Chaos vs RED BEAM
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines(each)
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-25-04 at 07:31 PM

Must drop verse in 260 minutes after check in.

4th participant did not show up for tag team battle.. closed

just me vs u..then its troop vs faceless in another thread..right?

RED BEAM has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-24-04 08:03 PM.

TAG TEAM BATTLE: RED BEAM/*FACELESS* VS *TROOP*/CHAOS



[SIZE=4]*FACELESS* VERSE[/SIZE=4]


Chaos Is It???................Hmmm? I Believe You Belong In The Circus....
I've Burned Your Fuel..Like Gas Stations I've Put You Out Of Service...
Using *Troop* As Your Partner Coz Your Scared To Get Defeated....
Your Lines Is >Chaotic<..Just Make Like Michael Jackson And Beat It...
Hit List Consist Of You,My Hands Are A Perfect Conductor To Make Your Face Blue..*
You Better Get Sherlock Homes.To Give You A Clue,Whack You Shouldn't Be A Crew..
Your Brain Is Pointless Like Sharpies With Out A Tip...I'll Rip You In Half So Quick....
Your Head Would Spin......Cum Is All Your Spitting Out Off *Troop*'s Dick....
Your Just Another Illiterate Mind.....Whom Aint Defined Made From Recycled Lines.....
Me Battling Him Is Like Playing Games,Coz His Style Is More Played Then True Crime

*My Hands Around His Neck...I'll Choke Him To Death


[SIZE=4]RED BEAM VERSE[/SIZE=4]

yo, look dawg...i cause "chaos" like you
get ya 'wig split' i 'SPIT SICK', give u da 'FLU'
Im "CODE RED", you dont really wunna go there wit dude
who "DO THE DEW"*, leave ya face parellel to ya shoe
its bad news if ya tempt me, disconnect ya spine
i'll give u niggas "goosebumps" like I'm "R.L. STINE"*
Red Beam's so fly, like superman with no cape
i use my x-ray vision to see straight thru u fakes
and like a K-9 dog, i'll end up yo evil professor
cause i can sniff wack skillz out like a smoke detector
this game is mine, back up rookies this my shit
turn you niggas off...like flickin a light switch
me and da kid with no face, come thru in da coupe
pause for a rip stop,and ripped u and ya 'troop'
look kids we're done...ya'll should owe us a thank you
cause we took this here soft, next time we'll shank you
[SIZE=6]NIGGA!!![/SIZE=6]

*SLOGAN FOR CODE RED MOUTAIN DEW SODA="DO THE DEW"
*R.L. Stine is tha author of tha book goosebumps


ONLY HONEST VOTES PLZ...

Chaos has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-25-04 02:10 PM.

yo,Red!!
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I'll Rip Ya Moms Titis Off-And Stuff Them Down Ya Throat!!!....
Then Drain All Ya Blood-And You Use It On My Car As A Second Coat!!!...
This Bitch Is nothing-But A Fagget Thats Conceited-And Needs To Die!!!
This Bitch Is So Conceited-He Had To Put-That "He's The Best Rapper ALIVE"!!!(lol...his sig)
Kid Ill Break Ya Down And Have Ya Slayed-In-Sections Cuz Ya Couldn't Be Spitting Fire' If LadyFiya-Had-Erections!!!.....
Ya Lines Remain Unapproved' They Stay-In-Rejection And This Dork Is a Nobody, Even His Own Crew Pays-No-Attention!!!.....
Ya Stand With E.S.P.N' But Ya Missing-The-News, Be Real! 12 Losses? Please Ya Must Be Skipping-A-Few!!.....
U Defeatin Me? Ya Out Ya Mind! Like Trippin-On-Shrooms, And How Ya Dope? When Ya Only Winz Was Given-To-You!!!.....
Shreddin This Gay-Nobody Likes You! Even Audience Agrees You Aint Winning Today!!....
Like Mexicans With Lazy Paragraphs-Chaos Aint Readin What You Writing-SO FUCK OFF ESSAY!!!.....
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blah...owend!!......

Voted For: Chaos

Chaos Is It???................Hmmm? I Believe You Belong In The Circus....
I've Burned Your Fuel..Like Gas Stations I've Put You Out Of Service...
Using *Troop* As Your Partner Coz Your Scared To Get Defeated....
Your Lines Is >Chaotic<..Just Make Like Michael Jackson And Beat It...
^^^^^^^^^^^6 NICE WORDPLAY AND PUNCH IT WASNT DECENT BUT GOOD PUNCH



Hit List Consist Of You,My Hands Are A Perfect Conductor To Make Your Face Blue..*
You Better Get Sherlock Homes.To Give You A Clue,Whack You Shouldn't Be A Crew..
Your Brain Is Pointless Like Sharpies With Out A Tip...I'll Rip You In Half So Quick....
Your Head Would Spin......Cum Is All Your Spitting Out Off *Troop*'s Dick....
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE GOOD DECENT PUNCHES AND FLOW NICE WORDPLAY'Z



Your Just Another Illiterate Mind.....Whom Aint Defined Made From Recycled Lines.....
Me Battling Him Is Like Playing Games,Coz His Style Is More Played Then True Crime
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE CLOSA GOOD PUNCHES AND FLOW




yo, look dawg...i cause "chaos" like you
get ya 'wig split' i 'SPIT SICK', give u da 'FLU'
Im "CODE RED", you dont really wunna go there wit dude
who "DO THE DEW"*, leave ya face parellel to ya shoe
its bad news if ya tempt me, disconnect ya spine
i'll give u niggas "goosebumps" like I'm "R.L. STINE"*
^^^^^^^^^^^^NICE FLOW GOOD PUNCHES



Red Beam's so fly, like superman with no cape
i use my x-ray vision to see straight thru u fakes
and like a K-9 dog, i'll end up yo evil professor
cause i can sniff wack skillz out like a smoke detector
this game is mine, back up rookies this my shit
turn you niggas off...like flickin a light switch
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NUTTIN SPECIAL ON THIS PART CAUSE U DISSING THE PEOPLE NOT DISSING CHAOS & TROOP



me and da kid with no face, come thru in da coupe
pause for a rip stop,and ripped u and ya 'troop'
look kids we're done...ya'll should owe us a thank you
cause we took this here soft, next time we'll shank you
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NOT AN GOOD CLOSA KINDA OFF BALANCE NOT GOOD PUNCH U HAD FLOW





^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIIIIIIIIIGHT YALL HAD PUNCHES AND FLOW BUT THA PUNCHES CAME FROM FACELESS VERSE AND HE HAD WORDPLAYS

REDBEAM- I DIDNT SEE NUTTIN SPECIAL IN YA VERSE PUNCHES ARE KINDA OFF BALANCE, U HAD FLOW, SOME PUNCHES WERENT HARD HITTIN




I'll Rip Ya Moms Titis Off-And Stuff Them Down Ya Throat!!!....
Then Drain All Ya Blood-And You Use It On My Car As A Second Coat!!!...
This Bitch Is nothing-But A Fagget Thats Conceited-And Needs To Die!!!
This Bitch Is So Conceited-He Had To Put-That "He's The Best Rapper ALIVE"!!!(lol...his sig)
Kid Ill Break Ya Down And Have Ya Slayed-In-Sections Cuz Ya Couldn't Be Spitting Fire' If LadyFiya-Had-Erections!!!.....
Ya Lines Remain Unapproved' They Stay-In-Rejection And This Dork Is a Nobody, Even His Own Crew Pays-No-Attention!!!.....
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ WHOA~! NICE DECENT PUNCHES AND PERSONALS................NICE WORDPLAYS



Ya Stand With E.S.P.N' But Ya Missing-The-News, Be Real! 12 Losses? Please Ya Must Be Skipping-A-Few!!.....
U Defeatin Me? Ya Out Ya Mind! Like Trippin-On-Shrooms, And How Ya Dope? When Ya Only Winz Was Given-To-You!!!.....
Shreddin This Gay-Nobody Likes You! Even Audience Agrees You Aint Winning Today!!....
Like Mexicans With Lazy Paragraphs-Chaos Aint Readin What You Writing-SO FUCK OFF ESSAY!!!.....
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE WORDPLAY, AND PUNCHES GOOD FLOW DA PUNCHES WERE GOOD


CHAOS- NICE PUNCHES DECENT ONES HARD HITTIN TOO NICE PERSONALS AND WORDPLAYS


OVERALL= AIIIIIGHT REDBEAM AND FACELESS- BOTH OF YALL CAME A LIL WEAK WITH THEM PUNCHES AND FLOW START USING PERSONALS AND SHIT




CHAOS- U HAD NICE DECENT PUNCHES AND FLOW DA PERSONALS WERE GOOD AND THE WORDPLAYS _GODLY


MY VOTE- THIS CLEARLY AND ONE-SIDED BATTLE FACELESS AND REDBEAM YALL DIDNT COME HARDER WITH DEM PUNCHES ELEVATE, FACELESS- U HAD PUNCHES AND WORDPLAYS BUT IT DIDNT COME HARDER THAN CHAOS
REDBEAM- YO PUNCHES WERENT HARD HITTIN U HAD FLOW BUT DEM PUNCHES KINDA WACK, CHAOS ALTHOUGH HE CAME HARDER WIT DEM PUNCHES HIS VERSE WAS GOOD AND ENTERTAINING NICE WORDPLAYS
MY VOTE GOES TO- CHAOS CAUSE HE HAD HARDER PUNCHES, AND FLOW PLUS WORDPLAYS

This was feedback posted for RED BEAM
 

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yo...we killed him...leave it up to some fag who love pink to do some dumb ish...uppn yall...im pissed...but its all good

^^^Lol............................................ ...

Voted For: Chaos

aight aight nice verse from chaos expectin it tho

aight
punches/personals-chaos his were just stronger just connected more
opener/closer-chaos his flowed beautifull and killed both fags ge was battlin
multies/flow-chaos his flow wasnt off tha much as the 2 guys he ripped and his mutlies were pretty good
overal-chaos props for rippin both these fags

return the favor use find the link in my sig get at it

yo c can u vote my shit no man return tha favor thanx ~1~

This was feedback posted for RED BEAM
 

pretty even but im not gettin why you both dont have 2 verses,...i mean a tag battle has 4 people not 3..
this should be closed n done right, then ill drop a vote..pc

Voted For: RED BEAM

this was pretty weak, and if its a tag battle, i dont understand why theres only 3 verse, but whatever...maybe its 2 against 1..lol...but i voted for faceless and redbeam because their verses went well together to me, and they made more since. chaos/troop, whoever, u had a ok verse, but it was super stretched, i think u should work on that, tha lines i mean were stretched out too much, and i dont think ur punches landed that hard. i think faceless had a clean drop, wit some nice punches in there, and some consistency wit his verse...and alot of mettas...red. u basically took tha punches category, but then near tha end u fell off, but its coo, cause u had a partner. i think if faceless wasnt here, u wouldve lost. that r.l stine line was clean...(im stealing it)...lol j/p. but good shit to me
chaos or troop or whoever u are, nice dorp like i said, i esp. liked that last line, about tha essays...lol...pretty creative, but u stretched that punch out too far, but its whatever...good shit i guess...yall all got skillz by tha way, keep at what yall do...and red, i happen to have voted on a couple of ur battles, and ur style never switch up...work on that kid...

Thanks For The Vote Kidd Upping.........................

dont PM me no more chaos...ur a faggot!!! i just read every post in this thread, and you and Red were the only ones bitchin about votes against yall...stop bitchin, you wont get every vote...and if u was to up tha crap to 600, then tha battle would be 0-0, because all of ur voters didnt have 600 post...alot like me...twirple ass nigga...so stop bitchin...and DM...u did post befor eme in here, but urs was honest, so it dont matter...

Voted For: Chaos

Vote -- Chaos

His punches all hit u nigg' n they knockd u out
His flow was iigh .. nuff said
His personals was the best .. LOL about his crew
His structure was pretty nice ..
ENJOYMENT !!

Overall - 9/10


SMH - Redbeam

Punches were okay but didn't hit the spot
Flow was choppy n was kinda stretched
Personals was kinda fuckd up ..
Structure is the same as chaos .. but to many '...'

Overall - 4/10

Nuff said peace

Voted For: Chaos

vote : chaos

chaos had better punches and personals.. i like using the body parts in punches but don't play em out...

best line :

Kid Ill Break Ya Down And Have Ya Slayed-In-Sections
Cuz Ya Couldn't Be Spitting Fire' If LadyFiya-Had-Erections!!!.....

and for both of you.. faceless that structure was wack and punches didnt hit and u lacked multis and personals..

best line:

its bad news if ya tempt me, disconnect ya spine
i'll give u niggas "goosebumps" like I'm "R.L. STINE"*


honest vote.. no beef 1

wtf...all these votes are 50 post or less...i think u got d/r's faggot...this shoudlnt even be open still cause troop aint dropped bitch, and i didnt say nuthin about city's vote being d'r, let him vote who he wants fag!!! thas real...we merked him face, his shit was hella stretched

Voted For: Chaos

Punches goes 2 chaos
wordplay goes 2 chaos
similies goes 2 chaos
personals is a tie
red beam is the only one out of ya comp that spitted somewhat talently
u can call call it a Dr all u want..but look at my votein history.,.i never vote on chaos drops....but this was an honest vote
chaos had all the main points on q....except ya structure was fucked

Blah.//