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Mike Hawk vs Chaos
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 600 Check in by: 11-24-04 at 10:46 PM Must drop verse in 400 minutes after check in. |
Mike Hawk has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-24-04 04:20 PM.
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perpare for this ass merking i'm about to give you for all the shit you talk.....
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Chaos has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-24-04 04:28 PM.
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This fag is stupid...beatin Mike...rigggghhht...
Just cause he writes in orange don't mean he's bright Think his verses look good, can you plz tell us Why ya bars stretched to the point it make Alpo jealous Thinkin cuz u runnin with AI makes you strong...well... How come when I dropped a diss on em, a week later they fell Kids is ass, hatin on me aint gon make u better, but I can understand why u do...look at ur audio record TRIGGA to Chaos, well none of us really remembered you But I stay on ya mind...jus go look at his interviews.... |
I'll Rip YA Head Off-and Shove It Up Ya Ass Untill It Reaches Ya Chest!!!.....
Then Break All Ya Ribs Untill The Doctor Says Its-Too-Complex-Too-Fix!!..... I'll Murder You- In 1000 Different ways!!..... And Make Your Face Like Your Spelling-Not Finished All The Way!!.....(it says jerz.....as his location) You Think Your So Dope-But Ya Shits Really Wack!!..... The Only Time You'll Win-A-Match..Is If The Person Doesn't WRITE BACK!!.....(checks in but doesn't drop there verse) Your Pathetic-No One Wants You At This Site!!..... Thats Pretty Bad-When You got Lady Fiya-Telling Ya.... You-Need-To-Take-A-Hike!!..... Fuck A Medic-Aid-Like Speading-Cancer-Plague!!..... You Wouldn't Win-Even If You Were Made Too-In A Role-Playing Game!!..... E-Style?-I Don't Even Want To Get On That Subject!!!..... A Whole Bunch Of Rejects-Trying To Make It Public!!!..... Really You Just A Bitch-And I don't Got Time To Play With Little Kids!!!..... But Why Is Ya Crew-Made For The Herbs That Got More Losses-Than-Winz!!.......(his whole crew got more losses than wins on there record) . . . blah rushed it....but thats a whole lot of personals....shit i was laughing while i was writing it...lol.... |
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Voted For: Chaos
not really too many punches in here, but chaos took this one with personals...just about every bar was a personal...this battle was weak to me...but look chaos-u had aight rhymin, some nice creativity, and like i said some nice/funny punches in yo verse...but some of yo lines were a lil stretched. (no hate tho), and some bars sounded like they werent complete, but its all good mike-u prolly shouldve had more lines. i dont htink u were prepared for this, but u had some nice rhyming. i think u reall lost in tha rhymin category, yo rhymes were too simple for me...yo structure was better than his tho, but ur punches that u were tryna land werent making too much since...(no hate tho), u had a coo verse, but it wasnt really batter than chaos... overall-i think both verse was kinda rushed, and i think yall should elevate more, but this was an ight battle.(no hate). just honest... good shit tho...1 |
LMAO@That, every one of my bars were personals to...wow.
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uppin.................
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^lol..shut up....uppin for more votes.......
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uppin for more votes..............
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Voted For: Chaos
Chaos took this one fasho tho chaos came harder in punches..tha flow was pretty decent..tha structure was a little stretched & tha vocab was nice...but overall i felt that Chaos took this one MH...uhh..u should've been more creative in yo punches but Chaos took this one wit harder punches |
Voted For: Mike Hawk
[CENTER][FONT=Arial Narrow] Mike Hawk Took This Battle With Better Structure, Rhyme Scheme, and Punches Were Just Hitting Harder. Chaos Had Nice Vocab but Your First Bar Didn't Even Rhyme Kid. Plus Your Structure Was Beyond Wack (Lose The Orange Color) Vote - Mike Hawk With Better Punches and Overal Better Verse. *Best Punch* Thinkin cuz u runnin with AI makes you strong...well... How come when I dropped a diss on em, a week later they fell Pretty Hot. Hit My Battle Up http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=161927 ~R~ |
^lol..get the fuck otta here....uppin for more votes...
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Voted For: Mike Hawk
chaos wtf was that structure was fucked You Think Your So Dope-But Ya Shits Really Wack!!.....<<that was gay anyways you didnt have no real amusing or hard hitin punches wasnt feelin ya verse hawk ima guess you losen this battle but i figured i'd drop a honest vote you had betta punches structure was waaay better but punches an personals win battles an your punchlines were better than his so my vote goes to you vote-hawk.. |
Voted For: Chaos
ok mike hawk opener ok secone whos alpo?the diss line was corny the audio record good personal ender personal also good ok vocab and flow nice structure a 5/10 chaos opener blah no the spelling personal good good write back punch the fiya line was blah and the cancer omg sic lines are played as fuck you know this the e style diss was funny the ender was funny as fuck hard ass fucking diss there lmao structure and flow ok vocab also 6/10 basically this was a weak battle but chaos had a longer verse and therefore better punches throughout both dropped weak here but chaos had better punches and the was really the only deciding factor |
This was feedback posted for Mike Hawk
lolololololololol
im bout 2 merk the shit outta u |
^ Wow.
and Alpo is a drug dealer from the 80's...go watch paid in full. |
Voted For: Mike Hawk
Mike wins this easilly, basically he was better, he won this battle I honestly think he won this battle, came harder with a better verse... chaos, your personels hit but not hard, mike the 'bright' line was dope, course most people won't get it... but ya, you had some dope lines and personels, trigga, you used some pre school rhyming shit here, shabba wins this |
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Voted For: Mike Hawk
Chaos I'll Rip YA Head Off-and Shove It Up Ya Ass Untill It Reaches Ya Chest!!!..... Then Break All Ya Ribs Untill The Doctor Says Its-Too-Complex-Too-Fix!!..... nope.. Your Pathetic-No One Wants You At This Site!!..... Thats Pretty Bad-When You got Lady Fiya-Telling Ya.... You-Need-To-Take-A-Hike!!..... blah!!.. You Think Your So Dope-But Ya Shits Really Wack!!..... The Only Time You'll Win-A-Match..Is If The Person Doesn't WRITE BACK!! this was wack.. I'll Murder You- In 1000 Different ways!!..... And Make Your Face Like Your Spelling-Not Finished All The Way!! blah!..u just changed one letter. Fuck A Medic-Aid-Like Speading-Cancer-Plague!!..... You Wouldn't Win-Even If You Were Made Too-In A Role-Playing nah. E-Style?-I Don't Even Want To Get On That Subject A Whole Bunch Of Rejects-Trying To Make It Public blah.. Really You Just A Bitch-And I don't Got Time To Play With Little Kids!!!..... But Why Is Ya Crew-Made For The Herbs That Got More Losses-Than-Winz!! wack verse... ya structure was stretched to fuck...wats with all the !!! and -. ya verse really doesnt need it. Punches were weak and i really couldn't see any personals apart from the lady fiya and the e-style one. both were wack. Mike Hawk This fag is stupid...beatin Mike...rigggghhht... Just cause he writes in orange don't mean he's bright 1st line was kinda sell glorified...lol... but nice personal. Think his verses look good, can you plz tell us Why ya bars stretched to the point it make Alpo jealous lol Thinkin cuz u runnin with AI makes you strong...well... How come when I dropped a diss on em, a week later they fell lol...nice personal...i think that was the collab wit Looch? Kids is ass, hatin on me aint gon make u better, but I can understand why u do...look at ur audio record not bad...decent punch. TRIGGA to Chaos, well none of us really remembered you But I stay on ya mind...jus go look at his interviews.... nice 1st line...but the second could of worked better with a link okay...structure was nice and neat...effective punches. personals were funny and worked well. ya verse wasn't great but anything was better than chaos'. serious chaos that was terrible. v/ Mike Hawk |
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Voted For: Chaos
wow this battle was horrible. yall really need to try n make ur verse flow a little better so they are easier to read, n work on rhyming too. I give this battle to chaos becuz he had a lot of personals in there, however forced, but they got the job done...sort off. improve on creativity thats always a plus holla at ya boy please http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=160091 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=160089 |
Don't vote on my battles anymore String.
Just been hating the last 3. |
UHHHHHHGGGG....................................... .....This battle shouldn't be close at all.
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Voted For: Chaos
yo this was close battle. But I think Chaos took this. Mike, you had some funny lines, but some of yo lines I really didn't think worked, or were filler. They were aiight. YO flow went off near middle to me. I unno. but overall it was aiight. Chaos, you verse was nice. Flow kept on throughout the verse. Funny closer, I liked that. You had good personals, some were filler or wack. But overall nice. I think you edged this out wit a fe stronger personals. close battle tho. |
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