruit, he's mad cuz he's unwanted, he cant-elope
^^LOL..GUD WORDPLAY 7/10

i dont play wit kids, this child cant even stay out past dark
grow the fuck up, n quit bein a fuckin newb widd'em hash
marks///
^^^DECENT PERSONAL 6/10

i'll leave u stuck widda huge fine, when i spray lines your way
my punch'll hit ya teeth, unleash, n let ya canines astray
^^^NOT FEELIN THAT...5/10
so u doubt me, u dont think i'll leave u slaughtered, clown?
heh, u git ya shit mixed up then, what u spit is watered down
^^^BETTER 6/10
dont knock my style, when yours is the one that needs fixin
i see u prewritin, so i know u gon lose based on pre diction
^^^NICE WORDPLAY AGAIN 6/10
i can come weak n still kill ya, these days things is changin
do i need a closer? maybe or maybe not, i'ma leave ya hangin...
^^^OK 6/10

OVERALL VERY NICE WORDPLAY, MAYBE UI CUD DO WIT SUM HARD HITTIN PERSONALS TO MAKE YA SHIT DOPE.
GUD JOB.

HANG MAN
u dont wanna test, fam...cuz even if the tech jams
i'll let my knives cut-in, like they wanted the next dance/
NO........3/10

if i clapped u, i'd earn a grip...but i dont need a burner, since
my apperance would make ya body shake, like recieve some turbulence/
HMMMM.NO....4/10

been in drag the longest, rockin dresses wit tha earrings
so ur the real king of queens, fuck the television series/
^^SLIGHTLY BETA ATTEMPT AT WORDPLAY 5/10

wanna meet superstars? i'll grab heaters n use the tool
so tell me if ya angels look as good as Cam Diaz n Lucy Liu/
^^^JUS AINT HITTIN 4/10

i carry the heat, when my missions to torch a brotha
u keep a strap-on, but urs come in different inches n assorted colors/
^^NICE BAR...LOL.7/10
and Ya dont get females either,with ya clowned features
and If u ever "tied the knot" u got instructions from ya "Scouts Leader"/ ONE-A-WHAT????
^^OK... 6/10

YA LAST TWO BARS WERE THE BEST..THE STRAP ON LINE CUDVE BIN DOPE WIT BETA SET-UP...AND IT DIN REALLY RHYME...REST OF YA VERSE WAS NO PUNCHES OR ANYTHIN REALLY...

SO OVERALL KWELL TOOK THIS....ALLROUND MORE CONSISTENT AND HARDER HITTIN.

CUD U PLZ RETURN THA FAV...................................

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This was feedback posted for Kwell
 

just checkin the stats.... let's get it crackin'...

uppin this shit...................................

uppin this shit again......................................

Voted For: Kwell

i think u did better in strucute honestly i thought both of em were wack but u had better flow and his battle came off in places not really mugh flow to it and ryhmes were off but u know keep uppin n take this battle man

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