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Chaos vs hang-man
FUCK A.I * the start OF THE END *
16 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting no feeding no pm for votes Minimum posts to vote: 120 Check in by: 11-21-04 at 03:01 PM Must drop verse in 22 minutes after check in. |
your FUCKED.....the reason i'm merk this cat...
1.you called lady fiya a hoe(you fucked up there) 2.dissing troop(he can handle his own but just cuz we tight like that) 3.you diss the whole AI(you done for) . . ~1~ |
hang-man has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-21-04 02:49 PM.
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Chaos has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-21-04 03:01 PM.
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chaos LOOK i wont even get serious this is childs play PEEP
chaos, i plummet the ranks a' kids like you. son, ya skill isn't long its no suprise i'm gonna vomit, piss, N rip-off ya A.I thung/1 My punches gonna knock u in the air, im kinda hellish You'll be tryin to Con Air so much you could make Nicolas Cage jealous/2 We can get gansta, cuz HANG-MAN style never slips but known 2 spill bullets down your chest like drool from your lip/3 get ya weightup little man. this heat'll seap thru ya britches my shell's scale ya face. To make sure u can breathe wit the fishes/4 chaos, ya need to sign out. ya garbage wouldn't seal shit. this nigga should take a hike. Mcnabb prolly couldn't deal wit/5 Gettin merked in the end, before you even begun a sentence bullets like a Cavity Search.. but never had ambition to become a dentist/ 6 I’ll contaminate your lungs…plan ahead…smack you with raps So in the short haul, I’ll win… And in the long run…you’ll collapse from an asthma attack/7 Your the faggot of this board, not to mention the worst, Ya punches will only hit on me...When I 'Tee' off on a verse/8 u-WANNA-WHAT!?! |
Use Ya Vital Organs As Monopoly-Pieces, I’ll Halt You "Son" Quika Then Uh Bomb Squad Defuses...
Then Stab Ya Face Wit Uh Crowbar Tell "Social Service" Come N File Ya Clinically-Abuses!!!.. Curl Ya Bones Like Fritos, Dismember Ya Testicles And Restack Ya Nuts Like Lagos!!.. Then Hollow Out Ya Stomach Untill I Yell Inside N Hear My Voice As It Echos... Splice Ya Lungs Wit Cubes Of Dry Ice!! U Suck Ya Mother's Pussy So U Can Taste Some Pubic Lice… Then Shove Ya Son’s “Woody” Up Ya Ass Untill You Can Feel His “Head” Give Advice!!.... Fill Ya Throat Wit Live Rats-And-Leeches... Plus Use Tha Fat Inside Ya Thighs Ta Make Homemade Welcome Mats-Wit-Peaches!!... hang-man Damn..Is That All Ya Might? Haha..ight!!... Watch Me Devour Ya Salty Flesh Like Uh Parasite, Then Knock Ya Eyes Back Into Ya Head Jus So U Can Get Some Eternal “Insight”!!!!!....... Make U Eat Toe Jam And Ear Wax Fa Leftovers... Sever Ya Liver Wit Hot Plates Fa Flavor..Then Shove My Hand Up Ya Ass And Laugh As I Takeover... (puppet) Fry Ya Back Skin Into Rice Like They Do In Tokyo!!... String Ya Intestines To Tha Sling Of My Kids Yo-Yo, Then Sprinkle The Particles Of Ya Guts On My Food As If It Were Juicy Spanish Avocado!!.... (He maybe Mexican) .:Style Switch-Finisher:. Bust Open Ya Head To see What Kind Of Brains Ya Possess And Watch As You Bleed..... Your Verse Is Pathetic..Your Profile Is A-Shamed...Even Your Damn Avy Left The Damn SCREEN!!!!..... |
lol at ya verse..i clearly merk you hoe..lol...talk shit now....uppin for fucking votes in this bitch.......
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This was feedback posted for Chaos
both had good verses..
hang-man -- i liked ur verse alot because it wasnt alota lines to flow with but u talked about how much good u are but not how ur better then him. chaos -- your verse was long and u talked about how ur gunna ripp him and not how good u are, and i liked the good vocabulary on the body parts best bar of battle -- We can get gansta, cuz HANG-MAN style never slips but known 2 spill bullets down your chest like drool from your lip/3 and -- Fill Ya Throat Wit Live Rats-And-Leeches... Plus Use Tha Fat Inside Ya Thighs Ta Make Homemade Welcome Mats-Wit-Peaches!!... since i cant vote this is feedback.. iight 1 |
u crazy if u would of told me to come RAW i would of but u'r verse had mad streched
lines aint no-way u can catch that flow, plus my creative punches N word-play should be good enough u preety decent probley the best form A.I i've seen, but ova-rate ya-self at the same time u def aint ready for HANG-MAN WORD AND WE CAN DO THIS OVA N WATCH ME COME RAW fucking herb |
lol...shut the fuck up..you got merked and thats that..i told you i didn't want to beef..i just wanted a battle and you came to me with your shit...so thats what you got....uppin for votes
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Voted For: Chaos
I was feeling ya verse chaos... some bars were stretched but only cuz you put so many damn periods in your bars.. shouldnt do that.. your opener wasnt too dope but you got a rhythm after that and killed it ... a ton of meta's and i love meta's punches were good.. some good nameplays.. decent wordplay and a couple ok multies... hang-man... your verse was like chaos it started wack but got better... but you fucked up pretty bad you talked about yourself more than dissing him for the first 3 bars or so... and your punches were basic with played concepts that ive seen before but with a switched style or set up line.. you only had one really dope bar and that was the conair... nicholas cage bar it had a good meta but u never really used a personal and u never came directly at him.. nothing was consistent your bars just didnt flow together... |
Voted For: Chaos
hang-man : skip those numbers at the end, it's annoying... verses are rather basic, your vocab could've been better. Had some nice punches but none of them really hit hard, you could've used way more personals, that kinda lacked according to me. Flow was ok but it's the punches and personals that win the battle... Chaos : Auwch, that text color is hurting my eyes...fix that... Flow was good, had some nice rhymes: not too basic, but not overdone, i like it that way. Punches were good, some of them were a bit played but you had some hardhitters in there. Maybe could've used a more personal touch but overall nice drop. So my vote goes to Chaos... |
uppin for votes...........................
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^^ respected vote:
cuz ya vote leavft a proper disceription of what u thought upp'in for more HONEST VOTES LIKE HES cuz thats the way voting should be |
uppin for more votes...............
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This was feedback posted for Chaos
both were pretty much not as goood but chaos gets the win easy with stronger pucnhes and better flow..... hangman had slighly better structre thouigh
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stop sleepin on my verse hes was aight but the shit look pre-written and im not gonna say u did but it sure do look like it and even so my verse was more original but upp'in for more vote with the same good proper feed back
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This was feedback posted for Chaos
Chaos Got Dis Nuff Said.......................................
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This was feedback posted for Chaos
Killer verse chaos... even tho u hatin on me......
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stop sleep'in ya and vote__________________________________________
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^word...vote..and hang-man you wish it was pre-written..lol..uppin for votes
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Voted For: Chaos
v/chaos ..he came harder wit better punchs an multi's hang u didnt come as hard u had to many basic vocab an punchs but nice battle...... vote=chaos return tha favor* |
thanks...uppin for more votes....
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Voted For: Chaos
Pretty good battle...... But Chaos got his... I liked your Punches.. they hit pretyt hard....... But your Structure was fooff.... Your Lines were sterched... And that made your flow hard to follow..... Hang man.,. Your punches didnt hit that hard..... But your structure was aight .... and your flow was decent..... But Chaos took this with his punches... Peace~~ Rerturn tha fava in tha sig~ |
Voted For: Chaos
wow hang-man.. I don't know if you get this often but..you a garbage lil nigga aint you? wow homie..this dude named martell said he saw yo battles and you was tight..then I saw this battle and went what the fuck alott times.. you know I aint hatin on you cuz I don't know you.. but the problems with your verse were..the rhyme scheme was VERY basic..structure was sorta fine ..but in a way wack..and for the most part..you used alot of gun shit.. don't do that here.. chaos did it too..but in a better way.. the way you did it..the threat WAS the punch.. Chaos I give your verse a 7/10 ..jus for wordplay.. now that's a honest vote ... don't like it..complain about it lol no hate..pc winner/Chaos |
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