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Massive 07-07-02 05:47 PM

Week 6 (0-0) Lyrical Dizaster Vs (0-0) Double G
 
VERSES DUE BY FRIDAY, TRY AND GET THEM UP BY WEDNESDAY IF YOU CAN.


30 LINE MAX


VOTE ON AT LEAST 3 OTHER BATTLES,OR 3 VOTES DEDUCTED FROM YOUR BATTLE..


MAKE THIS HOT!!

Jae Cyph 07-07-02 07:36 PM

give me the check in ~1~:D

AbAcUz 07-09-02 06:09 PM

got beef??????

DoubleG 07-09-02 08:02 PM

check'n in

DoubleG 07-10-02 10:47 AM

what the fuck LD, wasn't all love, now you be hated/
just for try'n to test, now you got me infuryated/
this time with you has been such a waste/
cause now we gotta get you replaced/
this battles like hot hell, coming up to earth it/
try'n to save it with water,but ya die any way, not even werth it/
i'm coming in, like a marsion invastion/
gonna land on you, cause we know your location/
"i know you've been wait'n, sorry that we're late"/
"i'm sure now your ready, for your death date"/
if ya look'n for weed or durgs, no need for you to buy/
cause i through so much dopeness at you, you bound to get high/

Jae Cyph 07-10-02 07:34 PM

3 minute and 24 second key *i timed it*
 
your rhymes wouldnt get read if they was in the new york times//
while my lyrikz climbs, i just shut you up like mimes//
even with dickriders you still would be voted against//
even if your lyrikz were spoken by god i wouldnt be convinced//
double g, double me that would take double of you//
your like a 2 year old in "harvard", u have no clue//
there should be a cure for wackness you'd have to "O.D"//
your like donations for stupid causes "just left emty"//
time wasting, while ur masturbating your lyrikz worthless like kids dating//
contemplating, compensating, for theing that are not worth the waiting//
you use vocab you cannot define, uing a dicionary to decline//
your lyrikz came and gone when people recite myne like "auld lang sine"//


ok votes? i was really bz and had other battles to do and i had to get this done VOTE PLZ

Phrantik 07-10-02 07:39 PM

Re: 3 minute and 24 second key *i timed it*
 
Quote:
Originally posted by ~*LyRiKaL DiZaStEr*~
double g, double me that would take double of you//
your like a 2 year old in "harvard", u have no clue// [/B]


this line was the illest in the whole battle.... i think the flow was pretty even if not doble g took it, and punches went the way of lyrical d... so my vote has to go with lyrical dyzaster

hisTRYwreCKEr 07-10-02 07:42 PM

VOTE LD

CAME HARDER WIT HIS PUNCHES

AND DOUBLE G LOST ME

BOTH FLOWED REAL GOOD

BUT LD EDGED HIM OVER

NICE BATTLE

HOLLA

Jae Cyph 07-10-02 07:48 PM

2-0 me upiin

•madd•Professor• 07-10-02 08:15 PM

this was pretty damn close... at first i was like... shit... double G who? then i read his verse and found out he can't flow... as good as he should or whatever blah

LD... um... he had a weird flow, weird lines... some ill punches and hard attacks, flow was similar to double G's, but LD got this with his punches, i barely saw good ones in double G's verse


vote LD


peace

DeNihil 07-10-02 09:33 PM

VOTE-LD
 
This was a battle? Man, LD came with weak punches, but he still beat Double G, I don't think either of these guys were trying, but LD took it easily.

fabolous89 07-10-02 11:22 PM

iight, man this battle could have been better from both of you, i mean ld come on...you done better, doubleg i seen betta from you aswell

but i kinnda knew ld would take this, cuz g ya verse needed more wordplay vocab was iight, punches wasn't hitting at all


vote=ld

De Niro 07-11-02 12:04 AM

double g i dont see how da fuck u beat me..
ur verse wuz too simple with lack of punches and
creativity..and LD ur verse wuz da same..but LD gets
my vote cuz he had tighter punches..

vote:LD

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M-Body 07-11-02 01:13 AM

DG as previously stated ya verse was jus too simple. That's what lost ya this battle! LD ya had better punches an your flow was more easily read...Voe=LD...~1~

Jae Cyph 07-11-02 11:17 AM

7-0 im up:D



EDIT
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to make it easier here...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...14&pagenumber=2

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=16231

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...8515#post158515

the three links to the replies i did beleive me i run a league at another site it makes it easy!

k1ll@~m1c 07-11-02 12:25 PM

this wus a pretty mediocer battle both rappers came out weak but overall LD did betta he had more punchlines

vote=LD

Sticky 07-11-02 01:13 PM

i have a hard time believing that was double g's verse, i've battled him and was in a crew with him, and this kid can write lyrics, but this time, it made me think he was like 5 or something, his rhymes were simple, noting that hit hard, it was hard to follow, overall the wrost verse i've ever read by him!!!

LD, i liked ur verse, but in some parts, it's like u didn't even try!!
double g, double me that would take double of you//
your like a 2 year old in "harvard", u have no clue//
i did not like these lines at all, it's like u got double g to write them,
even with dickriders you still would be voted against//
even if your lyrikz were spoken by god i wouldnt be convinced//
i really like these lines, espesially the by god... one, brilliant!

overall, DG's verse was horrible, and LD's was mediocre!!

VOTE:lirical disaster

kadafi 07-11-02 02:39 PM

this battle was wack..

neither was trying particularly hard.

Ld came slightly harder.

better punchlines...just

vote= ~*LyRiKaL DiZaStEr*~

*UnFuckWithAbLe* 07-11-02 03:53 PM

WoW another wack battle ..
double G's lines were funny to me cause i can hear his little chipmunk voice sayin in them in audio .. bwahahahahah

anywayz .. disaster came nicer i guess .. so

my vote - LD

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.........sIn......... 07-11-02 04:12 PM

IIght....

My vote=Lyrikal Dizaster
They were easily better....

Double G...I woulda expected more form you...Seein How Ur Dariel Shariem's Lil Brother.......

But LD's Verse Was better wit wordplay..Punches...
Basically every category...

Both need elevation...But aight battle....

My vote=LD......

wUn......

sPLiFFeAZy 07-11-02 10:39 PM

double g ur wack

Jae Cyph 07-12-02 07:08 PM

12-0 thanx uppin fo mo!

DoubleG 07-13-02 10:59 AM

awww....... i guess i should of put a little more time into that verse........lol

Jae Cyph 07-13-02 07:07 PM

uppin over closed threads id like a vote from repitwa and some more i wanna ee how many i can get ~1~

CoMetaPhoreTune 07-13-02 08:34 PM

My vote goes to lyrikal disaster. His verse was way more complex and his punches hit harder. The other nicca came too simple n needs to put more sophisticated attaccs in his verses. One Love.

CoMetaPhoreTune 07-13-02 08:37 PM

Aye repitwa, go checc out the questions section in the rules/rankings forum. I typed somethin up for you. Holla bacc.

sPLiFFeAZy 07-13-02 09:34 PM

hi,i feel my self, vote ld cause i love his cock

Massive 07-14-02 10:57 AM

LYRICAL DIZASTER WINS
 
OUTSIDE JUDGES PICKED LD 3-0



LYRICAL DIZASTER- 1-0



DOUBLE G- 0-1


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