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headgames vs *Troop*
Battle Rules:
8 - Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 3-0=Ko u wanted a rematch u got it Minimum posts to vote: 300 Check in by: 11-30-04 at 01:25 AM Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in. Win by 3-0 KO |
*Troop* has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-29-04 01:27 AM.
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Never noticed you .... i got the Rv's respected list & Red Names Two Dice and your Grandmother is all i need to play Head Games No 1 Realizes your Acceptance so no need 2 provide a Contact Vinci did u like Kane & Abel on No Limit u were never on Contract Your Understimated like Freckled white boys tryin 2 Pull ah Black I got on The Councils Roster because you Couldnt Pull ya Slack You couldnt Defeat me if u Duplicated yourself in Ta"Ah"Rations Head could Butcher any Good Verse..Hes a true Lyrical Assassin |
in his sig he says hes a lyrical assasssin
and Vinci is the leader of our crew |
headgames has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-29-04 03:25 PM.
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:laugh2: For a 20 year old you have a very active imagination, and sayin you retired e-looch... he was gonna retire before you battled him. *Let's troop fantasize about gettin up on fake stage and attempting to hit me with an imaginary mic* *Waits patiently as troop drops wack lines bout how i'm like celeberties and diseases.* Check it.... Like women worried bout getting fat, troop watching his back, cuz i'm sick like sars... he's wack, evertime he raps it's a criminal offense, why else is he always behind bars! Jimmy "pocket's" shit, like his lines so ya know this kid is a dummy... *troops* so poor, people break into his house and leave money! Troop's kneeling and pleading, says he hard.. but that's just d/r he's feeling... he's a savior? nah, he resurected A.I. and... ...........................got kicked out of the the fucking crew he was leading! Can't think of a punch, so just make a weak comparasin, troop rhymes bout as 'fat' as models... oh damn! wait, hold up! sorry bout that, my bad troop... was I coppying your style? Explanation: Line 2: Cuz he's only able to go 8 lines Line 3: Cuz he recycled in a battle n got dq'ed Line 6: He leads A.I. Don't vote if you don't understand something |
uppin this shit man.......................................
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uppin peeps, vote
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Voted For: *Troop*
Never noticed you .... i got the Rv's respected list & Red Names Two Dice and your Grandmother is all i need to play Head Games <Troop, hahaha, Nice shit man You couldnt Defeat me if u Duplicated yourself in Ta"Ah"Rations Head could Butcher any Good Verse..Hes a true Lyrical Assassin <<Decent man Like women worried bout getting fat, troop watching his back, cuz i'm sick like sars... he's wack, evertime he raps it's a criminal offense, why else is he always behind bars! <<No hate, but man that was weak My v/ Troop Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for headgames
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PUNCHES : HeadGames PERSONALS : HeadGames Flow: Both Wordplay: Neither Multies : Both Vokab: HeadGames Opener: HeadGames, Troop your first line was good, but then you ruined your whole verse with the grandma line.. really poor. Closer: |
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sorry but this is a little too much, this is gonna get dq'ed |
Ah Shit Accidently Hit Post.. Lemme Rebreak it down..
Closer: HeadGames, Because He ended His With A personal punch. And Troop Only Ended his with a Punch.. Headgames: Great verse overall. Troop: This wasnt your battle, he got you in almost all the categories.. please return an honest vote to a battle in my sig. thanks.. |
yea u can it was an unexplained vote
and there was no reason 4 me 2 drop good at all ...Nuff said... |
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ya, I know you didn't drop good :) lol, it's ok, I had 2 dope lines, 2 shitty ones, o well, I was rushed cuz my freind was over and kept tellin me to get my ass off the computer and play basketball
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Hey Guys Dont Forget To Return THe Favor.. I Got Some Battles That Need Closing..
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you didn't vote cuz ya don't got enough posts, up ya posts and vote again
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Voted For: headgames
structure= tie punches= headgame wordplay=neither mettas=headgame Thats the break-down man. Head games verse was more complex and versitille. His punches landed harder n eveything was better. You both need to elevate, but my advice for troop is elevate even more lol. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Haaaaaaaaaaaa...removed
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hahahahahahahahahaha lmao, aight so it's gonna be 0-0?
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uppin this vote kids
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upping again peeps, vote
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damn i knew i shouldnt of done this...Fl is so damn gay
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Werd, sorry man........ lol, i'll get 5 wins one day
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u aint gettin no 5 wins...this battle
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Voted For: *Troop*
easy win for troop pretty easy explanation.....troop used more multis in his verse....his punches hit harder and had a couple metaphors in there.....1st bar was nice...hit had as hell.....2nd bar was decent....3rd bar was decent nice personal....4th bar was pretty nice....good job using a comparison head....1st off your structure was completely fucked...it was hard as hell to read......you didnt use any multis....punches were decent....used a personal or 2 that were decent..... overall troops verse was just nicer....he used more mutlis...it was more original....his personals were better....metaphors were better....and structure was 20 times better......no hate....just my opinion |
Voted For: *Troop*
lmfao lmfao at headgames opening lol omg that was funny as fuck now the rap which was ok streched a lil punches and dises aint really hit the kicked out the group he was leading is a gansta ass diss ender was fuuny this fucking verse is hilarous as fuck but not dope cuz the puches were mad weak a 4/10 troop opener is played as fuck but a ok punch second bar was a decent personal also third bar was dope as fuck personal and punch ender was ok aint rhyme good decent punches and personals much better structure and vocab a 5/10 troop gets this with better punches and disses and a better put toghther verse but troops still a fag and his girls still ugly |
This was feedback posted for headgames
vote: headgames hands down i thought he punches and verse was more original then troops and i thought troops verse was average with played punches but nice battle here a couple of stood out line and a couple played all together good battle but head-games got this one
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lol ...u stupid kids in Fl dont kno the diff between a feedback and a vote
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i know da difference and u lost i voted but aint have enough post so i drop my vote as a feed back dick |
your 3-8.........Nuff Said
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lol n e ways uppin this..............................
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uppin this!!!..
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