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FlowIntelligent. 11-28-04 02:12 PM

Mag.Nif.I.Cent vs Empire
 
Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate Votes
No D/R Votes

And I Repeat No Recycling :thumbup:

And It's Also 800 Posts To Vote So You Cant Get Your Noob Friends To Vote

Minimum posts to vote: 800

Check in by: 11-29-04 at 02:12 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

System 11-29-04 01:42 AM

Empire has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-29-04 01:42 AM.

50Cal. 11-29-04 01:53 AM

Ya ficticious gimmics not hitting no chance yall rivet my verse
State loosely yous a Nas groupie from 'THA ROC'?man this is a first(1)
Ya 'Flow' was 'Intelligent' now its bullshit irrelevant nonsense
Type fag like soldiers with white flags you scared to bomb vets(2)
Still slipping ya punches is missing like drunks in bar fights
Damn rookie you a gansta pussy = mag is a hard dike
Got shooters behind ya computer?ya fucking interviews is hilliarious
Still riding on 'G's 'Balls'.........and i aint talking bout for$akens alias(3)
'Mind over body' what you mediatating?praying for saviours?
Damn lier now call in your dick riders tell um turn in they favors(4)





Explanations for those who need them-
(1)he got nas in his sig and avy but his profile says hes from 'THA ROC'
(2)his old names flow intelligent and a white flag means you surrender and want peace
(3)wordplay here g balls is forsakens alias hes riding on gs balls like mine
(4)he dickriders valor and a few others and they dickride him back and mind over body is his crew

System 11-29-04 02:08 PM

FlOw InTeLLiGeNt has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-29-04 02:08 PM.

FlowIntelligent. 11-29-04 02:19 PM

Aiight man...aint had much time but here ya go :thumbup:


I dont even like you dawg, your wack.... so fuck A.I i'll fight you all
I like to brawl.. but how you gonna whoop my ass lookin like a white ru-paul
I know this beef means alot to empire, since you only fight with text
to you its war.. but see real people have lives outside the net
so forget Empire i would melt this queer.....he's fucking worthless
stick to facts, shouldnt this cat, be washing clothes and dusting curtains
Basically Im like the repo man.... youre whole family will fear me kid
You used to want my 2 cents on your verses, now you want 2 cents period
Im the nicest bastard... to inspire slackers, biters, jackers
Because i lock the topspot even if you write it backwards*



* = topspot backwards spells topspot :thumbup: dope right

FlowIntelligent. 11-29-04 02:22 PM

those are some good fake personals lol :thumbup: its all good tho... and i dint know i was on your balls u talked shit i responded its called beef... and my crews name is mind above body ...hence the A in the middle .....M.A.B

lil C.A.L.I 11-29-04 05:15 PM

Voted For: Empire

aight u got my vote because you had way better structure and better punches mag keep it up u were very close in this one so here it is

Empire
punches:10/10
structure:9/10


mag
Structure 7/10
punches 6/10

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Premanition 11-29-04 05:49 PM

This was feedback posted for Mag.Nif.I.Cent
 
checkin the polls.......................................

Premanition 11-29-04 05:51 PM

lol that kids got "empires my homie" in his sig damn surely thats dick ridin if i ever saw it...

-1-

FlowIntelligent. 11-29-04 09:06 PM

weerd to that strobe already knows this kid empire is a fucking herb how u gonna get ya boys that love your dick to vote

Abraxas 11-29-04 09:16 PM

This was feedback posted for Empire
 
god.........
both of you was weak as hell......
mag: you were... horrible....the punches were not that good and ya personals were suck....ya flow was not good either
EMP: you were kinda.. not good either... punches ddint connect and some fake personals or attepted personals...

I give the vote to emp

50Cal. 11-30-04 06:37 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Paramik
god.........
both of you was weak as hell......
mag: you were... horrible....the punches were not that good and ya personals were suck....ya flow was not good either
EMP: you were kinda.. not good either... punches ddint connect and some fake personals or attepted personals...

I give the vote to emp

omg thats wasnt a fucking vote inadequate feedback and you aint poll your vote :cussing:

Adam 11-30-04 08:31 PM

This was feedback posted for Mag.Nif.I.Cent
 
checking the polls................................

M-Eazy 12-01-04 12:23 AM

Voted For: Empire

This was a nice battle. real talk
Flow Intelligent, you had a nice verse, came out strong, but i felt near the end, you kinda fell off with yo flow. In the last 2 barz, yo flow started to make a wide left, and got too simple, but for tha most part of yo flow, u came with hard punches, and some nice personals...yo structure was on point in this, and you didnt come with stretched lines.
Empire-You had a nice verse also. you murdered him in multies, and yo punches were pretty much average with his. Yo personals were nice too(average with his), but i gave u my vote, because you came out strong from the opener, but i think u fell off near the end also. I dont even like you that much, but no hate, you had a nice verse.
this is a hard decision. i still dont know who to vote for. yall on each others level..fuck it, empire you took it in my vote cause u had more personals and hella multies that killed him.

return tha vote with a HONEST vote in sig...

this was honest...sry FLOW INTELLIGENT...good shit empire

FlowIntelligent. 12-01-04 12:35 AM

no doubt when i voted in ya battle i said drop a honest vote its good to see theres honest kids left on this site

Alien 12-01-04 01:32 AM

This was feedback posted for Mag.Nif.I.Cent
 
checking polls............................................. ....

FlowIntelligent. 12-02-04 08:57 PM

upping for votes ...... drop a link ill return the favor

Zeke 12-04-04 08:41 PM

Voted For: Empire

C.A.L.I.:
Def. Came Hard,His Flow Came Good..You Could Feel It Flow Out..Strcture Was Very Decent..Vocabulary Was Neat Cut Clean..Punches Was On Target It Came Hard..Personals It Was Tight I Like The White Flag Shit DOPE....WordPlay Came Good And Decent......9.5/10

Flow:
Structure Very Decent Your Vocabulary Held You Back On THis One How You Kept Saying I In The First Couple Lines..Wasnt Feeling That..I Know You Could COme Better Then That Kid...Punches Was There All Hitting Hard...Personals Was Also Decent I Know You Could Of Done Better Though Over All I'll Give You A 9/10

Close Battle This Was Decent

Vote=C.A.L.I.
Return The Favor
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Kawn Flixx 12-05-04 04:18 PM

Voted For: Mag.Nif.I.Cent

shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit....flow omg damn
nice battle here....but flow wins
and don't follow me in threads emp saying its a hate vote..
but shit flow I. was tight...
that outside the net line was gold fam..
I don't really like doin line by line votes
but the only lien from flow i didn't like
was the dustin curtains line..favorite line
from empire was the hard dike line
worst was the opener...but overall i gotta say
flow wins because he had doper everything
despite empire's superior structure...

vote/flow

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Valor 12-06-04 02:20 AM

This was feedback posted for Mag.Nif.I.Cent
 
feedback this is....

a nice battle....not bad


should be close

but i wont say who i think won;)

Avalon 12-06-04 11:10 AM

This was feedback posted for Mag.Nif.I.Cent
 
I know this beef means alot to empire, since you only fight with text
to you its war.. but see real people have lives outside the net
so forget Empire i would melt this queer.....he's fucking worthless
stick to facts, shouldnt this cat, be washing clothes and dusting curtains
Basically Im like the repo man.... youre whole family will fear me kid
You used to want my 2 cents on your verses, now you want 2 cents period


vs

nothing of Empires...

word... and if I had 800 posts this would've been a vote... oh well...

Magic5 12-06-04 01:45 PM

This was feedback posted for Mag.Nif.I.Cent
 
I just wanna check the polls yo..

Holla at cha boobies.

For$akeN 12-06-04 06:36 PM

This was feedback posted for Empire
 
why is my name always in peoples verse LMFAOOOOOOO

50Cal. 12-06-04 06:39 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Avalon
I know this beef means alot to empire, since you only fight with text
to you its war.. but see real people have lives outside the net
so forget Empire i would melt this queer.....he's fucking worthless
stick to facts, shouldnt this cat, be washing clothes and dusting curtains
Basically Im like the repo man.... youre whole family will fear me kid
You used to want my 2 cents on your verses, now you want 2 cents period


vs

nothing of Empires...

word... and if I had 800 posts this would've been a vote... oh well...

thats why rb=fags straigfht homo and your audios suck and your still ducking me fag :nono:

Compose 12-06-04 09:10 PM

Voted For: Mag.Nif.I.Cent

flow-flow,wat can i say about this it was more on point...

punches-this is where flow won...both handed their punches no doubt about this but flow had funny punches and i thought they were really good......empires shit was tight too but they were mainly personals...personals are good but i prefer witty punches in text battles

personals-empire, his whole verse was basically personals and he held it down here good

so flow got this for harder and witty punches and flow...no hate

good luck
peace

Compose 12-06-04 09:13 PM

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=164313

bring a honest vote here if u got a chance.....empire dont bring no hate votes please...cuz i didnt vote for u here

thanks
peace

GangsStarShit 12-08-04 04:36 AM

Voted For: Empire

Flows Verse

I dont even like you dawg, your wack.... so fuck A.I i'll fight you all
I like to brawl.. but how you gonna whoop my ass lookin like a white ru-paul
^ Ru-Paul = Played i think u've used before you know

I know this beef means alot to empire, since you only fight with text
to you its war.. but see real people have lives outside the net
^ lol @ this soooo true

so forget Empire i would melt this queer.....he's fucking worthless
stick to facts, shouldnt this cat, be washing clothes and dusting curtains
^ this had me laughin dope punch

Basically Im like the repo man.... youre whole family will fear me kid
You used to want my 2 cents on your verses, now you want 2 cents period
^ punch good but some self-glory blah

Im the nicest bastard... to inspire slackers, biters, jackers
Because i lock the topspot even if you write it backwards
^ Closer coulda been better nice wordplay but no diss

C.A.L.I's verse

Ya ficticious gimmics not hitting no chance yall rivet my verse
State loosely yous a Nas groupie from 'THA ROC'?man this is a first
^ good opener good personal and punch

Ya 'Flow' was 'Intelligent' now its bullshit irrelevant nonsense
Type fag like soldiers with white flags you scared to bomb vets
^ good punch nice flip off his name

Still slipping ya punches is missing like drunks in bar fights
Damn rookie you a gansta pussy = mag is a hard dike
^ aight punch

Got shooters behind ya computer?ya fucking interviews is hilliarious
Still riding on 'G's 'Balls'.........and i aint talking bout for$akens alias
^ lol good personal/punch

'Mind over body' what you mediatating?praying for saviours?
Damn lier now call in your dick riders tell um turn in they favors
^ good closer aight punch

Overall
As much as i don't want to say this for fear people will call me an Empire groupie...he did get this in my opinion...Flow your verse was aight but near the end it slipped and you finished it off with self-glory...you need to re-work how you go about laying out punches because it seems like your flow and structure is aight however your punches and personals seem to lack. Empire won this through sheer whoring to be honest not the best but the personals he used did good for his verse whereas you coulda used some and probably won this.

V/C.A.L.I There's my sig be sure to RTF :thumbup:

GangsStarShit 12-08-04 10:18 AM

Remember a favour returned is a favour earned.....

Acuity 12-09-04 07:17 AM

Voted For: Mag.Nif.I.Cent

Dammmnnnnn tight battllee

Readin dis and actually goin "ooohhh" to sum linez lol

OPening: EMp killed it
Ending: Flow dat shit was hot........kinda wonderin how u thought of dat but sikness
Lyrics: tied
Vocab: Empire
Structure:tied
Flow: Flow
Multis: neither
Personals: Empire
Punches: Flow - jus cos they were funnier, better and mo original

Overall Flow- 8.5/10
Empire - 8/10

Peace

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Critic 12-09-04 08:34 AM

This was feedback posted for Mag.Nif.I.Cent
 
Dopeeeness fam come well dark in this battle, checking
the polls...

50Cal. 12-09-04 08:57 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by GangsStarShit
Remember a favour returned is a favour earned.....

leave a damn link so me and flow can vote on one of your battles :thumbup:

FlowIntelligent. 12-09-04 03:39 PM

upping for votes drop a link ill return the favor ......

Abraxas 12-09-04 09:53 PM

I just realized... that the last bar of flows is dope.. but it coulda been reworded...

Mark Greyson 12-10-04 11:45 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by C.A.L.I
thats why rb=fags straigfht homo and your audios suck and your still ducking me fag :nono:




I don't even know who the fuck you are for me to try and duck... lmao... Look kiddo if you want it with me... go ahead and post it... and I'll own you... text... or audio.

Ancel 12-10-04 09:18 PM

This was feedback posted for Mag.Nif.I.Cent
 
just uppin this for my fellow fam since i cant vote

50Cal. 12-11-04 10:36 AM

uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp ppppppppppppppppin

FlowIntelligent. 12-11-04 04:20 PM

what he said ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^....

L.E 12-11-04 10:26 PM

Voted For: Mag.Nif.I.Cent

C.A.L.I...

Ya ficticious gimmics not hitting no chance yall rivet my verse
State loosely yous a Nas groupie from 'THA ROC'?man this is a first(1)
Decent...7/10
Ya 'Flow' was 'Intelligent' now its bullshit irrelevant nonsense
Type fag like soldiers with white flags you scared to bomb vets(2)
Haha...nice...8.5/10
Still slipping ya punches is missing like drunks in bar fights
Damn rookie you a gansta pussy = mag is a hard dike
Played...5/10
Got shooters behind ya computer?ya fucking interviews is hilliarious
Still riding on 'G's 'Balls'.........and i aint talking bout for$akens alias(3)
Haha...a good personal...8/10
'Mind over body' what you mediatating?praying for saviours?
Damn lier now call in your dick riders tell um turn in they favors(4)
Hot closer. 9/10

36.5/50

Flow...

I dont even like you dawg, your wack.... so fuck A.I i'll fight you all
I like to brawl.. but how you gonna whoop my ass lookin like a white ru-paul
Nice opener...nice wordplay...8.5/10
I know this beef means alot to empire, since you only fight with text
to you its war.. but see real people have lives outside the net
Hooo whoooo...nice punch. 10/10
so forget Empire i would melt this queer.....he's fucking worthless
stick to facts, shouldnt this cat, be washing clothes and dusting curtains
Meh...4/10
Basically Im like the repo man.... youre whole family will fear me kid
You used to want my 2 cents on your verses, now you want 2 cents period
Haha made me laugh...7.5/10
Im the nicest bastard... to inspire slackers, biters, jackers
Because i lock the topspot even if you write it backwards*
Pretty dope closer...8/10

38/50

Very close battle. One of the dopest battles I have seen...both emcees are near the best of the site...very good battle. Return the favor if you havent done so already. Thanks.

Topical: hipnoticz

Punchline: logic 4 dubz

Battle: 9th Degree

Topical: Metaskriptz

50Cal. 12-11-04 10:29 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Limited Edition
Voted For: Mag.Nif.I.Cent

C.A.L.I...

Ya ficticious gimmics not hitting no chance yall rivet my verse
State loosely yous a Nas groupie from 'THA ROC'?man this is a first(1)
Decent...7/10
Ya 'Flow' was 'Intelligent' now its bullshit irrelevant nonsense
Type fag like soldiers with white flags you scared to bomb vets(2)
Haha...nice...8.5/10
Still slipping ya punches is missing like drunks in bar fights
Damn rookie you a gansta pussy = mag is a hard dike
Played...5/10
Got shooters behind ya computer?ya fucking interviews is hilliarious
Still riding on 'G's 'Balls'.........and i aint talking bout for$akens alias(3)
Haha...a good personal...8/10
'Mind over body' what you mediatating?praying for saviours?
Damn lier now call in your dick riders tell um turn in they favors(4)
Hot closer. 9/10

36.5/50

Flow...

I dont even like you dawg, your wack.... so fuck A.I i'll fight you all
I like to brawl.. but how you gonna whoop my ass lookin like a white ru-paul
Nice opener...nice wordplay...8.5/10
I know this beef means alot to empire, since you only fight with text
to you its war.. but see real people have lives outside the net
Hooo whoooo...nice punch. 10/10
so forget Empire i would melt this queer.....he's fucking worthless
stick to facts, shouldnt this cat, be washing clothes and dusting curtains
Meh...4/10
Basically Im like the repo man.... youre whole family will fear me kid
You used to want my 2 cents on your verses, now you want 2 cents period
Haha made me laugh...7.5/10
Im the nicest bastard... to inspire slackers, biters, jackers
Because i lock the topspot even if you write it backwards*
Pretty dope closer...8/10

38/50

Very close battle. One of the dopest battles I have seen...both emcees are near the best of the site...very good battle. Return the favor if you havent done so already. Thanks.

Topical: hipnoticz

Punchline: logic 4 dubz

Battle: 9th Degree

Topical: Metaskriptz

:huh: MINE ADDS UP TO 38.5 MEANING I WIN HOW YOU VOTE FOR FLOW INTELLIGENT?DID YOU MAKE A MISTAKE?IF NOT IM REMOVING THIS VOTE

FlowIntelligent. 12-11-04 10:50 PM

yours adds up to 37.5 not 38.5 count it again ... i made the same mistake but then i recounted it


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