Limited Edition vs hipnoticz
 

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hipnoticz has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-24-04 06:58 PM.

we aint here to start a revolution...
just maybe come up wit a solution...
to ride tha planet of tha violent polution...
an make time for ya fellow man...
we all a part of gods big plan...
through tha doom an gloom an poverty...
human kinds gonna be come a aminority...
we all lost souls trapped in hell hole as violent...
escalates ten fold so dear mr blair i ahm traumatised...
all i need is for you to authorise my freedom so dear
mr blair dont you realy care about us cuz you always
say jack this cuz you cant hack this young muthers
no future for tha baby will we survive maybe maybe not
our lifes flash befor our eyez this war we livin camera shots of tha news to do or to do not choose what to say couse we all
wit this fucked up world...

Limited Edition has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-25-04 03:09 PM.

.::uppin on this bicth to get some votes in plz::.

Uppin'...fuck this has been slept on haven't been on for 5 days and still no votes...

.::uppin on this bicth to get some votes in plz::.

Uppin' for fuckin votes on this...holy shit so fuckin slept on...

This was feedback posted for Limited Edition
 

we aint here to start a revolution...
just maybe come up wit a solution...
to ride tha planet of tha violent polution...
an make time for ya fellow man...
we all a part of gods big plan...
through tha doom an gloom an poverty...
human kinds gonna be come a aminority...
we all lost souls trapped in hell hole as violent...
escalates ten fold so dear mr blair i ahm traumatised...
all i need is for you to authorise my freedom so dear
mr blair dont you realy care about us cuz you always
say jack this cuz you cant hack this young muthers
no future for tha baby will we survive maybe maybe not
our lifes flash befor our eyez this war we livin camera shots of tha news to do or to do not choose what to say couse we all
wit this fucked up world...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIIIIGHT FAM WORK ON DA FLOW AIIIGHT BUT....U NEED TO ELEVATE ON IMAGINARY AND CREATIVITY I DIDNT SENSE THAT IN YA TOPICAL VERSE BUT U HAD DA FEELINGS AND EMOTIONS BUT IMAGINARY AND CREATIVITY......U NEED THEM 2 THINGS ITS AN MUST FAM







Full of spite...everynight...was this world God's image, His sight?
Yeah right, even I despite I haven't seen half of it, people everywhere fight...
Who is to blame? Who's name? Who targeted the plain into the World Trade?
The son that God gave? Or was it Bush who sent those people to the grave?
Let's point them out...the dictators of violence who know what tryanny's about...
Witout a doubt, Bush is the number one tryant...no reason to even bout...
The world is black...who is launching the attack for no reason in Iraq?
No just reason it's wack...people hate this crap, Bush is just a handicap...
Don't tell me I'm off topic...'cause it's far to late to even attempt to stop it...
This is what the world's like...about this shit people everywhere pop shit...
Greatness...comes in many different flavors...no difference against it...
People go through the same shit everyday after the fuckin' plain hit...
Many kids have no parents, and do they blame it on the terroists..?
If I was in the position, I would blame it on Bush and not be embarrased...
So is this the world we live in? Was this God's creation in the beginnin'?
The point you're missin' my mission is to stop Bush from takin' women and children....
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ CHEA U HAD SOME MULTI'Z AND GOOD IMAGINARY....VERY CREATIVE ON THIS PART


Many kids have no parents, and do they blame it on the terroists..?
If I was in the position, I would blame it on Bush and not be embarrased...
So is this the world we live in? Was this God's creation in the beginnin'?
The point you're missin' my mission is to stop Bush from takin' women and children....
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ DA CLOSA I LIKED IT.........U HAD VOCAB........IMAGINARY..........CREATIVITY........ ....AND GOOD FLOW


CONCLUSION- I THINK DIS GOES HANDS DOWN TO LIMIT EDITOIN WHICH HE HAD EVERY THING IN AN TOPICAL CATERGORY.......HIP U NEED TO WORK ON EVERY TOPICAL CATERGORY.INCLUDING...IMAGINARY AND CREATIVITY.......


THIS IS AN FEEDBACK IAM SORRY I DONT HAVE 200 POST

Uppin' for some fuckin' votes on this shit...this is the most slept on battle I have ever had.

UPPIN' FOR FUCKIN VOTES! Fuck this is slept on like hell...FAVORS WILL BE RETURNED! VOTE FOR FUCK SAKES!

Voted For: Limited Edition

wow, this was a dope contest here, seriously I felt you both alot... Hypnotikz-- first shit Im seein from you, definately on point with it, i assume you from britain, and I think its cool you both hate the leaders of ur respective countries cuz they both suck :)... but yeah anyway I felt the way each went in the topic on a similar tip, and I think you both had a nice style in doing so, but I think Limited Edition had a more descriptive verse, he tied events to it that really got me feelin his shit... maybe its cuz I'm U.S but I just felt like included more in his verse descriptively... Vote L.E

Voted For: Limited Edition

well this was a one sided topical battle... hipnoticz came real weak your structure wasnt very good and your wordplay and imagery were horrible the only thing that was good about your verse was the vocabulary and it wasnt great just mediocre... limited edition i didnt know you were this dope at topicals this was pretty good... your imagery was on point decent structure some lines were a little stretched but nonetheless your verse was better than hip's so you got my vote.. your verse kinda reminded me of mosh by eminem pretty dope lol

^^Honored by Flow's Mosh words.

Uppin' for some more votes on this...favors will be returned.

Uppin' for some more feed on this...come on people...

Voted For: Limited Edition

Returning favor.....
Limited edition: damn... i kinda underestimated you in topicals but you did realy good.. you had some points were you werent on it that well but yours was deep.. and nice gonig on getting into thats bush and terrirotist thing.....it was very good..the begingin lacked entertaintment though.. the end was great.....

Hipnotics: you were iiht...not that good.. you lacked very much... the imagery wasnt very good.. and yaending and the beginign lacked basics of topicals...... not that good.....

Vote LE

Voted For: Limited Edition

flow was ok as well as vocab for you both but hip while you were really simple and not deep limited gave a way more ample descritption of the topic and that wins this type of battles.he allowed me to see the story of the topic while you barely gave me a preview

Voted For: Limited Edition

Though I don't agree with his stance on politics, I do think that Limited's verse was better made than hipnoticz... It definately had feeling into it, and better choice of words...