"F" a Kontroversy
 

"F" a Kontroversy...


its a collab joint........ i got my verse finished...... just waiting on my potna...


been holdin this joint down for a couple days now..... but im posting my half of the collab ... for some feed back..... might end up editing my verse......


so... enjoy...

"ez"

F-I-R-E.. love dem lyrics flow is a lil off b ut the lyrics is so empowring ... TAKE CHEESE GRADER TO HIS FACE.... god to bad you got someone else poppin off on this i'd jump on it.... yeah but keep droppin kid shits hot... SPENDS HIS WHOLE LIFE DOWNLOADIN BEATS... i think the last bar was a lil meh.. but still hot shizzle

haha!!!!!

thanks for the feedback homie! yea...... the beat had me stumped for a min.... but.... its still a work in progress.... imma work on the flow and delivery on this joint, cuz believe me, i know what your saying about it being off a lil.. no doubt,

appreciate the feedback

.....................2daTizzop....................

omg...the flow was appalling...didn't blend with the beat well...and it was clear you were reading


on a positive note, your rhyme scheme was delectable...very nice there...some nice lyrics here and there


if your flow was on par with your rhyming and lyrics, you'd be hella nice...



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yo tito... i can't front on ya style... ya definitely got a different style than most kats... reminds me of some undaground shyt i used to listen to back in da day... yeah... but ya flow was definitely off on this joint... didn't quite ride the beat effectively... lyrics?... i was feeling how ya shyt was worded and the pattern of ya lines... memorize ya shyt and I'm sure ya flow will fall on point... ya shyt is decent, yo... stay up

if you didn't realise. i am no longer on RV. but. HEY. your merking is coming.

OMG OMG OMG i just heard this kat. He's wack. thats why i dont post on this site NO DOPE AUDIO HEADS. if you were on my audio site you would get Herassed OMG. lmfao im laughing right now. this was garbage. Just wait fam.

Is that why you no showed for seventhird^^because hes whack? rofl..yea.ok..w/e man..tito, this was dope, your vocals need to be a little lower,but you do have a different style...this drop was dope fam,good lyrics...keep em comin1

yo kon... you can't front on dude skills...

if this shyt woulda been about anybody else ya prolly woulda said the shyt was hot... but since it's about you, ya catching feelings and shyt... give credit where it's due man and stop frontin'... werd... and how would the kats on ya audio site feel about you ducking seven third? would they "herass" you about that, also?

no beef but let's keep it real, fam...werd

ill grammatix........ good looking on schoolin this foo....

*daps*

im re-doing my acca... and sending it to SevenThird for mixing down.......

this was juss a rough draft of my verse.... wait till SevenThird gets on this....

HAHAHAHHAHAHAH

:thefinger
straight up........ "F" a Kontroversy......


:nono: you done messed up little boy :nono:

go ahead and drop an audio against me..... you aint nobody n-e-ways....

lmao at kon catching feelings


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this site is mad funny about getting critiqued and shyt.... if they don't agree with your critique they think you hating on them or just riding the next person... man, it even like that... instead of going back and listening to they shyt to see if it can be fixed or tweeked they get upset and wanna challenge everybody on the site... i'm pretty sure when kon sees this he's gonna be tryna holla at me next cuz i seen him do it before... he's really an ok kid but he takes this site way too serious and let's his emotions get the best of him.... anyways, keep doing ya thang tito... get ya flow down tight... prolly one of the best styles i've heard on SC so far... you got confidence in ya rhymes and comfort on the mic... all ya need to do now is fine tune it and

...you should be aiight...lol...the shyt cut the last part of my sentence off

ok as of now your the best i heard on r.v so far dope shit good flow lyrics are dope as well and your in new york?you got mangement?holla at me and well hook something up and ill get you in the studio this week :thumbup:

g'looking yall..........

i mix too:)...

but any wayt...this was a pretty good job...i like the lyrics...and its funny how kontro said he wasnt on the site...but popped up lol...and "his" audio site...kontro is wack hands down...and if kontro see's this and got a problem then he can hola at me over that mic and get raped...or no show like he did for my nigga Seven...

and dats gangsta...

damn nice voice for your style. you're on point on a level i can respect, you dont come off like your fakin at all (something that has become rare) lyrics are descent, quality is nice, but work on your flow just a bit and you'll be good. besides that. i guess ill see you in the audio league. pz

flow was nice tito lyrics were str8 delivery was good to cant wait to hear the finished track you mos-def got a unique style -peace

I,never,No-showed,

I left the site fukin retard, theres differences. I dont have time for bullshit like that no more.. lol at this bitch tryina fit in..by lookin at your picz

its clear you cant....stik to poetry...lol

didnt,no-show,i,left,the,fuckin,site,dumbass

calm dat shit down lil nigga...she would prolly rape ya ass...y u leave the site huh?? cuz everybody was provin u was wack??

im glad u left...tired of wack niggas on the mic...

that's funny... you say you left the site but i distinctly remember seeing ya name in a battle thread... after the one issued by 7/3...hmmm... i guess omma go find that link and research some dates... if i remeber it correctly, you'll be the one known as the dumb ass

and i was being nice about the shyt until now... ya audio is shyt.... not the shyt... just straight up shyt... don't get it twisted lil homie... you got potential... but dat about it... grow da hell up and learn how to take constructive criticism... you won't make it in the game with that attitude of yours.... and if ya do, you'll be the reason ya money get all fucked up... calm ya ass down think before ya open ya mouth...werd... and don't worry... omma be doing audio soon enough... yeah, my recording started in real studios... this cool edit shyt is just playtime frolickin'... and that's wussup!

see ya in da booth chump

get em grammatix!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

alright let me tell you something

my audio iis shit. but you katz be judging COMPUTER TRACKS YO. once i get my studio set up i will post my shit up and tell me if im still wack. i dont try for a normal track that i did for nothing once i do shit for my album you'll see. anywayz Jea jea Tito Your end is coming and seven thirds too ive just been to busy with REAL SHIT. not no fuckin net beef haha. i dont care talk all you want i dont really care its the net fam. you need to smarten up, and act your age, and ask this question "do i really want to be fuckin with him with my wack self" and "what is the point of this" then come back. until then you net to get your shit straight with yo wack ass self

and Ill i would take critisism if it wasnt bad critisism because "you dont like me" or because I said something about something you did. suck it up Chump. Do you and ill do me.

ill grammatix i think your a koo nigga with street smarts but comin off at the mouth at me aint a smart thing fam. check this. Until i see an audio from you. you can not say my shit is "wack" who the fuck knows what you be spittin. once my studio gets set up i'll see waz good.

but you a chyllz nigga

tito i dont mind him but if he wants sum beef becuz his girlfriend seven third dont like me. then. MOUNT UP BOIZ

^^nigga we kno u try...cuz some of ya shit be on some real shit...but still it be wack....talkin bout when u get ya studio...nigga u to wack for a studio...just becuz u gonna have betta quality wont make ya lyrics no betta...u talkin bout act yo age...aint u like 14 or somethin...lil nigga..

LOL if its on some real shit then its a freestyle cuz i just want to let that shit out. but why do i care wat DIABOLIC, thinks. ahahah Im makin my paper. im performing live. Hate or Appreciate, i do not give a fuck what you say or think, you still livin on RV hahaha

LMFAO LMFAO LMFAO @ diabolic he sed im too wack for a studio, even if i was, it dont fuckin matter kid. Money doesnt Involve Skills this kids a wack ass herb, dont even know shit. check this fam. your obviously new to the whole rapping thing so let me fill you in

studio and better quality does improve your skills

seriously, try rapping with wack ass quality and then go try and record in a studio. you'll be able to put better flow and more emotion into it. why you think the singers is so good but not soo good live. all the adlibs, special effects. etc. im 14 jea nigga but Im way to smart for my age, imma stay on my grind. hate if you want. im still gon be laughin at your weak ass.

^^no...im not....im actually bout to make hella money on this mixtape...goin out in stores...so u shut ya mouth...and u should care what i say...and what everybody say so u wont look dumb as shit...and get booed...which would prolly happen to u...and im sure u not makin paper...cuz u on RV everyday...heh...u talkin bout me look at yo post count..and when u joined...look at my post coutn...and when i joined...

ROFL... Checkin to a battle, and not dropping a verse is definately no showing, especially when in your "Im leaving" thread you specifically said you droppin for our battle... You suck seriously.

-_-.....just becuz ya quality is good...wont make ya lyrics good...and if im such a wack ass herb...then pick up the mic...

illllllllllll sig 73rd :thumbup:

hehe i made it:thumbup:

im on rv every day? that is funny. havent been on here for a couple weeks or a week or so. thats funny

diabolic is that an audio CHALLENGE..set it up then, pimpen..

seven third. once im threw with the diss against you and the diss against diabolic we will battle...but not on this site. on soundclick community. so your bitch ass dont get DR'd like a ma fucka

no doubt we can battle whereever, and I'll guarantee k.o's

word word, Experience is on your side. potential is on mine.

lets see how this goes

and have a body bag spear for your boy Diabolic

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bout time u decided to man up lil nigga...

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