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Week 6 Hardcore Champion (2-0) Unfuckwithable Vs (2-0) Lady Mayheim
VERSES DUE BY FRIDAY, TRY AND GET THEM UP BY WEDNESDAY IF YOU CAN.
30 LINE MAX VOTE ON AT LEAST 3 OTHER BATTLES,OR 3 VOTES DEDUCTED FROM YOUR BATTLE.. MAKE THIS HOT!! |
get ur chest hair ready lady mayhem cause i'm about to clip it!
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This Lil' Boy Must Not Know Me
Check'em |
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Match'Em Or Post Less
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i'll match ..
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The Name Clearly Suits You Well - Ya Dick Never Touched A Vagina
Line Ya Bars, I'll Destroy'Em Like Crack Heads - But Let Me Remind Ya Ur Fuckin Wit A Pro .. Always Slappin Ya Dick - Maybe U R Fuckwitable Nudgin This Hoe Wit A Loss, Main Events About Ta Be Off Ya Budget Yo I Collect Layers From Dead Opponents - I Got More Skins Then Winamp Might As Well Be Baptized A Eminem Fan - You Winnin Is A Slim Chance After This I Go To Da Next Hoe Call U Fed-Ex - U Need To Check Flows I Bust Rhymes & Break Necks Yo - Leave Verses Wit Dents Like Pepso Garbage Mc's Like U Drink Coca Cola Thinkin They Style is ClassiC Dick Suckin & Ass Licks Is Ya Tactics - Wipe Da Sperm Off Ya Lashes Fake Ass Female Textcee - Fuck Wit Lady And Meet Defeat Directly This Best Key Has U Changin Faces Faster Then Halle Berry Advertisin Pepsi With No Question I'll Beat You Into Considerations Of Verbal Lessons You Couldnt Pleasure Ya Self Jackin Off To Baby Oil And Herbal Essence Yo Sex Act Revolves Around Mon. Wrestling - U Take It In Da Mouth Raw You So Stupid You Thought Copy-Write (Right) Was Jealous South-Paw Battlin Mayhem You Get LEAD To A Loss - Even Wit Using A INK Verse You Can't Freestyle - Rhymes Are Off Hand Like Claustrophobic Fingers |
This Best Key Has U Changin Faces Faster Then Halle Berry Advertisin Pepsi
lmao ha ha i know who you really are and it's obvious cause only you word stuff like that i should blow up your spot but i am not but i think you should battle under your real name and quit this alais ish |
*cough..Cough* Listen..*cough..Cough*
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LMAO ..
Blah ..
This Bitch Iz A KiD - I'm Hittin You Quick-You Get 'HiT BY FLO'S' Like You 'TOOK A PiSS iN THE WiND' .. Aint no misdemeaner -Rape Ya To a Seizure-And i Dont Need 'TiDE DETERGENT' To 'TAKE YOU TO THE CLEANERS'.. Ya Hurt and Done-Dead-Quick -it's a Shame the u Didn't even check in to our Battle @ *$%#@^@* Quick-tah-Herb ya - When i Hit-it's-Murda -Battlin YOU Got Me ReaLizing that there's 2 ways to be a SHIT-DISTURBER! .. This Dude's-Gay - ya Screwed EH!! - freeStyles ? i 'COME OFF THE DOME' Faster than a 'LOW BUDGET TOUPEE' .. So Eventually - Ya Left-tah-FLee - Dont Sweat-My-Steez - Too Badd You Cant Make Money Off a TEXT-CD!! .. You Get Raped-Guy So Dont Doubt Or You'll Fall-Bitch-Now you 'DROP ON STR8 LINES' Like 'U WERE AN ALCOHOLIC'.. LabeL's Wont-Sign-Ya- LISTEN If U Was Sik Of DIK-RYDAZ-Then Wut's Gonna Happen If they Realize U Have a VAGINA?. When i Spew it's Phsyco-Bitch - Frontin like You Got This 'HANDS DOWN' When You's a 'UNICYCLISTS'!! .. You in Trouble-Bitch-You'll-See - Your 'RECORD WILL BE 2-'N'-1' Like You Made a 'DOUBLE DISK CD' !!! .. :D Dont Step Witout Weapons- I Bet I'll Leave ya Neck-Split - OH MY GOD!!! i'm Against a NETCEE-TEXT-LEGEND!! .. Damn You Clowned-You Cant Stand Me Now - Ya Got So Many Bittin Lines That Now You Call Them HAND ME DOWNS .. !@#$%^&* FiNiSh *&^%$#@! My Verse ? You Should-Like ~ Do a Better Verse-You COULD-RIGHT?-This Will 'EMBARASS YOU' Worse Than A 'CHILDS HEAVY BLADDER' Without 'GOOD NIGHTS'!! .. -Peace . |
Very nice battle...I have to say, this is the only battle I have ever read both of the verses fully...they were very nice...here's some quotes from both...
I'll start from Unfuck... "This Bitch Iz A KiD - I'm Hittin You Quick-You Get 'HiT BY FLO'S' Like You 'TOOK A PiSS iN THE WiND' .. "...Shit made me laugh histercally as soon as I read it... "This Dude's-Gay - ya Screwed EH!! - freeStyles ? i 'COME OFF THE DOME' Faster than a 'LOW BUDGET TOUPEE' .."...Any line's that are off the top and have loose topee's are overused, I remember using like 2 years ago...D-12 also said it... "LabeL's Wont-Sign-Ya- LISTEN If U Was Sik Of DIK-RYDAZ-Then Wut's Gonna Happen If they Realize U Have a VAGINA?."...that was a very good line, I loved it, everything fitted in the right place... "When i Spew it's Phsyco-Bitch - Frontin like You Got This 'HANDS DOWN' When You's a 'UNICYCLISTS'!!"...I think Jay Krupp said somin like that against Shadow on SOHH, you can check it if you want, but it's still cool... "So Eventually - Ya Left-tah-FLee - Dont Sweat-My-Steez - Too Badd You Cant Make Money Off a TEXT-CD!! .." That was also a nice line, don't know Lady M that good, but I guess that would be a good personal... Lady M... "The Name Clearly Suits You Well - Ya Dick Never Touched A Vagina"...very nice name line...that line hit very well... "I Collect Layers From Dead Opponents - I Got More Skins Then Winamp"...That was one of the hottest lines from you, very nicely put together... "Garbage Mc's Like U Drink Coca Cola Thinkin They Style is ClassiC "...Another nice line...not much to say about it...heard it a few times, but always pops out at me... "This Best Key Has U Changin Faces Faster Then Halle Berry Advertisin Pepsi"...Like Black Flame quoted...it had me laughing for a while... "Yo Sex Act Revolves Around Mon. Wrestling - U Take It In Da Mouth Raw"... Eh... not one of your best lines...but I can put it up her for one of the nicest... "Battlin Mayhem You Get LEAD To A Loss - Even Wit Using A INK Verse You Can't Freestyle - Rhymes Are Off Hand Like Claustrophobic Fingers"...nice ending line, really hit hard. Overall, I think *UnFuckWithAbLe* got the battle, to me, his verse was just better, and his delivery was very nice, all his lines came together and I felt like he came more direct with all of his lines... My vote=*UnFuckWithAbLe* |
Vote-Unfuckwithable
Both verses were good, but when you compare the punches side by side, Unfuckwithable's just hit a little harder, and his flow was better. Mayhem did have some awesome metas, but it just wasn't enough to convince me she was the winner.
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Un fuck jus came mad harder, better presentations of punches,
Lady :Cough: Came more original, a style Ive seemed to see :Cough: But key punches... jus a few... Vote Un... This Dude's-Gay - ya Screwed EH!! - freeStyles ? i 'COME OFF THE DOME' Faster than a 'LOW BUDGET TOUPEE' .. So Eventually - Ya Left-tah-FLee - Dont Sweat-My-Steez - Too Badd You Cant Make Money Off a TEXT-CD!! .. You Get Raped-Guy So Dont Doubt Or You'll Fall-Bitch-Now you 'DROP ON STR8 LINES' Like 'U WERE AN ALCOHOLIC'.. LabeL's Wont-Sign-Ya- LISTEN If U Was Sik Of DIK-RYDAZ-Then Wut's Gonna Happen If they Realize U Have a VAGINA?. When i Spew it's Phsyco-Bitch - Frontin like You Got This 'HANDS DOWN' When You's a 'UNICYCLISTS'!! .. |
Why are people claiming this is me when they don't even
know me? Blah, think what you like, I can't be bothered telling people these style biters aren't me. Flame, you for one should know I'm better than this. |
naw
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i know that's not you lol listen does spit like that at all not his rhyme scheme or nothing i have someone else in mind but i won't say |
Re: naw
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i kno who u have in mind .. na na na na na 1 |
close battle in themechanics things like flow , volcab wordplay and all that this was close but the punches are what let untouchable take this one
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*upps a sticky*
hahahah |
At first i thought it was Listen.....
But like I said to Unfuckwithable dis mournin...... "Since it's you..... Don't Ya Think Listen Woulda Came Doper...To Guarantee A Win..Or Almost Guarantee A Win.."--sIn I thought it was at first...cuz black flame made me suspicious of it bein someone...And I thought u put together ur verses like so......... But i changed my mind later...so no BS.... wUn... |
But i think it's jus ADAPT now.....
i almost got %100 proof on this...jus waitin for sumthin to come back to me....then I'll know......But I'm pretty sure dis time it's ADAPT.... Both Lady Mayhiem And ADAPT will claim No... But since they are both controlled or MAYBEY controlled by da same person....... |
*UnFuckWithAbLe* can way harder
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vote= unfuckwithable |
First Off , Unfuck . . . You Need To UNattatch Your Finger From The Hyphen (-) Key , All Of That Isn't Necessary , You Had Some Played Topics Like That "Off The Dome/Toupee" Line And That "Text CD" Line , But You Also Had Some Funny Shit Like That "Text Legend" Line , And That "2 N 1" Line Was Dope , (Would've Been Better Though If The Smiley Face Wasn't There) . . . lol , OK Verse I Suppose .
Lady Mahem . . . You Had Some Decent Flow Going On , But I Honestly Wasn't Feeling A Lot Of Your Lines , You Had A Good Openor But You Fell Off At The End , You Would've Had A Dope Ending Had It Been Worded Better , But No Doubt , Your Flow Was On Point Like A Fast Defender . All In All , OK Battle I Suppose , But I Think The Guy With The Weird Name Wins . . . Barely . . . . . VOTE ::: Unfuck.... |
both ill verses...
lady had punchs, some nice ones, stayed on his name as a topic too long... wordplay was nice.. flow was real good... Unfcuk?, anyways, nice verses punchs were ill, all there, and it was hot.. flow was nice... vote: Unfuckable |
vote=unfuckwitable...........he had harder hittin punches
LabeL's Wont-Sign-Ya- LISTEN If U Was Sik Of DIK-RYDAZ-Then Wut's Gonna Happen If they Realize U Have a VAGINA?. ^would of be a good personal if she was really listen/chicken |
BREAKDOWN...
LADY MAYHEIM:::
The Name Clearly Suits You Well - Ya Dick Never Touched A Vagina Line Ya Bars, I'll Destroy'Em Like Crack Heads - But Let Me Remind Ya NOT BAD OF A BEGINNING, SETUP WAS NICE..PUNCH FOR THE SECOND..IT HIT GOOD..BUT NOT HARD.. Ur Fuckin Wit A Pro .. Always Slappin Ya Dick - Maybe U R Fuckwitable Nudgin This Hoe Wit A Loss, Main Events About Ta Be Off Ya Budget Yo OK..NOT BAD I Collect Layers From Dead Opponents - I Got More Skins Then Winamp Might As Well Be Baptized A Eminem Fan - You Winnin Is A Slim Chance SETUP LINE WAS NICE..BUT PLAYED SHIT..FOR THE PUNCH SLIM CHANCE..WAY TO PLAYED GIRL.. After This I Go To Da Next Hoe Call U Fed-Ex - U Need To Check Flows I Bust Rhymes & Break Necks Yo - Leave Verses Wit Dents Like Pepso NICE..NOT PARTICULARLY HARD THOUGH Garbage Mc's Like U Drink Coca Cola Thinkin They Style is ClassiC Dick Suckin & Ass Licks Is Ya Tactics - Wipe Da Sperm Off Ya Lashes HAHHA KINDA FUNNY BUT NOT EFFECTIVE.. Fake Ass Female Textcee - Fuck Wit Lady And Meet Defeat Directly This Best Key Has U Changin Faces Faster Then Halle Berry Advertisin Pepsi HAH NICE.. With No Question I'll Beat You Into Considerations Of Verbal Lessons You Couldnt Pleasure Ya Self Jackin Off To Baby Oil And Herbal Essence NOT BAD Yo Sex Act Revolves Around Mon. Wrestling - U Take It In Da Mouth Raw You So Stupid You Thought Copy-Write (Right) Was Jealous South-Paw SETUP WAS TERRIBLE I FELT..IF REWORDED IT WOULD OF BEEN NICE..THE PUNCH COUPLET I FELT WAS A REAL NICE PUNCH..BUT WAS THROWN OFF WITH THE WEAK SETUP.. Yo Sex Act Revolves Around Mon. Wrestling - U Take It In Da Mouth Raw You So Stupid You Thought Copy-Write (Right) Was Jealous South-Paw NOT FEELING THE ENDING AT ALL..LIKE I TELL EVERYONE THIS POINT YOU SHOULD COME REALLY GOOD.. UNFUCKWITHABLE:: This Bitch Iz A KiD - I'm Hittin You Quick-You Get 'HiT BY FLO'S' Like You 'TOOK A PiSS iN THE WiND' .. Aint no misdemeaner -Rape Ya To a Seizure-And i Dont Need 'TiDE DETERGENT' To 'TAKE YOU TO THE CLEANERS'.. REALLY NICE SETUP..AND PUNCH COMBO..BUT THE PUNCH IS WAY TO PLAYED MAN.. Ya Hurt and Done-Dead-Quick -it's a Shame the u Didn't even check in to our Battle @ *$%#@^@* Quick-tah-Herb ya - When i Hit-it's-Murda -Battlin YOU Got Me ReaLizing that there's 2 ways to be a SHIT-DISTURBER! .. NOT REALLY FEELING IT..I THINK YOUR THINKING OF LISTEN INSTEAD OF YOUR OPPONENT (LADY MAYHEIM) This Dude's-Gay - ya Screwed EH!! - freeStyles ? i 'COME OFF THE DOME' Faster than a 'LOW BUDGET TOUPEE' .. So Eventually - Ya Left-tah-FLee - Dont Sweat-My-Steez - Too Badd You Cant Make Money Off a TEXT-CD!! .. OK..BUT HEARD THIS SHIT WAY TOO MUCH..PRETTY MUCH PLAYED MAN.. You Get Raped-Guy So Dont Doubt Or You'll Fall-Bitch-Now you 'DROP ON STR8 LINES' Like 'U WERE AN ALCOHOLIC'.. LabeL's Wont-Sign-Ya- LISTEN If U Was Sik Of DIK-RYDAZ-Then Wut's Gonna Happen If they Realize U Have a VAGINA?. THIS WAS OK..SETUP WAS COOL..BUT AGAIN YOUR THINKING OF SOMEONE ELSE THAT RUINS THIS PUNCH.. When i Spew it's Phsyco-Bitch - Frontin like You Got This 'HANDS DOWN' When You's a 'UNICYCLISTS'!! .. You in Trouble-Bitch-You'll-See - Your 'RECORD WILL BE 2-'N'-1' Like You Made a 'DOUBLE DISK CD' !!! .. BLAHHAHHAHH Dont Step Witout Weapons- I Bet I'll Leave ya Neck-Split - OH MY GOD!!! i'm Against a NETCEE-TEXT-LEGEND!! .. Damn You Clowned-You Cant Stand Me Now - Ya Got So Many Bittin Lines That Now You Call Them HAND ME DOWNS .. SETUP LINE WAS COOL..(NETCEE-TEXT-LEGEND) BUT SECOND LINE I WASNT FEELING My Verse ? You Should-Like ~ Do a Better Verse-You COULD-RIGHT?-This Will 'EMBARASS YOU' Worse Than A 'CHILDS HEAVY BLADDER' Without 'GOOD NIGHTS'!! .. THIS WAS NICE.. BOTH VERSES WERE COOL..BUT ONE THING I FELT FROM UNFUCKWITHABLES VERSE..I THOUGHT HE WAS TRYING TO SPIT TOWARDS (LISTEN) BUT IT WASNT HIM WHO HE WAS FACING..I THINK YOU SHOULD OF LOOKED INTO THIS BATTLE A LITTLE MORE ..BUT YOUR VERSE WAS STILL DECENT..SOME OK PUNCHES..SETUPS WERE COOL..SOME SHIT DIDNT FIT CAUSE YOU WERE SPITTING TO SOMEONE ELSE BUT YOU DIDNT KNOW..UMM LADYS VERSE WAS ALSO AS GOOD..SOME NICE LINES..I GIVE THIS TO HER...FOR MORE OF AN ORIGINAL VERSE VOTE LADY MAYHEIM |
lmao .. gr8 here comes a large amount of swayin of votes ..
i never even knew it was listen or even thought about it bein listen until black flame said that .. which made me think .. but aw well if thats how u feel .. lets see how far the votes get swayed .. 1 |
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STFU..NOT SWAYING SHIT..DONT BE A PRICK |
suck mah dick .. i aint bein a prick .. i'm sayin if u vote for him it's gonna be swayed in the next few votes cause ur the mod of this forum .. so fuck off ..
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AHHA TOUGH..NOT EVEN GOING TO SAY SHIT JUST LET VOTES COME |
Okay, this was a close azz battle. I'm still in the process of deciding who my vote goes for and I've read this bytch over 9298374 times. I'mma start off by showing all the punches that stood out to me.
::Lady:: The Name Clearly Suits You Well - Ya Dick Never Touched A Vagina Line Ya Bars, I'll Destroy'Em Like Crack Heads - But Let Me (I felt this punch was pretty hard wit the bar/cracc head line. One of the better ones) Remind Ya I Collect Layers From Dead Opponents - I Got More Skins Then Winamp Might As Well Be Baptized A Eminem Fan - You Winnin Is A Slim Chance (another fairly hard punch) I Bust Rhymes & Break Necks Yo - Leave Verses Wit Dents Like Pepso (I liked the busta rhymes/break yo necc meta. I don't know about that pepso shyt though. Maybe dents is his last name or maybe I don't know what the fucc I'm talkin bout, lol. Not too much of a hard punch though. Just liked the meta.) Fake Ass Female Textcee - Fuck Wit Lady And Meet Defeat Directly This Best Key Has U Changin Faces Faster Then Halle Berry Advertisin Pepsi (dayumn, that halle berry line was pretty hard) Yo Sex Act Revolves Around Mon. Wrestling - U Take It In Da Mouth Raw (good concept wit the wrestlin/raw, but wouldve hit harder if worded better) You So Stupid You Thought Copy-Write (Right) Was Jealous South-Paw (lolol, this shyt was good) Battlin Mayhem You Get LEAD To A Loss - Even Wit Using A INK Verse You Can't Freestyle - Rhymes Are Off Hand Like Claustrophobic Fingers (to me, this was the hardest of them all. Hit pretty hard) Those were lines that stood out to me from her......... ....N now un........... ::Un:: This Bitch Iz A KiD - I'm Hittin You Quick-You Get 'HiT BY FLO'S' Like You 'TOOK A PiSS iN THE WiND' .. (lol, pretty good, not bad) Aint no misdemeaner -Rape Ya To a Seizure-And i Dont Need 'TiDE DETERGENT' To 'TAKE YOU TO THE CLEANERS'.. (I liked this right here.) So Eventually - Ya Left-tah-FLee - Dont Sweat-My-Steez - Too Badd You Cant Make Money Off a TEXT-CD!! .. (I don't know whether this was a personal or wha, so I can't call it, but if it was, good one) You Get Raped-Guy So Dont Doubt Or You'll Fall-Bitch-Now you 'DROP ON STR8 LINES' Like 'U WERE AN ALCOHOLIC'.. (okay, right here, do you mean she drops on YOUR straight lines or her lines? All in all, good punch, but get at me on my question so I can finish establishing my opinions for the punch. It might be the battle winner, who knows) LabeL's Wont-Sign-Ya- LISTEN If U Was Sik Of DIK-RYDAZ-Then Wut's Gonna Happen If they Realize U Have a VAGINA?. (lolol, that hurt. Good punch right here) When i Spew it's Phsyco-Bitch - Frontin like You Got This 'HANDS DOWN' When You's a 'UNICYCLISTS'!! .. (good one. Liked this) You in Trouble-Bitch-You'll-See - Your 'RECORD WILL BE 2-'N'-1' Like You Made a 'DOUBLE DISK CD' !!! .. (I think this was the hardest punch right here. I liked this one alot) My Verse ? You Should-Like ~ Do a Better Verse-You COULD-RIGHT?-This Will 'EMBARASS YOU' Worse Than A 'CHILDS HEAVY BLADDER' Without 'GOOD NIGHTS'!! .. (this was okay. It would've done more damage in my eyes if worded better, but it was coo) |
*reviews what I typed*..........
..........the punches were close to even in my eyes. I enjoyed reading both verses. I felt lady edged this battle by juuuuuuuuust a lil bit. I felt they were equal on everything else. . Lady edged it because I didn't understand one or two of un's punches. Not the concepts, but the direct meaning.This was a very good battle. Good shyt yall. |
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*coughs* |
UNFUCKWITHABLE WINS
OUTSIDE JUDGES GOT UN 3-0
UNFUCKWITHABLE- 3-0 LADY MAYHEIM- 2-1 |
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