Elusiv G vs TRUTH
 

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6 - 10
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Minimum posts to vote: 30

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TRUTH has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-28-04 08:12 PM.

try to keep up youll only end up breakin a nail/
if you were "blind" you couldnt "feel me" if i "wrote this in brail"/
your unable to defeat me how could you even consider it?/
and why the hell are you "writin your verses"... when you know you "illiterate"/
put ya "toys" away once you realize you "playin with death"/
you tried to forfiet a "TEXT BATTLE"... by "sayin you DEF"/
your raps is way "too old" thats why they "wrinkled" like jeans/
you couldnt "see me" if there was a "picture of my face" on yo screen/
after reading the shit i wrote i bet your eyelids throb/
and you left "speechless"... similar to "Silent Bob"/.....

Elusiv G has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-29-04 12:49 PM.

You claim 2 be the truth, dat has 2 be blasphomey
Cos your less believable than bill clinton's testimony//

U luvin reppin da Bay area, 4 all i care u cud be from bavaria
Cos ur damaging cali's rep, ur rhymes got niggaz in hysteria//

HAHA, dat wack rhyme shit, aint even a "simple rap diss"
so no1 else sees it, hide that shit in tha deepest abyss//

15years old, and u challengin me to a battle, u sane TRUTH?
Im a grown ass man, u still waitin 4 da fairies 2 come n take ur milk tooth//

Dis win was inevitable, y did i waste ma time on a MC who aint credible
Thinkin u cud eat dis MC was crazy, cos da Elusiv G is inedible//

Damn nigga your opener is fukin heavy....man dat shit was sik, werent feelin da rest kinda of nice lyrical shit but no real punches get me...ut damn im luvin dat 1st linw, wish i had wrote dat get me...lol....................uppin 4 hinest votes

Voted For: Elusiv G

v/elusiv G.........good battle both of u ....but G his verse had good flow an punchs an personals an mulit's he gets my vote...
truth u had sum good punchs but not really creative an no vocab jus keep droppin battles an u'll get Better.....V/Elusiv G
*RETURN THE FAVOR*

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Voted For: Elusiv G

u deff had this one from the start man u had a nice opener and closer and ur ryhmes were deff better his rhymes were wack and flow sucked urs was on keep em comin man keep uppin too u got this on ein the bad homie

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Voted For: TRUTH

Elusive G:
You claim 2 be the truth, dat has 2 be blasphomey
Cos your less believable than bill clinton's testimony//
Ehh
U luvin reppin da Bay area, 4 all i care u cud be from bavaria
Cos ur damaging cali's rep, ur rhymes got niggaz in hysteria//
Good Personal
HAHA, dat wack rhyme shit, aint even a "simple rap diss"
so no1 else sees it, hide that shit in tha deepest abyss//
alright
15years old, and u challengin me to a battle, u sane TRUTH?
Im a grown ass man, u still waitin 4 da fairies 2 come n take ur milk tooth//
aight
Dis win was inevitable, y did i waste ma time on a MC who aint credible
Thinkin u cud eat dis MC was crazy, cos da Elusiv G is inedible//
ehh ok

TRUTH:
try to keep up youll only end up breakin a nail/
if you were "blind" you couldnt "feel me" if i "wrote this in brail"/
Um yeah i had this same line pretty much in my battle
your unable to defeat me how could you even consider it?/
and why the hell are you "writin your verses"... when you know you "illiterate"/
lol funny
put ya "toys" away once you realize you "playin with death"/
you tried to forfiet a "TEXT BATTLE"... by "sayin you DEF"/
lol funny
your raps is way "too old" thats why they "wrinkled" like jeans/
you couldnt "see me" if there was a "picture of my face" on yo screen/
wack..
after reading the shit i wrote i bet your eyelids throb/
and you left "speechless"... similar to "Silent Bob"/.....
good closer

TRUTH:
Your Verse Had Me Rollin From Start To Finish.. It Was A Good Verse And One Up Elusiv G in this Battle Good Job..





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Voted For: TRUTH

Damn This Was Close
But I Have To Give This To Truth..
Truth you had a nice verse punches hit hard flow was good you just need to work on your structure get rid of the """"""" and the /////// instead of ending like / end ...

Aiight now

elusiv you had a nice verse but it didnt hit as hard as his his second line took the scheme outta whack but if he didnt come back you would took this cause his opener was weak except the first line.

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Voted For: TRUTH

You ripped him he came wit some good personals but had no real punches that I could see

Punches:TRUTH
Wordplay:TRUTH
similies:TRUTH
opener:TRUTH
closer:TRUTH

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Voted For: TRUTH

try to keep up youll only end up breakin a nail/
if you were "blind" you couldnt "feel me" if i "wrote this in brail"/
Played but still okay
your unable to defeat me how could you even consider it?/
and why the hell are you "writin your verses"... when you know you "illiterate"/
not really a punch
put ya "toys" away once you realize you "playin with death"/
you tried to forfiet a "TEXT BATTLE"... by "sayin you DEF"/
ehh no dont
your raps is way "too old" thats why they "wrinkled" like jeans/
you couldnt "see me" if there was a "picture of my face" on yo screen/
played concept
after reading the shit i wrote i bet your eyelids throb/
and you left "speechless"... similar to "Silent Bob"/.....
this was an okay punch




You claim 2 be the truth, dat has 2 be blasphomey
Cos your less believable than bill clinton's testimony//
No beucaes this is played... and you are forcing the vocabulary
U luvin reppin da Bay area, 4 all i care u cud be from bavaria
Cos ur damaging cali's rep, ur rhymes got niggaz in hysteria//
not really a punch just kinda filler line
HAHA, dat wack rhyme shit, aint even a "simple rap diss"
so no1 else sees it, hide that shit in tha deepest abyss//
umm i dont know what you was gettin at here so i would say filler again
15years old, and u challengin me to a battle, u sane TRUTH?
Im a grown ass man, u still waitin 4 da fairies 2 come n take ur milk tooth//
tryed at the punch but not really gettin anywhere
Dis win was inevitable, y did i waste ma time on a MC who aint credible
Thinkin u cud eat dis MC was crazy, cos da Elusiv G is inedible//
self glorifacation isnt a way to go


v/ truth for actually having some okay bars

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Voted For: TRUTH

truth merked G he had rhyming personallys off the fuckin map
he had a good flow stryctre was tight
best line-your unable to defeat me how could you even consider it?/
and why the hell are you "writin your verses"... when you know you "illiterate"/

This was feedback posted for Elusiv G
 

nice drop fam.......
too bad u aint wit EF no mo
but still a nice drop.....

Voted For: TRUTH

yo im goin to have to give dis one to TRUTH and heres y

TRUTH's verse
try to keep up youll only end up breakin a nail/
if you were "blind" you couldnt "feel me" if i "wrote this in brail"/
.....iight line but it didnt hit very hard.....
your unable to defeat me how could you even consider it?/
and why the hell are you "writin your verses"... when you know you "illiterate"/
.....lol i liked dat one dat one hit a lil harder than da first line....
put ya "toys" away once you realize you "playin with death"/
you tried to forfiet a "TEXT BATTLE"... by "sayin you DEF"/
......haha dat line was all around nice.......
your raps is way "too old" thats why they "wrinkled" like jeans/
you couldnt "see me" if there was a "picture of my face" on yo screen/
......dat line was pretty good its hit kinda hard....
after reading the shit i wrote i bet your eyelids throb/
and you left "speechless"... similar to "Silent Bob"/.....
.....haha i like dat line dawg good shit.....





Elusiv G's verse
You claim 2 be the truth, dat has 2 be blasphomey
Cos your less believable than bill clinton's testimony//
.....lol i liked dat line it hit harder than TRUTH's open.....
U luvin reppin da Bay area, 4 all i care u cud be from bavaria
Cos ur damaging cali's rep, ur rhymes got niggaz in hysteria//
......dat was an iight line didnt hit as hard as da other one.....
HAHA, dat wack rhyme shit, aint even a "simple rap diss"
so no1 else sees it, hide that shit in tha deepest abyss//
......dat line wasnt very good to original.....
15years old, and u challengin me to a battle, u sane TRUTH?
Im a grown ass man, u still waitin 4 da fairies 2 come n take ur milk tooth//
.......dat line didnt hit hard at all......
Dis win was inevitable, y did i waste ma time on a MC who aint credible
Thinkin u cud eat dis MC was crazy, cos da Elusiv G is inedible//
......dat line sucked no hate tho.....