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Pimpjuice vs PheNom897
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10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 11-23-04 at 09:29 AM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. |
Pimpjuice has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-23-04 09:00 AM.
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PheNom897 has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-23-04 09:04 AM.
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this "phenom" thinks he's a "phenomenon"
but he jus a "pheen" fa suckin dick and gettin creamed on so look at what kind of bum youve become niggas bust in ya "ear" so you can "hear" where dey "cummin" from o behave young one it wont be fun to be brave cuz ya flo couldnt be "off da chain" if you was a runaway slave see ill eat u and shit you out my ass like "doo doo" u aint kno, i "wipe" my "ass" wit toilet paper dats harder dan you dude da raps ova theres no way u gettin back at me i caused a "phenomenon" by showin dis "phenom" a "catastrophe" |
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may da best man win! |
Its tool time n this ain't home improvement...
n if I'm aimin wit a chrome fo ya dome you'll loose it... If you really pimpin come on homes n prove it... You'll really be a "ghostwriter" when this glock turn ya ass translucent... Face it dog U got ate in the first four, you'll digest in tenth... I suggest you get a mean tux cuz you goin in a black hearse wit tents... My verse never relents, cuz thats not an option... Might as well go to free agents cuz I'm whats popin... Just check tha sig son I told you I was a banger... ya rap career is almost dried up put ya ryhmes on tha hanger... so keep ya mouth on silencer cuz you got nothin thats fiyah to say... PheNom tha nu king ya games over dog so retire ya ways... |
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Voted For: PheNom897
Its tool time n this ain't home improvement... n if I'm aimin wit a chrome fo ya dome you'll loose it... If you really pimpin come on homes n prove it... You'll really be a "ghostwriter" when this glock turn ya ass translucent... Face it dog U got ate in the first four, you'll digest in tenth... I suggest you get a mean tux cuz you goin in a black hearse wit tents... My verse never relents, cuz thats not an option... Might as well go to free agents cuz I'm whats popin... Just check tha sig son I told you I was a banger... ya rap career is almost dried up put ya ryhmes on tha hanger... so keep ya mouth on silencer cuz you got nothin thats fiyah to say... PheNom tha nu king ya games over dog so retire ya ways... 8/10 I liked ya wordplay,stucture and ya shit flowed good shit man ------------------------------------------------------------ this "phenom" thinks he's a "phenomenon" but he jus a "pheen" fa suckin dick and gettin creamed on so look at what kind of bum youve become niggas bust in ya "ear" so you can "hear" where dey "cummin" from o behave young one it wont be fun to be brave cuz ya flo couldnt be "off da chain" if you was a runaway slave see ill eat u and shit you out my ass like "doo doo" u aint kno, i "wipe" my "ass" wit toilet paper dats harder dan you dude da raps ova theres no way u gettin back at me i caused a "phenomenon" by showin dis "phenom" a "catastrophe" 7/10 Aight you had punces that were ok -doodoo punches are wack stay away from them Vocab was aight too Good battle guys |
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Voted For: Pimpjuice
Pimpjuice - good spit you had a good flow and some hard hitten punches in there. Best Line - see ill eat u and shit you out my ass like "doo doo" u aint kno, i "wipe" my "ass" wit toilet paper dats harder dan you dude Worst Line - this "phenom" thinks he's a "phenomenon" but he jus a "pheen" fa suckin dick and gettin creamed on PheNom897 - good verse also, your flow wasnt to bad and you had some good punches. Best Line - If you really pimpin come on homes n prove it... You'll really be a "ghostwriter" when this glock turn ya ass translucent... Worst Line - Its tool time n this ain't home improvement... n if I'm aimin wit a chrome fo ya dome you'll loose it... OVERALL - iight battle, both verses were really close but I can only vote for one person so Pimpjuice gets my vote. I liked his flow better and his punches were hitten harder. Phe you need to add some multi's and personals next time. Vote - Pimpjuice Return The Fav http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=161603 |
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Voted For: PheNom897
ehh u had this one but both were kinda weak id say i gave this one to u cuz u had stronger punchesand i thought ur flow was better by a little and ur vocab was a little better also i liked ur opener better ur closer was weak but both his closer and opener were so i gave this vote to u vote on one of my open battles man thnx http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162997 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162918 |
Voted For: PheNom897
yo u was hot your rhymes really make sense keep it up. HOLLA |
Voted For: PheNom897
fuk no doubt phenom wins this shit no doubt....man u had` punchesIts tool time n this ain't home improvement... n if I'm aimin wit a chrome fo ya dome you'll loose it... If you really pimpin come on homes n prove it... You'll really be a "ghostwriter" when this glock turn ya ass translucent... Face it dog U got ate in the first four, you'll digest in tenth... ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ lol hahahah gud shit had wack flow but fuk it and had sum nasty structure.....pimpjuice wat kan i say,......u had sum illl punches but he ate u................... keep elevatin........dawg/////////// holla ak in my battle agaisnt jmsbnd below wit honest votez aiight//////// |
Voted For: Pimpjuice
pimp juice takes this...close but weak battle.i wasnt feelin phenoms verse at all,weak punches and personals and he had a bad flow and structure.pimp juice had a bad flow and structure as well but he had like 2 punches that i was feelin.the 2nd and the third bar. keep elevaten to the both of u. return the favor in my signature plz thanks -One Love- |
Voted For: Pimpjuice
Personals--Pimpjuice Punches--Pimp juice Multi's-- Phenom Meta's---Pimpjuice Vocab-- Phenom Structure--Pimpjuice So theres my vote With Break downs LOL you both did great i wish you both luck in the future ************************************************** ****************************************** Please return the favor......I prefer My battle Against Yung~Deedz ( Please vote in that one first ) Bcuz I Need that easy ass Win ***But Vote honestly*** Thanx ************************************************** ****************************************** |
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Voted For: Pimpjuice
pimpjuice took this just leave the homo stuff out your verse i hate seein that but thats just my opinion better metas i liked "i "wipe" my "ass" wit toilet paper dats harder dan you dude" phenom your verse was weak because you said you were gona shoot him hello this is the internet you had one good line "ya rap career is almost dried up put ya ryhmes on tha hanger..." not enouh to win though return the fav with an honest vote |
Voted For: Pimpjuice
i was feelin phenoms drop, but i didnt give him tha vote because his punches seemed incomplete. like, some places seemed like they needed punches, and he just didnt deliver them there, and some places were soft. but overall, tha verse was nice. i seen a lot of creativtie, but i just couldnt give u tha win... pimpjuice-yo dumb name has nuthin to do wit yo talent. NO hate...lol...but i was feelin ur verse. i think u came more consistent, and ur punches were a lil bit harder, and u came off wit wordplay. thats why i gave u tha vote. this was a good verse, but i feel ur structure was a bit off. just work on that and keep elevating, and shits coo... overall-this was a close one. i had to point out a coupld things. take everything into consideration, and elevate on ur next battle. ~1~ RTF on link in sig |
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