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Logic The Goonie 11-28-04 07:43 PM

Test Your Skill.....And Whatnot
 
Me and Mike Hawk run this shit.

It's open from:
Whenever we feel like it-When we say so

Just come in here and drop battle verses or punches or whatever and we will give feedback, tell you what to work on, blah blah blah.

I'm tired of people thinking they are dope.

We are the final judges.

Drop ya shit kids.

Keith Moon 11-28-04 07:45 PM

ehrrrmmmm....

I run shit too.....

Don't forget I've dropped some isck punches in leagues....

Pop Lotty 11-28-04 07:45 PM

Word...wackasses.

MC Firetruck 11-28-04 07:46 PM

i Shall Battle One/both Of You...

Logic The Goonie 11-28-04 07:46 PM

If you write like *Troop*, Skriptz, etc.

Don't even bother.

You WILL be bashed.

MC Firetruck 11-28-04 07:47 PM

i Do Not, I'm Better Than You Think

Logic The Goonie 11-28-04 07:49 PM

Drop something then fool.

Pop Lotty 11-28-04 07:50 PM

...or shut the fuck up.

50Cal. 11-28-04 07:51 PM

read my poetry and vote in rv poet of the month

<<<<<decided to freepost with others

Logic The Goonie 11-28-04 07:51 PM

They both sound good.

MC Firetruck 11-28-04 07:51 PM

I'll have an open mic up shortly, I'll link you then...

Keith Moon 11-28-04 07:51 PM

weeerd....

E-style..

young niggaz at the pass throwing up gang signs
..blit blit blit.....was my reply

oh yeah, I wanna battle *Troop*

Logic The Goonie 11-28-04 07:52 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Empire
read my poetry and vote in rv poet of the month

<<<<<decided to freepost with others

If you want feedback you need battle verse/punches.
And you drop it IN HERE.
Plus we ain't down with voting.

50Cal. 11-28-04 07:53 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Socrates
They both sound good.

you both suck :cussing:

Kawn Flixx 11-28-04 07:55 PM

9th Degree Battle Verse

he aint even drop yet..so you can't see it in the battle..

I dropped yesterday


*Looks At 9th Degree and Laughs...*

here comes another defeat...you got a moderate lose
you should be ashamed.. 98degrees is hotter then you
the hue...of your rapbattles theremistat is probably blue
callin people hebs..but you don't even know..they just followin you
all that practice..still wack..reading backwards tutorials
Superior merged with the council..still reppin..is that a memorial?
me you should never hate..you listen..I might ponder
if you'll ever elevate'll... will be listed.. as the 9th wonder
take Socrates.. go to RB..and stay there Forever!!!
you losin reckless..you spit wack..and you never regret it


BLA! don't hurt my feelings..wordness

-Indeph

Logic The Goonie 11-28-04 07:56 PM

S'Not what you said.

Quote:
Originally Posted by Empire
YOU BETTER GET OUT OF YOUR COLD STREAK PHANTOM OR ELSE ILL HAVE TO TAKE YOU OUT OF MY TOP TEN LIST :laugh:

Kawn Flixx 11-28-04 07:57 PM

Socrates did you battle 2x4 in our tag battle yet?

tell 9th to drop his verse already...

Pop Lotty 11-28-04 08:00 PM

here comes another defeat...you got a moderate lose
you should be ashamed.. 98degrees is hotter then you
shit was wack...
the hue...of your rapbattles theremistat is probably blue
callin people hebs..but you don't even know..they just followin you
almost
all that practice..still wack..reading backwards tutorials
Superior merged with the council..still reppin..is that a memorial?
wtf...
me you should never hate..you listen..I might ponder
if you'll ever elevate'll... will be listed.. as the 9th wonder
ok
take Socrates.. go to RB..and stay there Forever!!!
you losin reckless..you spit wack..and you never regret it
no punch

Weak drop...work on some new ideas for punches...or add more of em...

Logic The Goonie 11-28-04 08:00 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by .Indeph.
9th Degree Battle Verse

he aint even drop yet..so you can't see it in the battle..

I dropped yesterday


*Looks At 9th Degree and Laughs...*
never start a verse with fag comments
here comes another defeat...you got a moderate lose
you should be ashamed.. 98degrees is hotter then you
faggotry and not good
the hue...of your rapbattles theremistat is probably blue
callin people hebs..but you don't even know..they just followin you
no
all that practice..still wack..reading backwards tutorials
Superior merged with the council..still reppin..is that a memorial?
hellllllll no
me you should never hate..you listen..I might ponder
if you'll ever elevate'll... will be listed.. as the 9th wonder
doesnt really rhyme and whack if it does
take Socrates.. go to RB..and stay there Forever!!!
you losin reckless..you spit wack..and you never regret it
NOT a punch

Basically you're at the level where you need to read the tutorials. =/

Pop Lotty 11-28-04 08:01 PM

Fuck is everyone at......

Logic The Goonie 11-28-04 08:02 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by .Indeph.
Socrates did you battle 2x4 in our tag battle yet?

tell 9th to drop his verse already...

I sent my verse to him. He should be keying soon. :)

Kawn Flixx 11-28-04 08:03 PM

BOOOOOOOOOOOO

Mike Hates Everything I do..for some reason..

and Soctrates..I dissed you..almost..

nobody posts here cuz they no what you're gonna say..

"weak drop"

Pop Lotty 11-28-04 08:04 PM

No...I was serious....

Logic The Goonie 11-28-04 08:04 PM

Actually there are some underrated people that will get props.
But most people in here will be weak.

50Cal. 11-28-04 08:07 PM

Our Intelligence Authentic still over all stupidity reins
Why else would a misdemenor syndicate call out our our name?
Elevated above all these bullshit foolish nonsensensical flows
You bitches on a porno set when i mic check and im John Holmes
Ressurected still respected what you though itd be diffrent?
You cornball ass crews still aint lifted stuck with the same gimmics
Battle please we own you like projects and white tees
Keep ya comments to yaself we got it in check like Nikes
We owned you and if not then some bitch whos exactly the same
A.I run in the stands and beat down fans like piston games


rate that

Kawn Flixx 11-28-04 08:07 PM

true that battle verse wasn't one of the best

but yaw underated that like whoa
and Mike be real

even since I was ProVerse you didn't really like me period

even when you agreed on something with me..and then when you found

out it was just me with a changed name you said "he''s a gay fucker"

and if anyone drops in here the highest they'll get is probably

"ok" but thanks for critin anyways...peace

Keith Moon 11-28-04 08:08 PM

me=gully...

so dont mess.....

Pop Lotty 11-28-04 08:09 PM

Chaos from my battle with him.

I'll Rip YA Head Off-and Shove It Up Ya Ass Untill It Reaches Ya Chest!!!.....
Then Break All Ya Ribs Untill The Doctor Says Its-Too-Complex-Too-Fix!!.....
wtf...wheres the punch?
I'll Murder You- In 1000 Different ways!!.....
And Make Your Face Like Your Spelling-Not Finished All The Way!!.....(it says jerz.....as his location)
Shit was ass...someone used this in like...june
You Think Your So Dope-But Ya Shits Really Wack!!.....
The Only Time You'll Win-A-Match..Is If The Person Doesn't WRITE BACK!!.....(checks in but doesn't drop there verse)
Wow, I've said something like this before
Your Pathetic-No One Wants You At This Site!!.....
Thats Pretty Bad-When You got Lady Fiya-Telling Ya.... You-Need-To-Take-A-Hike!!.....
LMAO....Fake-Ass-Personal...wack.
Fuck A Medic-Aid-Like Speading-Cancer-Plague!!.....
You Wouldn't Win-Even If You Were Made Too-In A Role-Playing Game!!.....
...gay.
E-Style?-I Don't Even Want To Get On That Subject!!!.....
A Whole Bunch Of Rejects-Trying To Make It Public!!!.....
wow.
Really You Just A Bitch-And I don't Got Time To Play With Little Kids!!!.....
But Why Is Ya Crew-Made For The Herbs That Got More Losses-Than-Winz!!.......(his whole crew got more losses than wins on there record)
Another fake personal...

Thats how I see it..voters saw it otherwise...

Pop Lotty 11-28-04 08:10 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by .Indeph.
true that battle verse wasn't one of the best

but yaw underated that like whoa
and Mike be real

even since I was ProVerse you didn't really like me period

even when you agreed on something with me..and then when you found

out it was just me with a changed name you said "he''s a gay fucker"

and if anyone drops in here the highest they'll get is probably

"ok" but thanks for critin anyways...peace

Ok...I didn't like you...but don't I do the same shit to everyone?
Exactly...My break down wasn't bias at all mayne.

50Cal. 11-28-04 08:11 PM

fucking rate mine dammit

Logic The Goonie 11-28-04 08:12 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Empire
Our Intelligence Authentic still over all stupidity reins
Why else would a misdemenor syndicate call out our our name?
nah
Elevated above all these bullshit foolish nonsensensical flows
You bitches on a porno set when i mic check and im John Holmes
self uppin so no
Ressurected still respected what you though itd be diffrent?
You cornball ass crews still aint lifted stuck with the same gimmics
get more complex
Battle please we own you like projects and white tees
Keep ya comments to yaself we got it in check like Nikes
Playyyyyyyyyed
We owned you and if not then some bitch whos exactly the same
A.I run in the stands and beat down fans like piston games
playyyyyyyyed

................................

50Cal. 11-28-04 08:12 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Socrates
................................

omg you hater bitch :nono:

Pop Lotty 11-28-04 08:13 PM

Our Intelligence Authentic still over all stupidity reins
Why else would a misdemenor syndicate call out our our name?
no punch...wack
Elevated above all these bullshit foolish nonsensensical flows
You bitches on a porno set when i mic check and im John Holmes
dont kno who John holmes is..
Ressurected still respected what you though itd be diffrent?
You cornball ass crews still aint lifted stuck with the same gimmics
Again, no punch
Battle please we own you like projects and white tees
Keep ya comments to yaself we got it in check like Nikes
heard it..Tony Yayo used this like in 2002
We owned you and if not then some bitch whos exactly the same
A.I run in the stands and beat down fans like piston games
I used this twice already...

All your lines were either shit Ive seen, or jus not punches...jus like indeph...work on makin up some new ideas for punches.

New Meth0d 11-28-04 08:14 PM

an old battle of mine against poison or how ever he spelled it....this was my first battle on RV

Ill humble this bitch…….. on another level we aint equals
I spit tremors leave him more unknown than sci-fi sequels
Speakin of movies……….. wasnt he was riding bank’s dick
He should be duckin this battle more than kid hockey flicks
You spelt your name wrong theres no way u could be textual
Before ya time & sad to say poison already went metrosexual
You aint dope but your words are blunted like used knifes
You aint fit for the streets you couldn’t even beat thug life
You aint up to par you battlin like the scoring is equal to golf
your losing, and just gonna not-see ya more hated than adolf
eight and one just hide your record don’t you care anymore
just king me as I jump this queen you betta check her score
but I just come complex when there is really………. no need
when you like to fuck small white kids more than virgin weed

Logic The Goonie 11-28-04 08:14 PM

It's the truth.
I don't even know who's verse that was.
So I can't be hating. =/

streetryda 11-28-04 08:14 PM

critique this diss verse i did in an OM to 2by4 and Un'touched

2 by 4 is gettin turned into 'ashes' after my 'fire' erupts...
un'touched is a fuck with no luck so he hangs on 2by4's nuts...
ducked outa our crew cuz eventually we'da knew your rhymes suck...
stuck your fag bf in our thread sayin for us to leave you alone...
owned your names and thrown ur shame back and your both now sonned...
get emericas finest out ya sig bitch you might as well be sigless...
biggest faggots in m.a.b. better of ina 'r.i.p' so ppl can 'dig it'...*
you bitches might as well be labeled a 'guch' cuz we just can figure...*
who is the 'pussy' and who is the 'ass' but ima split ya with ligatures...
signature needs to be fixed but he dont wana just cuz he paid for it...*
prolly laid his bf for it, 'popd' his cheery,'whined' now he's 'corkless'...*
uncrafty and rhaspy cuz i punked you out real fast and really nasty...
lyrically past me? nope cuz you aint dope,n ya 'candys' not 'everlastin'...*
lastly ya shanty of a twigs is not standing cuz im like the big bad wolf...
shook down ur straw town but the bricks your without,their somethin i took...


*2by4 was in the rip
*guch is between an ass and pussy
*dont wana get rid of his sig cuz he paid for it...
*you pop a wine cork get it
*everlasting gobstoppers dont last neither will their skill

thanks :thumbup:
peace~1

50Cal. 11-28-04 08:16 PM

Phantom known for nonsense rambling this where his opera ends
Like planes with one wing ya elevations frame is cursed to descend
Its pretty certain my verses is five-O like police unit
Im better but like viral e-mail letters you fail to compute it
Must be crazy but like ya avy i guess ya vision is blurry
At the most my words will roost 'Ghosts' like 'Bill Murray'
A.I name of a nerd why the password hiding ya chess secrets?
Not a vet k.oed ya text general i been exorting ya weakness
Thought you was nice saw ya OPEN MIC stopped and realized i was drunk
Shit is played if you wrote in Koolaid you couldnt come with a punch


Explanations-
real simple i koed A.Is text general archeologist the phantom of the opera for the first bar hes getting whacker for the second bar 5-0 is police meta for votes BILL MURRAY was the star of ghostbusters his crew is a.i and his avy look at it and see.Peace and all honest explained votes are returned so be honest and dont hate vote!!

Logic The Goonie 11-28-04 08:17 PM

Ill humble this bitch…….. on another level we aint equals
I spit tremors leave him more unknown than sci-fi sequels
coo
Speakin of movies……….. wasnt he was riding bank’s dick
He should be duckin this battle more than kid hockey flicks
lol
You spelt your name wrong theres no way u could be textual
Before ya time & sad to say poison already went metrosexual
no
You aint dope but your words are blunted like used knifes
You aint fit for the streets you couldn’t even beat thug life
nah
You aint up to par you battlin like the scoring is equal to golf
your losing, and just gonna not-see ya more hated than adolf
nooooooo
eight and one just hide your record don’t you care anymore
just king me as I jump this queen you betta check her score
noooooooo!
but I just come complex when there is really………. no need
when you like to fuck small white kids more than virgin weed
coo

50Cal. 11-28-04 08:17 PM

hows that bitch?

Pop Lotty 11-28-04 08:18 PM

Ill humble this bitch…….. on another level we aint equals
I spit tremors leave him more unknown than sci-fi sequels
Weak...
Speakin of movies……….. wasnt he was riding bank’s dick
He should be duckin this battle more than kid hockey flicks
lol...ok
You spelt your name wrong theres no way u could be textual
Before ya time & sad to say poison already went metrosexual
gay..links aree wack
You aint dope but your words are blunted like used knifes
You aint fit for the streets you couldn’t even beat thug life
lmao..im guessin he lost to thug life...
You aint up to par you battlin like the scoring is equal to golf
your losing, and just gonna not-see ya more hated than adolf
forced like fuck
eight and one just hide your record don’t you care anymore
just king me as I jump this queen you betta check her score
my friend used a check punch.......in 7th grade.
but I just come complex when there is really………. no need
when you like to fuck small white kids more than virgin weed
didnt really like..

One of the better verses...


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