PayDay vs mindlessrapper
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
must have explained votes

good luck mayn...~1~

Minimum posts to vote: 300

Check in by: 11-30-04 at 01:20 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

PayDay has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-27-04 01:21 PM.

mindlessrapper has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-27-04 01:33 PM.

Walks up to lil chubs and says, “You fucked up mayn, my volcano has just erupted”…and slaps him wit the mic!!!

yo check this fool…

yo CHUBBS…
I heard you laugh like “elmo” on crack, while givin yourself ya Own-69 just to Twist Ur Back…1
And how u spread Peanut butter on ya nuts while ya fat ass brother licked it up around ya ass crack…2
While your mom committed “sin” by suckin ya hairless nut sack… (pussy)…3*
Your stomach and tits sway and jiggle like stripper’s doin ass claps…4
Your best friends leave u hangin with over-handed bitch slaps…5
Pleading to them 2 wait up, like u were a paraplegic wishin to do hand claps…6
kEV(olve) from Green, to Make The Scene, but he got scared and pissed his jeans…7
U in the Means (Meens) then has u Sown-Together like Needled Seems (Seams)…8
But see Chubbs isn’t dat ya mother on her knees suckin my dick…9
And I kno u jealous u incest bitch, cause u have 2 fuck family cause u can’t get a real chick…10*
Maybe it’s because ya fuckin head is two times bigger than ya fat body…11
That lil drew didn’t even need cross hairs to lyrically tell how your nobody…12*
With a name meaning Kev “loves strip clubs” when he a preteen…13*
Chubbs’ buyin condoms thinking it will make him look older than he seems…14
But what chick wants a dick that creams faster than a pussy? U mine as well hang ya self from a tree…15
Just because you came out of one(pussy), don’t mean that ya dreams are meant to be…16

3*- committed “sin”~~~mother committed incest
10*- he has not yet had a real girlfriend…LMMFAO
12*- battled lil drew and got his ass handed to him
13*- on AIM his screen name is Kevlsc…Kev “LoveStripClubs”

mindlessrapper has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-27-04 01:34 PM.

yo I'll murder this wack cat in my lyricall flows/
god knows I'm only here to make my raps shine & glow/
how you gonna say my wording aint at all hard/
And tell me why yo real mc names a candy bar!/
so remember Mr have your guts layin on the street/
listen payday your wording and ryming skills are weak!/
so don't come ever to me wit shit like like dis^^/
I'll put a slug in your ass con't on it thta I won't miss!!//


This a friendly battle(only 6 lines) no hate lets hurry up and get this over wit!

the hell like strip clubs?? it stands for


L:like S:sniffin C:cocaine

but fo real were you get like strip clubs/ there not even called stripclubs there called gentlemens clubs!! wtf????

and dogg i'v had many a girlfriends...wtf...

I can name about 3 of the top of my head if u don't believe me ask black~magik
1.Debbie
2.Amanda
3.Daneille (member Blackmagik that short girl Debbies friend!!lmao)
4. and I'm bout to go wit Amina (lmao.....lmao.....lmMFao..)

upppppppppppppin for votes people, lets get this closed

Uppppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnn

This was feedback posted for PayDay
 

Checking Polls Since I Cant Vote On This Battle

fucking upping.....................
(even though I know who's ganna win dis!)

...upppin.............................

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checking da polls muthafuckas....................lol

lildrew facts are not true................................. no ....................................!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

Uppin In This Bitch...people With 300 Posts Please Vote This Shit...and Yo Chubbs, Why U Buggin About That Shit...i Told U No Hate, So Dont Worry About Waht Others Are Sayin...~1~

300 posts/ dogg this gonna take for eva!!!!!!!!!!!

upppin for votes in this damn thing....anyone VOTE PLEASE...lol....lets get this closed...~1~ oh and i will return the favor

Voted For: mindlessrapper

how you gonna say my wording aint at all hard/
And tell me why yo real mc names a candy bar!/
....yo homie take the personal and use it ass an actual punch
for example:
payday your a in poser, u couldn't drop two sweet lines, not by far
bitch that makes u twice as wack since u a wanna be candy bar

sweet lines/candy bar- s simple to make some wordplay up and make a punch out of it.

Removed.. PMed and said he meant to leave feedback

This was feedback posted for mindlessrapper
 

Checking the polls................................

This was feedback posted for PayDay
 

1 word...^^^damn...

just checkin polls...........

if im wack...then y did i ko...ahahaha...not that thats sayin much...a blind, def, mute, retarded fag could ko u...ahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah ahaha

that vote will b removed...that is dick ridin 2 the fullest....read the rules picture purfect..u cock...MUST EXPLAIN VOTES....and that means BOTH COCK SUCKER...anyways uppin

Voted For: PayDay

yo I'll murder this wack cat in my lyricall flows/
god knows I'm only here to make my raps shine & glow/
how you gonna say my wording aint at all hard/
And tell me why yo real mc names a candy bar!/
so remember Mr have your guts layin on the street/
listen payday your wording and ryming skills are weak!/
so don't come ever to me wit shit like like dis^^/
I'll put a slug in your ass con't on it thta I won't miss!!//
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ OK FLOW BUT DA PUNCHES WERE KINDA TOO BASIC IN MY EYES..........ELEVATE ON DEM PUNCHES.







I heard you laugh like “elmo” on crack, while givin yourself ya Own-69 just to Twist Ur Back…1
And how u spread Peanut butter on ya nuts while ya fat ass brother licked it up around ya ass crack…2
While your mom committed “sin” by suckin ya hairless nut sack… (pussy)…3*
Your stomach and tits sway and jiggle like stripper’s doin ass claps…4
Your best friends leave u hangin with over-handed bitch slaps…5
Pleading to them 2 wait up, like u were a paraplegic wishin to do hand claps…6
kEV(olve) from Green, to Make The Scene, but he got scared and pissed his jeans…7
U in the Means (Meens) then has u Sown-Together like Needled Seems (Seams)…8
But see Chubbs isn’t dat ya mother on her knees suckin my dick…9
And I kno u jealous u incest bitch, cause u have 2 fuck family cause u can’t get a real chick…10*
Maybe it’s because ya fuckin head is two times bigger than ya fat body…11
That lil drew didn’t even need cross hairs to lyrically tell how your nobody…12*
With a name meaning Kev “loves strip clubs” when he a preteen…13*
Chubbs’ buyin condoms thinking it will make him look older than he seems…14
But what chick wants a dick that creams faster than a pussy? U mine as well hang ya self from a tree…15
Just because you came out of one(pussy), don’t mean that ya dreams are meant to be…16
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ CHEA U HAD LOTS OF PUNCHES DECENT ONES SOME WERE PLAYED SOME WERE GOOD, FIX YA STRUTURE FAM......MESSING UP DA FLOW


OVERALL= MIND- YA PUNCHES WERE TOO BASIC U HAD GOOD FLOW,BUT DA PUNCHES WAS TOO BASIC NOT HARD......


PAYDAY I HAVE TO GO WITH HIM HE HAD SOME PLAYED OUT LINES BUT HE HAD SOME GOOD PUNCHES...FIX YA FLOW FAM.
MIND YA PUNCHES WERE PLAYED, PAYDAY CAME HARD WITH THEM PUNCHES SO I VOTE FOR PAYDAY CHEA

thanks for tha vote Fam...upppppppppppppin for more

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uppin for votes people...god damn....i dont understand y people wont vote

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god damn...can people vote on this shit please? upppppppppppppin for anyvote...ANY, lol...

people will you please vote this shit...come on...

ahhh come on people....vote this shit...i will return the favor...i voted so many battles, and not 1 person voted mine...WTF

Voted For: PayDay

PayDay - good spit man, good punches and your flow was sick.

Best Line - I heard you laugh like “elmo” on crack, while givin yourself ya Own-69 just to Twist Ur Back…1
And how u spread Peanut butter on ya nuts while ya fat ass brother licked it up around ya ass crack…2

Worst Line - NONE

mindlessrapper - iight spit, your flow wasnt to bad, but your punches were whack.

Best Line - NONE

Worst Line - yo I'll murder this wack cat in my lyricall flows/
god knows I'm only here to make my raps shine & glow/

OVERALL - one sided battle here, Pay took this hands down, he had the better punches and personals and his just flowed alot better. Mind you need to up your vocab and get some stronger punches in there.

Vote - PayDay

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finally...lmao...thanks for tha feedback g killaz...still uppin for more votes on this bitch...~1~...oh and i will return favors...leave me da link

uppin this shit peoples...i will return all favors...~1~

uppin this fucking shit...miller GOD DAMN...someone vote

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Voted For: PayDay

Vote: Payday

Opener: payday cos mindless came wit self-glorifiction
Closa: tied..both wack
multis: payday
lyrics: tied
vocab: payday
structure: mindless...payday urs was stretched in places
personals: payday
punches:payday

payday - 8/10
mindless - 7/10

yo no h8 but mindless ur verse felt 2 pre-written....

Voted For: PayDay

Wow Mih Mans PayDay Iss Back In Action He Had Tha Punches Tha Personals Tha Humor And His Verse Wass All Out Dope His Strukture Wass A Lil Outta Hand But It Wass Still Koo R.i.p. MindlessRapper HaHa..

/V PayDay Return Honest Vote

uppin this shit....come one i just need 1 more frigin vote...i will return all favors to...~1~

upppinn this shit for 1 more vote...i will return favors...~1~