SCIP vs * -- Blaza -- *
 

Battle Rules:

3 BARS
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Feeding

I Spit first

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-24-04 at 10:35 PM

Must drop verse in 50 minutes after check in.

* -- Blaza -- * has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-24-04 09:50 PM.

SCIP has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-24-04 09:53 PM.

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I Born Not scorn but im here to rip-the-weak
IM Free its easy im not afraid to SCIP my way to victory
This Man SCIP wit his bubba lip like forest Gump*
U Full of trash and i know cause he recycles his lines in his Trunk
Im Straight Tight Blaza Blazin This Man Named SCIP
I Ride spinnas u ride dick,im takein the light like an Eclipse

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here im here


This cat couldnt be Christ even if he was the savior of rap he still wouldnt be jesus/
No wonder this cat is trippin his rhymes are bull-shittin like tha lil reeses pieces/

I'll leave this fool as wacky as Micheal Jackson's sisters, nephews, and nieces/
Ur Barz have fillers that are lines that dont make sense like caps wit creases/

Finisher:
Like back taxes ur behind in mortgage, to bad this pussy couldnt feed cuz he couldnt afford it/
Like Nike Air Ones on a Goth, you dont match so dont sport it the lines of scip ur back cant support it/

Uppin for votes yall good verse Blaza uppin uppin uppin

Voted For: SCIP

I WAS FEELIN THIS DROP MORE
nothin great or to special...i mean at least you had some decent punches but semi-played they were..
caps without creases??.< weak..didnt like it much..
the other verse was iffy in alot of areas...
i didnt do a breakdown but i think this is sufice...
return the favour...
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...755762&posted=1

thanks 1-0 me just cuz im good like that feelin a 1-0 after this

This was feedback posted for * -- Blaza -- *
 

not bad nigga i cant vote since u in my crew but both yall was iight

Voted For: SCIP

battle was weak but this goes to scip....better personals is the only reason.....blaza had some (week ones)punches and A* personal....both people need to elevate a tremendess amount....

v/scip

Voted For: * -- Blaza -- *

LOL I Like Blaza'z Verse That Made Me LMFAO But n E Way

Blaza ** I C No Flaws Unless It Was Somewher Wit The structure But i think you Had A Fair verse for you To Pull Out Somethin Like that mayne that was nice I was lovin it

SCIP*** A Mayne I was lovin ya verse at the begginig But it seem like you were jus tryna make suer ya stuff rymed instead of makin sure it had some nice UNDERSTANDABLE punches mayne but other than That you Did great but jus not Great enough
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A Yall Plz Return The favor and Vote in My Battlez I Only Have two and their Rii At the End all Thats needed is like 2 to 3 votes but um Yall Plz Return the favor it would b the right thing to do and I would really appreciate it afta I took The time to vote N Ya BAttles It Would B Rii
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uppin for votes 2-1 me and this si gettin slept on the peeps i voted get at this now

come on uppin fuckers vote thiss hit pisses me off if i was c ud vote this quik

i'll return the favor just vote get as this please

Voted For: SCIP

SCIP:
Your Rhymes Are Still Simple But Your Elevating.. Your Punches Are Getting Better And Your Multies Are Getting Better.. You stopped rhyming 3 letter words thats good.. your elevating good job..

Blaza:
You Are Way To Simple.. You Tried for multies but it didnt get you anywhere.. with your multies you need a sylable sylable sylable.. and make sure you match the sylables with your second line.. it makes the flow nice, and deadly..
Pm me if you have any questions..
also add some hott punchlines.. take your time on a verse and think of something hott. the most creative way to diss your oppenent..


Fav Line From SCIP:
Ur Barz have fillers that are lines that dont make sense like caps wit creases/

Fav Line From Blaza:
IM Free its easy im not afraid to SCIP my way to victory


Please Return an honest vote in one of my battles.. it is appreciated.. check the sig..

Voted For: SCIP

easy to choose the winner of this.....not too great of a battle though......blaza.....u had no multis....like one metaphor...which was pretty played......wordplay wasnt too great.....and punches didnt hit too hard.....it just wasnt a very original verse...no hate at all....u just should elevate

scip....yours was decent but still not too great....good enough to get my vote.....maybe one or two multis in the verse....something you should work on.....your meta was a bit better than blazas.....wordplay was pretty decent......overall i voted for scip because his verse was more original and his punches hit harder....keep elevating.......good battle....no hate in this vote

Voted For: SCIP

SCIP bro you got some over played lines but u put your own twist on them. Better Vocab and Flow. No Personals, Blaza had a few good ones towards you. On SCIP's last bar about mortage was good.
If scores were out of 100 id give SCIP=78 and Blaza=74