This was a freestyle i turned into a collab...it goes by the alphabet........the narrator is the first part (me)....the mcee is the second (meta)........the story u can figure out

I moved dis shit cuz the old thread had a wack name.....uppin fo feedback.......atticus ur right it is better thasn yours lmao....hahhaha

An enygma, born with the breath of his last suffering among death of lifes cycle
Bloodshed surrounding every possiblity, tactics providing fear in spite tho
Contimplating life at its prime position, his talents tuned to every nerve of his brain
December, the month when his reign of supreme musical intellect began followed by pain
Earned his title and respect among elders through underground exploits of skills
Found a home in the shelter due to his mother using his hard earned income for crack not bills
Guaranteed nothing only granted hunger, poverty, and the right of remaining silent
Hope a concept forsaken and of none's understanding; uneducation is as common as violence
Incompetence is forced on others; as books thrown away resulting in the expansion of drug trade
Jail, or death the only alternatives to absense in illegal activities with involment since the 3rd grade
Killers living next door, life holds no personal value except gettin paid in full
Lets review once of all the undistputed lyricist whose flows shrouded with notouriety
Magnetize the mic with lyrics of steel, opposties attracting due to versatile veriaty
Neva abandoned hope but detrimental to Americas moraly correct uptight society
Opposing the system used to oppress minorities but were continueing the cycle so we wont be free
Prospects of this battle, im getting psyched, LiL G-Get Ready for a rattle
Questions, NO! he needs a sucker and a rattle, ima make this bitch a huge calatter
Regrettably like Eminem, Im getting signed if i win, “failure is just not an option”
Stupid, No Personal On Me, Some Punches I got, well just about everythin hes rockin
Times come up, I’ve Heard My Name Announced, Here It Goes Its My only Shot
Unfortunately I see Record Executives, ILL Is my Goal, Lose Is My Cannot
Veering left and right as I spit, my hands are getting sweaty already
Watchin the crowd jump and my opponents eyes gleam, I start to become steady
Xtremely Frozen, Im gunna choke, I know it, I don’t hear my self when I spit
You can see my nervousness, if I murdered someone you could tell I’m the culprit
Zenith, I Finished, Im at the highest point, nothing can fail me now, im the motha fuckin greatet


old collab with bigchase.. im battling now though.. is that good enough>?