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...Wicked One... vs GangsStarShit
Battle Rules:
10 Lines No Crew Votes (For Or Against) No Recycling No Biting No Dick Riding No Hate No Unexplained Votes Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 12-02-04 at 10:18 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
...Wicked One... has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-29-04 10:21 AM.
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GangsStarShit has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-29-04 11:47 AM.
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This cats impatient won't sit back relax and observe, He's in a world of hurt from losin his eyes by readin his words, Ya not underrated ya fadin ya position heres "jus-fine", Coz since u lost 'D Fury' u've been unable to "bust-rhymes", Wicked One? u sound like a cheeky boy who constantly plays, Coz after we 'cut' this u'll be gone possibly more than a day,* So ya free & lookin but to really to me this "begs-a-question", How do you think these herbs will ever be your "Reserektion"?,* Come to mention them lyrics been a joke u dope? why u have to ask?, Like the dead they stiff & broke ya only here thanks to plaster cast, * = Links 1 & 2 & D Fury = Old Name |
It's like I'm cuttin back on calories the way I'm baking his breast...
I resort to theft when in debt, so don't let me check your threats... So for a fact I know his writtens are fraud... Because when I asked for his best 'hook'...He gave me a fishing rod... Youll plummet., this verse is in search of your jaw line... You'll end up like Kayne, only able to make beats in your off time... Yea all your rhymes are played lines but you dont deserve an original diss... His punches hit about as often as Miss Daisy switches her shifts... Whats the story mornin glory face it ur borin stories basic... Taste the competent displays of common sense ur fuckin whoary verses are wasted... |
Voted For: GangsStarShit
Aight Lemme Break It Down..... GangsStarShit: Nice Structure, Which Made Me Wanna Read It....Ya Vocab Was Pretty Gd As Well.....You Had Personal's Which Wicked 1 Did'nt Really Have....Ya Punch's Hit Kinda Hard...Same As Wicked 1....Overall:7.5/10 Wicked One: Alright Verse It Did'nt Have Personal's So Did'nt Make a Big Impact Like Gang's Did....Ya Punch's Hit As Hard as His...Ya Structure was Off...Line's Were Uneven...If you had a Better Structure scheme It woulda Been More Enjoyable To Read...Overall:6/10 Overall: GSS Win's Due To Personal's and Structure...Close But These Were The Only Factor's That Helped Me Decide..No Hate Wicked :thumbup: |
Voted For: GangsStarShit
Vote" gangstarr Lyrics - gang Personals -gangsta Punches - gangsta Wordplay: gangstarr Structure: gangsta Flow: gangsta FUK IT EVERYTIN WENT 2 GANGSTAA HE OWNED DIS BATTLE.... |
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Voted For: GangsStarShit
Heh. Aiight not a bad battle I guess. GSS I feel took it because he came with a better style. The punches basically got straight to the point and all hit decently well. Wicked one, I see the punches you were doing.. But Some were pretty weak man.. And your flow was off at points. It wasnt a bad verse.. Just didnt really edge out the win this time. V/ GSS. |
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c'mon bitches get your votes in here i need them..
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Voted For: GangsStarShit
aight this was a good battle, both of yall came hard and i respect that no doubt! breakdown right here: GSS: Good verse man, tight flow, structure helped out the flow as always, great structure, lines were pretty much even and i like centered verses. punches and personals hit well and were used proporly which is a pluss, was creative. would have liked to have seen more multis but thats aight...overall 7/10 Wicked ya shit was also good which makes this one a though vote, your structure is improving and thats good, overall flow was decent, punches and personals hit in some places but missed in others (that hurt you in this one)... was creative and again like GSS's verse i would have liked to have seen more multis but thats aight... overall 6.5/10 Wicked u almost got him homie, no hate at all dawg, u had a good drop and shit but the punches and personals is what it comes down to in this battle.... GSS u had a good verse, shit was to the point and u took this one.... like i said no hate to Wicked at all...... VOTE-GSS |
Voted For: ...Wicked One...
Wicked one : your verse was good... when i looked at it i didnt wanna read it cuz of the structure but you had some dope meta's in all of your bars and thats what made you win this battle... the fishing rod line was good and your closer was just sick as fuck one of the best lines i have seen with good wordplay and flow overall : 8.5/10 GSS: your verse was also good.. but it could have been better use more meta's and harder hitting punches also work on personals more... your structure and flow were almost perfect so you got this battle in those catagories but overall your punches lacked more than WO's overall : 7.8/10 vote: wicked one |
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Voted For: GangsStarShit
ok Gang got this hands down boys and girls Hands down he got him in every catagory from flow to punches and from punches to personals so my vote goes to Gang star shit |
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