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*Troop* vs Mike Hawk
Battle Rules:
8- Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No dr 3-0 Ko 1st Ko'd ya boy...Your turn Bitch Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 11-28-04 at 10:40 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
Mike Hawk has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-26-04 10:43 PM.
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I break through *Troop* armour, pound ya steal
When the punches hit, stars will be around u f'real Crew will never be good, ya'll got no hopes You worse at runnin AI than the new 76'ers coach Nobody actually likes u, you just lettin niggas bone ya neck Yeh, your the problem...that caused RV to get no respect Don't know what else to say, but this kid is gay... Only reason he goes 8, is cuz his verses wont get 10's anyway All personals...dont fuckin get it...don't vote. |
Minimum posts to vote: 200
Check in by: 11-28-04 at 10:40 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
*Troop* has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-26-04 11:50 PM.
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..1st Socrates..Now u....Feel me Bitch Boy Your affiliated with comin in second best like fatkids running a Whole Lap Hawk could Hi Five James Brown & he still cant provide a Soul Clap Ya skill matches ya Counterpart Socrates no wonder u were Left Shook This Disaterous Like walking a tightrope with a Cast on your Left Foot Your constantly gettin it confused as if your one of the 1st true Vet'z Mikes finally associated with bein the Shame of Jerzz.. like the Net'z Rb's 1st Vet rejection so u came over to try 2 Discontinue ya D-Nyle Got confused with talent. since then uve been gettin clapped E-Style ....And this was 2 eazy..No effort needed....Nuff Said.. Hes alwayz talkin bout gettin Soul Clapped He reps E-Style |
This was feedback posted for *Troop*
This was quite possibly the shittiest verse iv'e ever read in my life, vote mike.
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Voted For: Mike Hawk
Shabba: I break through *Troop* armour, pound ya steal When the punches hit, stars will be around u f'real lmao this was nice 8/10 Crew will never be good, ya'll got no hopes You worse at runnin AI than the new 76'ers coach lol good job here too well done 8/10 Nobody actually likes u, you just lettin niggas bone ya neck Yeh, your the problem...that caused RV to get no respect lmao once again liking this 8/10 Don't know what else to say, but this kid is gay... <bad rhyme sceme Only reason he goes 8, is cuz his verses wont get 10's anyway lmao nice one here 9/10 Trooper: Your affiliated with comin in second best like fatkids running a Whole Lap Hawk could Hi Five James Brown & he still cant provide a Soul Clap lmao ok this was good 8/10 Ya skill matches ya Counterpart Socrates no wonder u were Left Shook This Disaterous Like walking a tightrope with a Cast on your Left Foot ok good similie but got no punch 7/10 Your constantly gettin it confused as if your one of the 1st true Vet'z Mikes finally associated with bein the Shame of Jerzz.. like the Net'z not bad I guess 7.5 Rb's 1st Vet rejection so u came over to try 2 Discontinue ya D-Nyle Got confused with talent. since then uve been gettin clapped E-Style 7/10 Troop you lost, put more effort in your battles man, this shit was lackadaisical Overall troop: 29.5/40 Overall shabba: 31/50 |
Voted For: Mike Hawk
Troop: for the first time ever you actually threw a punch and it was pretty good... your opener was your best punch well it was ur only good punch actually... u keep using your same style and its not working get personal on him research battles and look at the punches and set ups... mike hawk good verse.. opener was dope 2nd and 3rd bar were hott last bar was weak and stretched v/ MH |
Purre dr's...ya gone feel sorry 4 em huh
his structure was fucked and his punches were simple |
I seriously want to beat your ass.
In real life. You're too much of a fucking idiot to be human. How was he simple? You compared the "Netz" to jersey? Jesus Christ I almost didnt get that! His structure? Structure only matters when it comes to stretching.. ..and YOU were the one strechting! Jesus Troop, I swear, if I ever come to that little faggot ass city of your's I'll woop your fucking ass. With bats, and i'll have a ski mask on. Like you. Ya fake bitch. -E-Thug 4 Lyfe |
go play with your lil hawai'n brother
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This was feedback posted for *Troop*
i cant vote bu t that nigga mike got ripppppppppppppppppped
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Voted For: *Troop*
Your affiliated with comin in second best like fatkids running a Whole Lap Hawk could Hi Five James Brown & he still cant provide a Soul Clap 6/10…nice closer Ya skill matches ya Counterpart Socrates no wonder u were Left Shook This Disaterous Like walking a tightrope with a Cast on your Left Foot 5/10…pretty nice punch Your constantly gettin it confused as if your one of the 1st true Vet'z Mikes finally associated with bein the Shame of Jerzz.. like the Net'z 5/10…decent hea Rb's 1st Vet rejection so u came over to try 2 Discontinue ya D-Nyle Got confused with talent. since then uve been gettin clapped E-Style 6/10…nice closer nice punches…were hard & connected ok persona’s up in there…nice structure too nice flow w/ tha struct. & pretty decent vocab. I break through *Troop* armour, pound ya steal When the punches hit, stars will be around u f'real 4/10…okay last line was a no… Crew will never be good, ya'll got no hopes You worse at runnin AI than the new 76'ers coach 3/10…played… Nobody actually likes u, you just lettin niggas bone ya neck Yeh, your the problem...that caused RV to get no respect 5/10…pretty decent Don't know what else to say, but this kid is gay... Only reason he goes 8, is cuz his verses wont get 10's anyway 5/10…decent closer sum okay punches…structure was okay…vocab was decent…flow was aight…overall nice drop tho… |
Ayo....This has been going on too long.
This muthafucka Skriptz man, why do you always end up voting on my battles? I mean, we already established that we don't like each other...and this has been going on for what, 3 battles? I don't see you asking anyone to return favors...so there has to be a reason why you keep doing that...oh wait...HATE VOTES. And guess what, I'm gonna go vote on your battle right now nigga, hate, hate, hate. And explain it. Fuckin' faggot. |
stop ur damn whinin newb.............
it aint no hate vote..im just speakin da truth..................................... Pz. |
Shut the fuck up, eat a dick faggot.................
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w/e newb
dont start shit like this again... & i meant tha whinin |
Fact is...you know what you're doing...and it's gay.
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Voted For: Mike Hawk
troop good opener personal second bar was ok punch lmao 3rd line was fucking dope personal haha ender was good too nice structure and vocab as usual far from your best but still good a 6/10 mike hawk lol good personal opener also omg second bar dope fucking personal lol hahah dope shit 3rd bar was ok ender lol dope fucking shit also decent vocab and good structure 7/10 ok this was close really even in all areas but mike came with madd personals here that were dope the 76er shit hit hard as fuck as did the opener troop also had good personals but i do feel mike had slightly better ones and punches troop got all else was even but personals win over punches so my vote if mike hawk |
Voted For: Mike Hawk
Here's how I saw it I break through *Troop* armour, pound ya steal When the punches hit, stars will be around u f'real Nice punch on his name.....wasn't great, but wasn't bad Crew will never be good, ya'll got no hopes You worse at runnin AI than the new 76'ers coach Nice concept, but the sixers are actually doing better this year. You should have named one of the coaches from last year Nobody actually likes u, you just lettin niggas bone ya neck Yeh, your the problem...that caused RV to get no respect Ehh....kinda generic, not really hitting that hard either Don't know what else to say, but this kid is gay... Only reason he goes 8, is cuz his verses wont get 10's anyway Nice concept....nice punch Your affiliated with comin in second best like fatkids running a Whole Lap Hawk could Hi Five James Brown & he still cant provide a Soul Clap WOW....could you stretch it a little further? Punch wasn't really there either Ya skill matches ya Counterpart Socrates no wonder u were Left Shook This Disaterous Like walking a tightrope with a Cast on your Left Foot No real punch here either....all these comparisons are just ass, come up with a real punch Your constantly gettin it confused as if your one of the 1st true Vet'z Mikes finally associated with bein the Shame of Jerzz.. like the Net'z Another shitty punch.....this is really getting a little repetitive Rb's 1st Vet rejection so u came over to try 2 Discontinue ya D-Nyle Got confused with talent. since then uve been gettin clapped E-Style Booooo.....this was probably the worst line you had This was a pretty easy one to decide. Mike actually had a few nice punches, while Troop didn't have any.... Vote - Mike Hawk |
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Upping again............ ............ ............
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Voted For: *Troop*
ima have to go with troop, although i've seen better, n there was somethin about ya bars i didnt like, which made ur punches seem real long n drawn out. But MH only had one nice bar in his verse about the 76'rs coach so troop takes this battle holla at ya boy wit some honest votes http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=160089 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=161121 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=160091 |
Voted For: *Troop*
flow tie both had pretty good flow vocab troop mike hawks was too basic work on ur vocab structure bot h had good structure troops was a tad better lol but tie punches tropp by a mile troop had better personals and a few of mikes punches were played and callin someone gay wow kid really lol u need to come up with some new punches so vote troop for better vocab structure and punches i dont even like troop and i think he hates me but theres no denyiin he got this i think mike cam half ass props to both though |
WOW...you're fucking kidding. Every last one of my lines were a personal...you ppl cannot vote to save ya live, on the real.
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aahhh shut it up
i dropped weak and still gettin votes dont call em dr's cuz will doesnt even like me ne way uppin...and look at the content...this ni99a said your GAY |
just uppin this for you guys :)..........................
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Voted For: *Troop*
Vote: troop Opeing: troop ---nice Ending: troop Lyrics: trrop Personals: mike Hawk Punches: tied Originality: troop Wordplay: troop Structure: tied Multis: neither Troop - 7.5/10 Mike hawk - 6.5/10 Return favour with honest vote - links in sig. Peace Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
pffft....removed.................................. .
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I shoulda voted.
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This is the fact for all of your battle homo boy. |
I didnt remove yo bitch ass votes...look at em all his dr's run out and he gets scared tryin 2 erase shit
and soc i Ko'd yo sorry ass |
This was feedback posted for *Troop*
checkin pollls
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Voted For: *Troop*
I think that *Troop* got this battle because i feel that *Troop* came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt *Troop* got it they were used effectifely and were on point Mike Hawk u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to *Troop* good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to *Troop* and flow and structure i'll give to *Troop*. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
upppin 2 finish this shit....
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i already voted on this battle but can someone drop a honest vote on this one plz
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Your fucking kidding...do you see this shit? Creative? Nigga, he used a Nets lines while talking about where I live...creative? He talked about getting Soulclappin, how many times has this been used? Creative? Plz...
Then he said: Rb's 1st Vet rejection so u came over to try 2 Discontinue ya D-Nyle Got confused with talent. since then uve been gettin clapped E-Style Tell me...how is that a punch?...plz lemme know...what does that have to do with confused? No need to brag...but, look at my lines...then look at his...if you don't get it, just don't vote. |
Voted For: Mike Hawk
Mike Hawk got this fo sho.... he actually threw punches, both had personals but troops were just plain wack...your punches were wack to, lol at mike hawks closer nice play on the rules he set up and that 76's line was ok too this battle is simple who threw punches MIke Hawk Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
upppin 4 a Real vote...
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