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Introspect vs Socrates
Battle Rules:
6 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 11-29-04 at 06:50 AM Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in. |
Introspect has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-29-04 04:55 AM.
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like oragamics you just fold up they dont laugh cause your rhymes filled wit hoo HA'S.. legend?you dont exist like mortal-comics rhymes dont hold up like your moms bras.. im "eatin..." his rhymes "ass" like r kelly lyrically he aint screamin rape!.. beatin his ass turnin colors like contrast..cause his lips always open like paris in her tape kid couldnt flow on a water bike..his life explained in just one link... he got the def to laugh outloud by spitin on tha mic..he steady *ridin low*but forgot tha INC low riders inc was his former crew a herbish one... |
You seriously can't write 18 lines?
LMAO....... |
Socrates has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-29-04 05:44 AM.
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Intro tryin make it in the game?Will never you fuckin lame
By the time I post you'll prolly have ANOTHER new name Him and *Troop* be faggot partners, and love the same Troop is gunna make it in the game...since intro IS the game I'm done with a short verse, fuck Intro ya gettin kinda savvy How are you not gay with a close-up of men's lips in ya avy? -Soc |
This was feedback posted for Socrates
LOL ..............LOL........some more ...LOL
........Nuff Said.... |
ROFL soc ROFL wtf was that man ROFL...............
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Voted For: Introspect
Socrates Intro tryin make it in the game?Will never you fuckin lame By the time I post you'll prolly have ANOTHER new name ^ Lol nice personal in the opener Him and *Troop* be faggot partners, and love the same Troop is gunna make it in the game...since intro IS the game ^ More a diss on Troop but again another personal I'm done with a short verse, fuck Intro ya gettin kinda savvy How are you not gay with a close-up of men's lips in ya avy? ^ Gay line played punch...could've been much better Overall Soc you probably hate 6 liners as much as me it don't really let you say much but you got 2 bars of good personals and finished wit a played punch...flow & structure was good but apparantly to you they don't matter but i thought i'd comment on that rhyming was good...6.5/10 Introspect like oragamics you just fold up they dont laugh cause your rhymes filled wit hoo HA'S.. legend?you dont exist like mortal-comics rhymes dont hold up like your moms bras.. ^ 2 different rhymes in there nice punch good opener hoo ha's lmao crazy im "eatin..." his rhymes "ass" like r kelly lyrically he aint screamin rape!.. beatin his ass turnin colors like contrast..cause his lips always open like paris in her tape ^ Lol decent punch again the hidden eaten ass bit too quite good kid couldnt flow on a water bike..his life explained in just one link... he got the def to laugh outloud by spitin on tha mic..he steady *ridin low*but forgot tha INC ^ Nice closer punch/personal/wordplay good closer Overall Intro your verse had more punches personal at the end was good flow & struc was cool but Soc's was better on that account...but your disses were harder hitting the hoo ha's bit made me laugh i think you were better in this verse more punches and they were fresher...anything to work on next time would prolly be vocab but you got this so... Good battle peoples...V/Introspect |
You fucking people disgust me.
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why because their not voting for you soc?lmao chill lil man
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No.
Because they have no dignity. And neither do you. How can you sleep at night? |
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Blah @ you i don't need to explain myself i did in the link below or jus up this page...you don't like it...take it up wit Strobe... http://community.rapverse.com/showp...290&postcount=9 |
This was feedback posted for Socrates
whoa socrates got murderd...holy......................
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This was feedback posted for Socrates
jus checkin them..................................
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Voted For: Introspect
lol this battle wack wack... and socrates that has to possibly be the worst shit i have ever seen from you in RV history.... the only thing you had that worked for you was structure your verse was pretty basic... you had some dope meta's tho but the punches were elementary... introspect your structure is fucked shorten the lines... your closer was good the set up to your opener was good but the following line didnt work socrates 4/10 introspect 5.5/10 |
This was feedback posted for Socrates
checking the polls
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If somebody can find a punch in his verse I'll concede.
That's how ridicolous this is. |
soc stfu seriously mayne all you did was diss troop you had nothin after this we done beefin...
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Voted For: Introspect
intro took this.... alrite battle but neither had anything special... soc ya middle bar was quite nice but the opener n closer...blah intro, liked all of ur bars although none were fire they were all consistant so therefore u get this.... v/intro pz Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Introspect
Vote: Introspect Opening:intro Ending: socrates WordplaY: intro Multis: neither Structure: socrates Personals: intro Originality: socrates 4sho Lyrics: intro Flow: socrates Punches: intro Humour: intro Introspect - 8.5/10 Socrates - 7/10 Return favour wit an honest vote - links in sig - Peace Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Pfft, thats getting removed.
Please for god's sake somebody realize that he didn't even diss me in his verse. Jesus. |
Voted For: Introspect
intro took this.. soc it seems like u didnt try.. intro lines were stretched but better punches.. soc if u woulda tried i think u woulda had this.. but intro's punches just seem to hit harder for me..... intro ur text skills need improvement.. and soc u need to try on ur battles.. cause i know u pretty dope.. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
UPPING
And no I didn't do this shit. Thanks to my G.A. ;) |
Voted For: Socrates
Socrates: Intro tryin make it in the game?Will never you fuckin lame By the time I post you'll prolly have ANOTHER new name Nice personal. Him and *Troop* be faggot partners, and love the same Troop is gunna make it in the game...since intro IS the game lol. I'm done with a short verse, fuck Intro ya gettin kinda savvy How are you not gay with a close-up of men's lips in ya avy? another nice personal. nice verse soc.. every bar was a personal. structure was neat.. overall it was a pretty nice verse. Intro: like oragamics you just fold up they dont laugh cause your rhymes filled wit hoo HA'S.. legend?you dont exist like mortal-comics rhymes dont hold up like your moms bras.. blah.. weak. im "eatin..." his rhymes "ass" like r kelly lyrically he aint screamin rape!.. beatin his ass turnin colors like contrast..cause his lips always open like paris in her tape lol.. was a lil stretched tho. kid couldnt flow on a water bike..his life explained in just one link... he got the def to laugh outloud by spitin on tha mic..he steady *ridin low*but forgot tha INC blah.. stretched and wack. soc's was better. punches were stronger. he had some nice personals too. intro had that lri punch but it was worded badly and stretched to fuck. v/ soc |
Wait, I jus noticed Intro got banned.
LMFAO.... |
Voted For: Socrates
like oragamics you just fold up they dont laugh cause your rhymes filled wit hoo HA'S.. legend?you dont exist like mortal-comics rhymes dont hold up like your moms bras.. decent im "eatin..." his rhymes "ass" like r kelly lyrically he aint screamin rape!.. beatin his ass turnin colors like contrast..cause his lips always open like paris in her tape decent kid couldnt flow on a water bike..his life explained in just one link... he got the def to laugh outloud by spitin on tha mic..he steady *ridin low*but forgot tha INC no… Intro tryin make it in the game?Will never you fuckin lame By the time I post you'll prolly have ANOTHER new name decent Him and *Troop* be faggot partners, and love the same Troop is gunna make it in the game...since intro IS the game okay…pretty decent I'm done with a short verse, fuck Intro ya gettin kinda savvy How are you not gay with a close-up of men's lips in ya avy? good Overall I think that Soc took this Came harder in tha punches…… |
Okay, uppin even though nobody will get the personals anymore -_-
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Voted For: Socrates
overall real short battle but intro ya shit was wack.. n stretched bad homie, soc took this easily in all cats... with simple punches i might add/............. you know this is an honest vote so i see no need to explain further.... |
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