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Played Angel...Feat-InDeph and Two By Four
the good in my soul..fading to the brink of extinction..all my good will..traded.. into the link of deletion..we all bad..even when the evil is tedius..we think that way becuase of the media..its all in comparisin compared to herorin..weed is easy..when you narrow it..everyone knows..how to make a barrel fit..commen knowledge..isn't with a bonding father everyone's alone..in the world of modern..the rage collects and stress..explodes soon..like a hourding otter..sorry to slip a punchline in..that's not my style.. but you must comprehend..NWA..was the worst in there day..no more..G-unit spraying guns..and getting praise..it aint a phase..it will only grow worse.. its not like me..I gotten better since proverse the armegeddon will come..short of schedule.. its too late to change now..death is inevitable.. do you remember when...racist comments brung controversey..not nobody give a fuck..if a joke hurt me I gotta say..this shit happened a bit early..god damn even my little cousins..of 3 years old cursing..if its not cool to be coolheaded..then guess the played angelz got a new fetish.. -In Deph Tricked thoughts people think there still good, but just Aint I cant believe they don’t realize there bad, they make me Faint Don’t they make you ponder how they got from good to Wack The worst from what I seen, & to think there rhymes hit Intact Make me laugh, why don’t they wake up outta there dream Sleep Walk around and think how there rhymes became so down Deep Some people go and steal rhymes from others, what fuckin Creeps Go ahead ask me ill say there cowards stealing off different Peeps Shits played out to many people do it, it gets real fuckin Confusing It’s really the opposite of amusing, cuz people are afraid of Losing There record might show there bad, but that don’t mean there Crap They fall off rap, dream about being something else, get up off that Nap Rapverse, to many homies lookin for them rv dollars, its all a Waste Going from a vet to minor is the worst, damn that shits super Haste Your overrated for one reason, you said your rhymes were Misplaced I think your words weren’t written well to start with, you’re a Waste Trying to fit in is hard when you always steal rhymes from Others If they Came from yourself I would respect you in a way of Another When your thinking about bitin a topical off someone, first use Meditation First maybe you should go and find someone to help with your Elevation -2 X 4 |
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come on..........uppin
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nice!!
you both flowing good, good wordplay.structure's good. both stayed on tpic. Indeph I was feeling your verse a bit more than 2by4. but you both came dope. oh yeh, you two are the last I thought we would see a collab from. But the 2 style's went well together. |
weerd...yea we had a diffrent thing goin on InDpeh put tiem on vocab more then me thats prob why you feel his more or just becuz hes naterually better then me topical wise..:)
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Yea Like Fi-del Said Yall Had Wordplays Nice Flow And Good Struture Yall Good Nice
8/10 Put An Feedback In My Open Mic 2 By 4 And Indepth Put An Feedback Too In My Om Called " I Will Not Forget U" |
iight homie...........uppin...good looks to
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nice rhyme schemes both ya'll. feelin this one. First one flows nice and has some nice word play and structure, and second verse follows it up hard. good looks to both ya'll. keep droppin (now get it in audio!!!)
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lol weerd we both do audio so...iunno..
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A'ight...this was a very hot piece. Damn near perfect if I must say so...flow, structure, everything was intact...very nice, not really anything to say bad about these two verses. If you two are both interested, we should do a three way collab. Get back at me...
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I'm down..I got like 6 open mics in rotation right now..
gotta keep it going ;) if you got AIM IM me @ Indeph11 |
yea im intersested damn rights...i wouldent midn this actually to be honest in a way all 3 of us a exual rating..some of us have are advantages but other den that it would be a dope collab
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nice peice...now lil children leave feed on damn he's back lmao...
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i think i have homie...ill check:)
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nice flow--matter of fact, excellent, structure was on point, no real faults anywhere, the vocab was perfect, not forced and not so simple.. overall i really liked this piece..
when the evil is tedius..we think that way becuase of the media..its all in comparisin compared to herorin..weed is easy..when you narrow it..everyone knows..how to make a barrel fit..commen knowledge..isn't with a bonding father ^^i liked all of these words.. the placement and flow.. very nice |
feelin this piece.good concept and flow was continuous.wordplay was gr8 in this one.9/10 keep em comin'
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thanks yall but os the feed only go to Ineph :(
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ahhahhaa lol....... I liked this both had different style came their seperate ways
but still ended off a great collab I would like to see more from u 2 nice shit man mos def this was a ill ass drop I gotta give it to ya I give it a 8.8/10 |
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good lookin homies i liek this shit alot so u gunna crew wit me and rage or not and if so wut bout a sig and shit but i like in dephs and 2b4's verse they flowed nicely both were decent in vocab give it a 8/10 nice shit
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thanks....iunno about any crews right now
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mos def a tight piece...feelin it...both verses were nice...8/10...1
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weerdizzle........uppin
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Feelin it... second verse more than the first but it was all hottness.. i'd say 7/10.. btw thanks for the feedback on we as emericans
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weerdizzle...........
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nice shit, gud flow, wordplay etc
yeh nice piece fam keep em comin... pz |
weerdizzle.........
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In Deph ~ Come ruthless in this,... Nice flow, vocab wordplay
dope man... into the link of deletion..we all bad..even when the evil is tedius..we think that way becuase of the media..its all in comparisin compared to herorin..weed is easy..when you narrow it.. ^Linked the intro but the above bars were sicck... 2X4 ~ Come nice I like the way you merked some of the people on rapverse who act like the RV monies real... started a bit slow but come nice from middle to end... Vocab could have been better in places but the places it was in and the verse more effective,.. Flowed nice with some dope word play... Rapverse, to many homies lookin for them rv dollars, its all a Waste Going from a vet to minor is the worst, damn that shits super Haste Your overrated for one reason, you said your rhymes were Misplaced ^Was feeling them barz,,... I'm not gonna say who come better coz you both used totally different styles the type of colab I like... Nice drop by both and thats word,,... 1~ |
thanks ya man we had are styles....weerdizzle
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uuuuuuppppppppppiiiinnnnn god dammit
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