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The After Affect...
*Kids come on the scene and start dissin me???...hol this lemme merk this ma fucka* Some kids claim they rule RV and got potential to run this shop, But sustaining merkings on a daily basis proves theses kids ain't hot, This is jus a day in the life of the wack member named Sinner, Changed his name to Affect but's had no effect on this whinger, Up the middle finger and he mistakes it as a sign for him to come here, For advice on assonance multies rhymes flow and how to sound clear, Seriously u thought u'd make an impact by switching ya game to audio?, U like an ugly prostitute when u speak damn thats jus a horrid flow, You speak tough between screens but when called out he creams, His vocals worse than screams every1 tells ya but u won't go it seems, Now he's blabbin about this girl Kerry Johnson but i think she imaginary, Coz he's talkin in riddles...this loser wants the son of John Kerry, Now he thinks he's a bad boy coz he registered on this site, But they as good at spottin him out like us when we flashed the light, Ya got too much beef and those words won't hold out for long, Ya losin this battle trust me what don't kill ya don't make ya strong, U've been fucked up more here than ho's on a busy night, U can keep talkin but u'll never man up to accept a fight, U full of fright...he's been bullied since 5 and still gettin hurt to this day, He tried to make himself feel better...by aiming all his words at this gay, And he still got murdered...honestly how far are you prepared to go, Ya old nemesis M-dog challenged you live & again he chose to no-show, You got no respect nobody is interested in the shit you do, Want some proof?...here this is how much people hate you, |
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Damn,the Proofs In The Puddin'!!!!lol @ Affect.
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lmao i loved this, nice drop homie. yet another sinner dis, everone must hate this kid including me... this faggots been owned so manny times its almost not funny any more.......wait....yes it is... lol... nice drop homie, keep em commin.
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Leave feedback here and i'll return the favour on anything battle open mic audio whatever
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oi leave f/back
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closer was tight, nice drop..lmao...
why doesnt sinner jus change his name to rv's bitch... |
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Haha...nice diss. Flow, structure...everything was damn near perfect...personals was nice too...nice shit. Hit up the open mics in my sig...thanks.
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HAHAHA. Im really likin this Gangstar.
Lots of punches, personals, great vocab. Thoroughly entertaining. I hope that cat has read this. He prob has and aint gonna say shit about it. Nice one. Quote:
an ill bar this. One of the best of the verse but theres a lot of good here. Damn if you still elevating you could go to the top of this game. Hit me up if you ever wanna collab. We could pound out something hot |
thanx for the feedback
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Dope shit..
sinners a fucking idiot.. |
Some kids claim they rule RV and got potential to run this shop,
But sustaining merkings on a daily basis proves theses kids ain't hot, -speakin the truth son.........nice This is jus a day in the life of the wack member named Sinner, Changed his name to Affect but's had no effect on this whinger, - ha nice diss good punch Up the middle finger and he mistakes it as a sign for him to come here, For advice on assonance multies rhymes flow and how to sound clear, - aiiiiight iam feeling that punch nice Seriously u thought u'd make an impact by switching ya game to audio?, U like an ugly prostitute when u speak damn thats jus a horrid flow, -muwhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha, (wipes the devil laughing tears) You speak tough between screens but when called out he creams, His vocals worse than screams every1 tells ya but u won't go it seems, - iam feeling this punch nice Now he's blabbin about this girl Kerry Johnson but i think she imaginary, Coz he's talkin in riddles...this loser wants the son of John Kerry, -muwhaha nice punch good wordplay......personals looking good Now he thinks he's a bad boy coz he registered on this site, But they as good at spottin him out like us when we flashed the light, - nice wordplay good punch Ya got too much beef and those words won't hold out for long, Ya losin this battle trust me what don't kill ya don't make ya strong, - true thats the truth he speaking yo...........werd U've been fucked up more here than ho's on a busy night, U can keep talkin but u'll never man up to accept a fight, -muwhahahahahhahaa nice wordplay good punch U full of fright...he's been bullied since 5 and still gettin hurt to this day, He tried to make himself feel better...by aiming all his words at this gay, - mwuahahahahah nice punch good personal And he still got murdered...honestly how far are you prepared to go, Ya old nemesis M-dog challenged you live & again he chose to no-show, -whoa u no-showed..........harsh good punch nice personal You got no respect nobody is interested in the shit you do, Want some proof?...here this is how much people hate you, -werd good personal and a punch aiiiiight this an good diss........nice personals and...................wordplays were dope................da punches were hard hittin i give dis an 9/10 work on them vocab'z.........but either way dis an good diss to sinner |
o and put an feedback in my open mic
"in the club" |
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yo i know affect lookin at this..............AFFECT I KNOW U SEE THIS I CAN SEE U~!
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Man u wanna drop feedback u more than welcome...shit if only this was O/M of the month...but being this is the millionth diss to his ass...i'm sure this in open mic standards would be a plyed topic...but i'm the type to freshen gay punches so...vote for me
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that was pretty sick man good vocabs and flow i felt the topic come hit me up with feed on my drop its only my second one so.... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162068
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thats some sick shyt man dope flow nice topics damn thnx for postin on my last drop man keep it real... hook me up on this one much appreciated http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162066
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yo gst that shit is hot how u jus called this nigga out and made him look like a bitch by promotin this niggas losses..that shits tight..1
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nice drop man felt the flow rhyme scheme and topic sick overall im new to this shyt hit me up and let me know whats good http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162167
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/\ why did you drop feedback twice???...anyway uppin this thread returning favours again...need a decent post count
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nice diss
nice flow pretty much all aspects on point propz. ...Nuff Said... |
Nice...uppin this yet again...seeing as he responded but i refer to this diss as my response as i'm not going to waste words on this lil kiddo /\.
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nice drop bro... i have hear sinners audio...ur right about that horrid flow...his shit was so fuckin...purely trife. damn. you came hard yet again, flowed well personals were strong throughout the whole this was a real hard hitter. nice job *heyo sinner.... heres some rope kid. now go hang urself.*
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this was a nice diss u had good flow an structure was straight.....u had good personals....8.5/10 nice drop fam......
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Uppin..........
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/\. ima murder this fag
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Lololmao That Shit Was Decent...
He Did Get Clowned Pretty Good... For What You Need (Against Sinner) You Did It Easily... But Overall It Was Just An Average Piece... But Like I Said You Dont Need All That Much For Him... You Had Some Pretty Nice Punches And Shit... Lacked Wordplay But You Had Some Aiight Punches And Good Flow... Structure Was Pretty On Point... Maybe To Improve It As An Open Mic Drop A Chorus On It... It Just Give It More Of A "Real Song" Effect... Overall I'd Give It A 8.3/10... I Think You Can Do Better... But Just Didnt Cuz Its Not Really Required For This Openent... Good Job, Stay Up Mayn... .One. |
thanx i jus noticed i checked the boycott thread 25-3 for yes and Sinner voted for himself not to be boycotted LMAO
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