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X-Spitty vs Poseidon
Battle Rules:
4- 14 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Crew Battle Minimum posts to vote: 150 Check in by: 11-24-04 at 05:22 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
X-Spitty has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-21-04 06:04 PM.
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Poseidon has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-21-04 06:06 PM.
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iight man good luck i never battled before so...good battle
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....same here man....its all good....good luck.....
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Iight i did my best for a first one so...here it goes
Let me start by destroying this hoe,but if its equal... Why not finishing this joke at the Jerry Springer Show... Like your stupid nickname says it....your only poison... Yah face ugly enough to be in a horror museum... Style?It sucks like playing rubix cube and at the same time cheating... Life?Kid your sad enough to get beaten up in front of a PTA meeting... Influence?Must be Ron Jeremy in these gay porn movies... Finaly?Your sure that your gonna be living your hole life lonely... So God Squad is gonna bring fire to rapverse right?... It might just burn the light who never shined bright... Anyway im out of here...just get back to the sea... So listen up you queer,its now your moment of clarity... |
X Spitty you bout to get X'd the fuck out quickly
My rhymes are witty while yours a jus shitty Running your mouth like a marathon ran by Diddy Your full of more shit than a toilet Spitty You Rep Da RIP dats a good choice for you Cause you dont have any talent and its what youll be doin soon Fuck da grave, ill hit you wit my own lil obsession Make you drown in the sea boy its my profession And since your in Canada its even better shit Your grave will freeze over and we'll play ice hockey on top of it I could kill you anywhere, boy you dont want no beef Pull out da shotgun and blast you through your fuckin maple leaf And if we get that far, you know Im gon shoot Either way your dead, I hope you know what Im talkin "aboot" |
....good battle spitty....my first time too so good battle....
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This was feedback posted for X-Spitty
good battle, good first battle X .. im in crew so cant vote
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lol its funny cuz just bcuz im in canada it dosint meen that im a HOCKEY MANIACO FAN!!!god damn i fucking hate hockey ! lol anyway yeah good one,...i dont think winning on this one
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uppin.........lets get some votes on here..........
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Uuupppiinnnn...................................... .......
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This was feedback posted for Poseidon
damn u got some cold lyrics boy cant vote cause in my crew
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up up upu pu pu upu pu pu pu pu pupupupu upppppiiinnnn
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dayumn...uppin this shit for some votes...........
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god fucking dammit fucking uppin on this fucking shit!!!!!!!
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This was feedback posted for Poseidon
aight yall this was a lopsided battle...
both of yall could have done better but my homie poseidon took this one... X u my dawg too from when i was wit da rip and shit but ya need to work on ya flow, ya rhyme scheeme and all that shit, hit me up in pm and ill take a look at some of ya shit and help ya out X.... any way good verse Poseidon, flowed very well and punches and personals hit... you won this one easy... no hate X |
Voted For: X-Spitty
Posidon -Your full of more shit than a toilet Spitty You Rep Da RIP dats a good choice for you Cause you dont have any talent and its what youll be doin soon -That Fucked You Up Because You Had Nothin To Rhyme With Soon Doesnt Rhyme With You .. But Your Verse Wass IIght NOt To Hot.Okay X-Spitty- You Had A better Flow Scheme Everything Structure was a lil strectched at some poitns but everything flowed right togreahter nice verse.Im have to give this to you homie.-1 -1 Overall Vote- X-Spitty Return the Favor http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=161948 |
aight well thanks for the feed............
any more votes? |
This was feedback posted for Poseidon
.....Yo Hands Down I Say Poseidon Had This Battle Lines Was Tight Some Stretch Lines Though But It Was Good With Vocab And Shit Good Shit
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Voted For: Poseidon
god squad vs. RIP punches- Poseidon had more and they hit harder personals- Tie both had em equal multis- X i spose cuz u had more of em metas- Poseidon overall just better structure- Tie, both were off wordplay- Tie, both had one and really both kinda weak flow- Poseidon's flowed better overall humor- Tie Poseidon aight drop. Work on better personals, word play, punches, multis, and structure. also be sure to have good openers and closures. X rhymin wuz off and wuz hard to follow. also work on wp, punches, multis, and structure. No Hate Just An Honest Voter. v/Poseidon pz |
This was feedback posted for Poseidon
yo, poseidon threw it down man. it flowed nicely wit good word choice. i like da fact you threw in dat he was canadian man, way to use it to ur advantage. you did that shit hands down you got dat battle
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Voted For: Poseidon
...Don...: Verse Was Tight....Your Personals Was In There And Was Hitting Hard...Punchlines Was Cold As Fuck And Wordplay Was Cool....Vocabulary Was Decent But Structure Was Lop Sided X Spitty: Your Structure Was Fucked Vocabulary Was Basic Nu Punches Personals Wasnt Even Feeling Your Whole Verse Was Terrible You Need To Up Your Vocab Coz Over All Weak Battle :ThumbDown: v/Poseidon |
This was feedback posted for Poseidon
checking your shit out man..... ELEVATE!
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good battle man....ill elevate for sure...........
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lets get some more votes up in here...............
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uppin for some more votes up in here..............
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comeon come on....................................
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god damn people dont sleep on this......lets get some more votes....
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wow, cmon now people lets get some votes in here....
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damn, people dont vote no more do they? cmon people...
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yah i know...i dont think making another battle bcuz no one votes
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wow, this is really pissin me off, cmon now people....
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iight then...fuck off..............................
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Yo!!!!!!! Yall Both Crew....Pm Strobe Tell Him Yall Both Agree To Make This A WithDrawl Battle And Make No One Lose Or win He Will Close It
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Voted For: X-Spitty
aight im voting for X-spitty.. i like a lot of ur lines Style?It sucks like playing rubix cube and at the same time cheating... Life?Kid your sad enough to get beaten up in front of a PTA meeting... ^ my fav line 9/10 on ur verse poseidon- urs was good but some of ur lines werent good... 8.5/10 on ur verse Vote- X-spitty |
iight upiin.......................................
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bomber z you fuckin dumbass hate votin on me, jus cause i tell you mah sigs are wack you gon hate vote, wow, dumbass...
uppn |
Voted For: Poseidon
punches have to go to Poseidon x spitty wasnt rele feelin it man fa reelz um structure goes to pos personals rele neither vocab neither so punches it what wins an pos won this because his were better x spitty man you just gotta become creative to settin them up an shit... |
uppin............................................. ......
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